Self-Evaluation: Muse's Blandness
: not interesting or exciting
: showing no emotion, concern, etc.
If Zorua's bland, that means I have to improve on some personality traits but make her seemed unchanged. Let's first observe what traits she has already shown.
Cheerful and Gleeful Personality
Tends to be Naive and Unlearned
Gives Exaggerated Names to Other Pokémon (Stopped Giving Random Strangers Names After Luna Told Her Off, Shown To Have Learned Her Lesson, but Still Calls Some Pokémon With Her Made-Up Titles)
Catches Onto Things Quite Quickly
Shown to be Afraid of Big Pokémon, Yet Has Sought Out Information to Overcome the Fear and Has Befriended At Least One Large Pokémon
Shown to Have Trouble Controlling Herself with Playful Attitude and Even Got Tangled Up in a Scarf Because Of It
Tends to Use Pretty for Most of Her Descriptions Because She Has Trouble Pronouncing Other Words
Shown to Have Some Fangirl Qualities Around a Hot Guy
Shown to Be Emotionally Hurt With Her Blindness
Likes to Give After Being Given
Tends to Fantasize Situations
Gets Extremely Lonely Without Others Around
Gets Overly Excited with the Small Victories
Has a Small Sense of Humor
Seems To Not Understand Friendship Fully
Is Open With Her Weaknesses, But Wants to Solve Things Herself
Extremely Formal With Others By Addressing Them By Mister/Miss
Extremely Excitable and Hyperactive
Extremely Knowledgable in Illusions, But Admits to Being Weak With Them (Though it may be possible that her illusions are weakened due to her using illusions to see.)
Seems to Have Been Bullied For Her Blindness
Seems to be Very Polite, Despite Her Hyperactive Behavior
Her Chest Fluff Has Been Growing and Has Finally Reached Around the Back of Her Neck
Plays Around With Her Illusions When In a Bad Mood
Seems to Talk About Battling A Lot, Yet Hasn't Been Shown To Battle
Wants to be a Great Adventurer
Wants to Scare Off Scary or Bad Pokémon
Illusions Seem to Not Surpass Her Height, But She Can Shrink
Alright, now from this list... What about the things that could be explained in this list and can be connected?
Playful Attitude May Be Because of Loneliness and Bullies
Fear of Heights Due to Blindness
Wants to Scare Off Scary Pokémon Due to Bullies
What can be added or improved? Let's take a few glances first at what I know can be explained later.
Her Secret Polite Attributes and Formalities
Her Lust for Bettering Herself
And now, what about things that aren't on this list?
Actions She Does Specifically (Besides Playing With Dangling Things)
So, the blandness may be settled in later dates because she's just underdeveloped at this point in time. Though, I guess maybe the blandness may also come from how much of a cliche of a character she might be since she needs more defining points to differ herself from other child characters. Her speech pattern I've already decided on, so I may have to point out more of her defining points through her actions. So, if that's the case, then my main focus to improve upon her blandness is to give her more defining details through her actions.
This has been a self-analysis by Zorquilmun.