A Nightmare within a Nightmare (unedited/unfinished)
WARNING THIS FANFIC CONTAINS BLOOD, PARTIAL GORE, AND IS A HORROR STORY.
There are many secrets in the world of Equestria and this is a tale of how one of those many secret came into the possession of a certain purple unicorn. A shadow like orb, an orb of complete darkness that seems to consume all light around it. It is this orb that holds a dark creature that was sealed away forever. Until today.
"Ugh... What happened?" Twilight said, as she woke up in a room of complete darkness. She got up and looked around, but could not find anything that would help to identify where she was.
"Why it seems my player has finally awoken!" echoed a deep and very enthusiastic voice.
"What's going on?" Twilight called out, "What is this place?"
The room then filled itself with the booming laughter. "For a pony who called me you sure are slow, but then again they all are."
Twilight was starting to get mad, "Look I don't know what you’re talking about?!"
"*sigh* Well I expected that; you ponies just don't ever seem to know what you're getting into when you touch my orb."
"Orb?" Twilight thought hard and realized that she indeed did touch an orb, a black one, before she felt her mind shutting down and passing out. "Wait so that orb brought me here?"
"Bingo! We have a winner!" the voice said taunting her. "That is correct, so now that you know, shall we begin the game?"
"Look I know I touched the orb out of curiosity and it brought me here but, I have no intention of play games, so can you send me home," Twilight asked.
"So does this mean that you forfeit?"
"Sure, whatever, just send me home." Twilight said as she waved a hoof dismissively.
"Alright then," the voice said happily, "I'll claim my prize, your body, and together we will set destruction on Equestria and if you have friends we can have them share in the pain as well! Oh and when I meet your family it will be so fun!"
Twilight froze cold, "What! No, you can't do that!"
"Then you will play the game if you don't want to lose your body," the voice stated firmly with no excuse or room to object from Twilight. Twilight was now scared, what had she gotten into? The room then stared to change from the nothingness to a cliff that overlooked a forest.
"The rules are simple, just head over to the temple over there," the forest then parted and lead a straight path to a temple in the middle, "and stand on the altar inside. While on your way to the altar you will need to find away out of the game or you will lose. I will be telling if there are any special things that you should be aware of. Oh and do be aware as there are things in here that will stop your progress. You will have to fight them, defeat them, and maybe even kill them."
"I refuse to kill!" Twilight yelled at the voice. She wasn't going to have this thing control her even if it had forced her into this 'game'. She heard more laughter and then it faded away. Twilight stood there looking around her nervously, trying to see if she can find the thing that sent her here.
"Twilight!" called a familiar voice that she knew. Twilight turned to see Rainbow Dash flying towards her.
"Rainbow! I'm so happy to see you!" Twilight ran over to hug her as she landed.
"I'm glad to see you too," Rainbow Dash said surprised to see her so clingy, "What's going on?" Before Twilight could tell Rainbow Dash about the mysterious voice and game, the voice came back and spoke, "An obstacle has appeared... Eliminate it!"
Twilight looked around but, did not see anything other than Rainbow Dash. Was this obstacle invisible? "It seems that you will need help dealing with it, so I will take control."
Twilight then felt her body start to move on its own as her head was now forced to look at Rainbow Dash. She then felt her horn being used and suddenly Rainbow Dash starts to scream in pain. Twilight quickly looked to Rainbow Dash and was horrified to find out why she was in pain.
Rainbow was being pushed to the ground and her wings were being pulled into the air by a magic aura that Twilight could identify whose aura it was. She could identify it because it was hers. She was the one who was trying to hurt Rainbow Dash's wings.
"Rainbow Dash, oh how I've long to put you in your place," Twilight felt herself say.
Rainbow Dash looked at Twilight confused as to why she would say or do this only to be with the most terrifying face she had ever seen. Her friend now adored a smile of pure insanity that made her tremble. This new Twilight was different than the one she had talked to just awhile ago, there had to be some reason that Twilight was doing this!
Rainbow Dash tried to speak but, instead screamed as her wings were forced in a way that was threatening to break them.
"You're always crashing into my library and ruining my books! You’re annoying, a jerk, and you're worthless!" Twilight could feel her heart breaking as she was forced to say this, "and I'm going to end this annoyance now!"
It happened almost in slow motion as Rainbow Dash's wings made that bone chilling crack. It was sickening, but it was not the end as Twilight felt her magic throw Rainbow Dash of the cliff. She felt the control release and she screamed out for her friend.
Twilight ran over to the edge, but Rainbow Dash had disappeared into the forest below. "Why... why... WHY!" Twilight yelled. She then heads down after Rainbow Dash to see if she is still alive.
As she gets to the forest the voice then says, "You must continue the game otherwise you will lose."
"Leave me alone! It was you who made me hurt Rainbow Dash!" she yelled.
"Even so you need to continue as another on of your obstacles' is headed your way and you don't want to kill her to do you?"
Twilight want to give whoever this was a good kick, but it was right, she had to keep moving if more of her friends were here.
As she continued into the forest the voice then said, "Beware the forest has many dangers." A bush then starts to shake which cause Twilight to jump. Out the bush jumps somepony she wish was never here... Fluttershy.
Fluttershy was breathing heavily and looked as she was running from something. "Fluttershy..." Twilight whispered wondering if she should run or help her. Fluttershy heard Twilight whisper and turned to her.
"Oh Twilight! Thank goodness I found you!" she said that she ran over to Twilight. Twilight hesitated as Fluttershy came over to hug her.
"You're a fool to come near me," Twilight felt herself saying. Fluttershy flinched for a moment; the cruelty in her voice was unusual. Why was Twilight being so mean?
"Twilight..." but before Fluttershy could say anymore a giant plant comes out of the forest. The plant then opens up showing a mouth like head with a tongue like vine that quickly grabs a hold Fluttershy.
"Oh good, it looks like I don't have to deal with you after all," Twilight smiled relieved that soon another bothering pest would be dealt with.
Fluttershy held to a tree as the vine tried to pull her to it. She was about to ask Twilight to help, when she notice something weird, she was crying. Her expression was that of hatred, but her eyes showed sadness in them.
"If there's one thing that I hate about you is that you are pathetic! You're annoying apologetic nature drives me insane!" Twilight yelled angrily. Fluttershy's grip was starting to loosen and Twilight could tell she wouldn't be able to hold on. Twilight wanted to help, but again it felt as if something was making her not move.
Twilight smiled and turned away as she said, "Well at least I won't have to hear you mumble anything anymore."
She then heard Fluttershy's grip give and then she heard her say, "It's alright Twilight, you..." She was cut off and the sound of the plant moving away.
When Twilight was able to move she turned quickly, but couldn't see or find any trace of Fluttershy. She fell to the ground in tears. "I've had enough of this! Your horrible control on me has made me lose another friend!"
The voice responded, "I don't know what you’re talking about. I never said that I was taking over and that is part of the rules."
Twilight stood up and yelled, "You're lying!"
A chuckle was heard, "Think what you want."
Her horn glowed bright as she tried to cast a detect spell so she could find out who it was that had put her through this hell. Before the image in her mind of her culprit started to come to focus, the red glowing eyes of the creature opened up and broke her spell sending her backwards to the ground.
This time the voice was not pleased and it was like each word was threatening to crush her very being with no remorse, "I hope you do not try that again, as I'll have to kill you even if it's not part of the game."
Its words were like weights being put her back pushing her to the ground crushing her as well as crushing and stopping the air from her neck. Cold fear went through Twilight's mind as she had never felt so much tremendous amount of power in just a simple act as speaking. Whoever this thing was it could easily remove her from this life if it wanted to.
"I suggest you head north as that will lead you to the temple," the voice and it's presence lift. Twilight gasped and coughed as air returned. She felt like she wanted hide in a corner from this monster and pray that someone would save her.
"I have to keep moving..." she told herself. She then ventured in the direction she was pointed to and as she continued, she soon found a clearing and the temple she had seen.
Its structure was that of a cloud like shape and four statues of demon like creatures leading to the entrance. The statues were each bear a demon of which was more hideous and cruel looking than the other statues. The statues also depicted something that made Twilight almost throw up.
Each statue showed the demons feasting or murdering ponies. One showed a pony in fear as it was held in the hands of the demon and watched another pony being torn apart by two snake like heads. Another showed the a large armored behemoth slamming it's sword like weapon on to a pony cutting it in half as well as it's collection of pony skulls tied to it's belt. A third one showed a plant like thing lift a pony with its vines into the air and bring it into it's giant maw. The last one was a skeleton like demon holding a grotesque puppet like thing that was made out of ponies sewing together.
Twilight looked to the ground to avoid looking at the statues as she passed them. She looked up to the temple to see that it too was a demon, though what it was, she could not tell. The Temple was this black mass that almost seemed to be alive. The entrance was it's mouth and up above it were blood red gemstones for it's eyes which watched the entrance.
She was thinking of maybe turning back when she heard a loud sound. She turned to see that a pair of stone like hands that had previously been just lying in the ground were closing in on her. Twilight had to go into the temple or risk being squashed. She leaped into the temple as the hands closed up the entrance and she was surrounded by darkness.
Using her horn she light up the room with its glow. There was a hallway that was leading to another room and as she entered the room a stone door appeared from behind and closed up the room. Twilight jumped and looked to the door, "It looks like I'm being forced forwards..."
The room then suddenly lit up and she heard a voice that made her turn and try to break down the door. "Oh! It's Twilight!" "Oh you're right. Twilight darling, whatever are you doing here?"
It was her other two friends, Pinkie Pie and Rarity. She had to get out the room now or she was going to have to kill them to. She charged up her magical energy and fired it at the door, but it stood there unharmed. "Twilight are you alright? You act as though you are not happy to see us," Twilight heard Rarity say.
What to do, what to do? She had to get them out of her way. "Stay away from me! I don't want you near me!" Twilight yelled, though saying that wasn't easy to do.
Suddenly a flash of pink appeared in her face and she soon saw Pinkie Pie looking at her face to face. Pinkie Pie smiled and said, "Why so glum, chum?"
"Pinkie I..." but before she could say anything, that familiar control overwhelmed her. She turned around away from Pinkie Pie and saw that Rarity was looking at her concerned. The control seemed strengthen even more making it feel as if the control was shoving her into a far and dark corner of her mind. To Twilight she was now unaware of her actions, but she could still hear hers and the other's voices.
"Buzz of you pink little pest." Twilight said.
Pinkie Pie just laughed, "It sounds like someone’s a big grumpster today," Pinkie Pie said happily and giggly.
Rarity on the other hand was shocked that Twilight would say something so mean to Pinkie. "Twilight, are feeling alright?"
Twilight smiled very creepily that it made Rarity stumble back a bit, "I will be once I get rid of you two."
"Oh! Are we going somewhere? I love trips they're so much..." Pinkie was cut of as Twilight magic grabbed and threw her hard into the wall. Rarity was about to called out to Pinkie when Twilight grab a hold of Rarity's neck with her hooves and pinned her to the wall.
Rarity let out a gasp of pain but, then was unable to say anything due to the amount of pressure being put on her neck. Twilight then moved her head closer to Rarity, "What's the matter cat got your tongue? How about I rip it out so you don't have to lecture me on my fashion!"
This was wrong so very wrong. Rarity didn't know what was wrong with Twilight and she knew that Twilight didn't intend for her to live. She was about to close her eyes when something odd caught her attention. Twilight had tears running down her eyes even though expression was so cold. Rarity could sense an overwhelming amount of sadness in those eyes that told her, that Twilight was in pain.
She needed to do something, her friend was suffering and she wasn't going to turn her back on Twilight now! Rarity moved her hooves gentle to Twilight face which caused her to freeze and ease up on Rarity's neck and allow Rarity to speak. "Please don't cry darling, I don't want to one of my good friends to be in pain," Rarity spoke with kind and gentle words.
The words hit Twilight who was still in the darkness and loosened its grip on her. Twilight ran desperately to gain control of her mind but, just as she felt control she was thrust back into the darkness. She cried out to Rarity in her mind as she felt her body give the killing blow.
Twilight's hooves had crushed Rarity's neck with a sickening amount of force that had been enhanced by her magic. She felt her body let go and she could her Rarity's body fall to the floor. "Twilight..."
Pinkie Pie had gotten up and was staring at her friend who had now just killed Rarity. "Twilight... please..." she pleaded. Twilight grabbed Pinkie with her magic and lifted her into the air.
"What's wrong Pinkie? I thought you liked playing games?" Dark Twilight said, with a grin on her face, "I'm going to play your favorite game! Pop the balloon or in this case the Pinkie Pie." Pinkie started to feel immense pressure inside her as it started to push from the inside out.
"Twili... ah... ju... ah... ile..." Pinkie was desperately trying to convey something to Twilight.
"I'm sorry I couldn't hear what that was?" Dark Twilight then loosened the pressure on Pinkie so she could speak.
Pinkie still feeling pressure spoke with a happy but, pained face, "Twilight just smile." Dark Twilight started to laugh.
"I must have crushed that tiny brain of yours for as you can see I am smiling." Pinkie shook her head and pointed to Dark Twilight's eyes.
"I don't mean you," she said kindly, "I mean the Twilight who is lost in the darkness. Twilight could not believe it, how could Pinkie know that she had been the one who was in front of her.
"Well that's a silly question, it's because I know you Twilight." Pinkie Pie said with a faint smile. Twilight felt like she was going to cry.
"Pinkie I..." she managed to say before the control was lost. Dark Twilight then continued with her magic on Pinkie Pie while sing a sadistic song. "All around Ponyville, the pink pony is annoying, she wouldn't shut up so I blew her up." Twilight screamed for her to stop.
Dark Twilight closed her eyes as a sickening pop sound was heard and warm liquid, which Twilight could assume was Pinkie’s blood. “Pop goes the Pinkie.” Dark Twilight said as her control on Twilight started to disappear. Twilight fell to the ground the tears streaming out of her eyes, but she dare not look. “Shall I lead you to the next room?” the voice said sounding sympathetic.
“Can’t I just go home? I’ve had enough...” Twilight cried and pleaded. The voice responded, “I’m sorry, but the game has not ended.” Twilight then felt her body move but she keep her eyes closed. After a while of walking the voice then said, “I have lead you to the final room, let us see how it will all end.”
Twilight opened her eyes she was in a hallway filled with gray pony statues with dark black armor each holding a spear. Up ahead Twilight could see a lite room with a reddish glow to it. “Twilight! Thank Celestia I caught up to you.” Twilight wished she had never had heard her voice, Applejack’s voice. Without looking Twilight then yelled out, “STAY AWAY FROM ME!”
Applejack continued to approach Twilight slowly, “It’s alright sugarcube.”
Twilight ran over to one of the statue and grabbed a spear that the statute held with her magic. She then turned to Applejack with her eyes closed and the spear pointed at Applejack. “Stay back Applejack! I’ll kill you if you get any closer!” Twilight yelled, though her threat sounded more like a plea.
Applejack continued to move closer and Twilight knew she wouldn’t stop her advance. She had to make her stay away. Twilight stabbed at the direction of Applejack with the spear hoping it would stop her, but something else happened. Twilight felt the spear hit something... no... she didn’t...
She then felt Applejack wrap her hooves around Twilight’s head and bring it closer to her body. Twilight opened her eyes to see her head was now resting in Applejack’s chest and Applejack petting her head slowly. “It’s okay Twilight... you don’t have to be scared or sad anymore...” she said though she seemed to be having trouble speaking.
It was then that Twilight noticed that the spear had gone into Applejack’s side. Before Twilight could say anything Applejack covered Twilight’s mouth with her hooves. “I’ve been following you and I know what you’ve done.” Twilight tensed up, ‘she knows?!’ “It’s okay,” Applejack said sweetly, “I know you didn’t do it. I know that because I know you Twilight. I know you... would never do anything to hurt us Twi... uh”
Applejack’s grip loosened as she fell to the floor Twilight quickly went to Applejack. “Applejack! The spear making you lose blood! I-I’ll get it out!”
“Twilight... It’s okay...” Applejack said putting her hoof on Twilight, “I need you... to do... something for me.” Twilight didn’t want this, she didn’t want her to die, but the spear was buried in deep. If she pulled the spear out, it could make the situation worse.
“Applejack please don’t talk... I’ll get...” Twilight was interrupted as Applejack said, “Twilight! *cough* *cough* please... just do this... for me... wake up.” Twilight looked at her confused, what did she mean wake up? Applejack cough more violently Twilight getting more worried.
“Applejack, stop it’s alright just rest I’ll think of something! Don’t die! Don’t die!” Twilight said panicking, she had no idea what to do or what spell could help her but, she had to think of something. Applejack hoof still on Twilight started to loosen. “Please... wake up... ple... wake... up...”
It was then that Applejack’s hoof fell to the ground and her eyes closed. Twilight scared called out her name, “Applejack!” She called out her name over and over with no response.
This was too much, Twilight collapsed on the ground in tears crying harder than she had ever cried. She had lost all her friends because of this stupid game. If should could have fight the control she could have saved them or stop herself from...
Twilight looked up fury on her face. It was this creatures fault! It made her kill her friends and watch them die! "You made me kill them! You made this horrible game! YOU HORRID MONSTER!"
There was no response at first, but when the voice did respond it was laughing. "I have no idea what you are talking about. I did create this game and I did have you kill three of your friends, but the other two was your own doing."
"YOU LIE!" Twilight yelled. The voice responds back in tone so fierce that shakes the ground and makes Twilight cower in fear. "I DO NOT LIE LITTLE INSECT! I have played by the rules of the game and have not taken control of you without a warning or telling you. You watched that yellow Pegasus be dragged off, you said all those things to your friends even the rainbow one, and lastly," the voice paused and changed from annoyed to happy, "you killed the last pony with your own hooves."
"No..." Twilight said, realizing the voice was right.
"In fact that was so much fun that I think I'll add more obstacles," the voice said happily.
Twilight cried out, fear and tears in her eyes, "No! No more! No more!"
"Then let's end this shall we?" Torches in the hallway lite up leading to the room at the end of the hallway. Twilight followed and walked into a giant room that looked to be a stadium of some sort and in the middle of the room was stairs leading to some sort of stand.
"Head on up and finish this little game of ours." She started to climb the steps one by one until she had reached the top and realized what the stand was. It was a gallow and in the middle was a nose hanging there. Did the voice mean to... "yes, you're going to hang yourself."
Her mind became a complete mess of thoughts protesting against this, but there was one thing that battled those thoughts and was slowly winning. "It's your fault that your friends are dead and you know it."
A tear streamed from her eyes, the voice was right. She did kill them. It was her magic that ended their lives. "I never wanted to kill them," she choked out the words.
"You can make it up to them," the voice said and Twilight felt as if she was starting to be swallowed up in its words.
"How?" She asked afraid but, desperate for an answer.
"Your answer is in front of you."
Twilight looked at the noose swing back and forth as if beckoning her. She stepped up to the noose and put her head through the noose. Then with the glow of her horn there was a click and the floor gave away.
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Twilight's eyes opened to see a worried Spike by her side. "Twilight! Oh thank Celestial!" Spike said giving Twilight a hug. She smiled and hugged Spike back, "It's alright Spike I'm fine now." Twilight looked around to see she was in the Library part of her house.
The two then heard a knock on the door. "Oh right! I wrote Princess Celestia since you weren't moving for hours," he said and ran over to the door. Spike opened the door and there stood Celestial looking as clam and poised as ever. She looked at Twilight still lying on the floor and the black orb on the table next to her.
"Spike do you mind going and telling Twilight's friends that she's alright. I'll watch Twilight." Celestial commanded. Spike nodded and head out the door and Celestial walked in and shut the door.
"You show up after so many years just to cause more havoc. Why are you here!?" Celestial said staring straight at Twilight with demanding glare.
Twilight started to laugh her normal voice slowly changing to a demonic male voice. "Oh dear Celestial, however did you know it was me?" The voice said Twilight's eyes now turning pure black.
"I asked why you are here."
Twilight shrugged, "I personally have no idea why I'm here but, I know why I'm out of the castle. A blue unicorn with such a wonderful grudge decided to take me from the castle.
Celestial pondered what unicorn he was talking about but, had no time to focus on that to long. Twilight's body was starting to glow with dark energies. "Your student is quite intelligent, it's just a shame she never realized she could just win by waking up."
"I'm pretty sure you used her fears to win your game like always."
Twilight just laughed, "Of course I did! What game would it be without killing the ones you love? What's even greater is she thinks she really has killed them. She will continue to blame herself forever and even if I gain a new body she will still be stuck in that state of regret."
"Not if I can help it!" Celestial said with her horn glowing bright. A beam shot out from her horn at Twilight but, was blocked by a shield of darkness that was created from the aura surrounding Twilight. Twilight horn started to glow black as the voice spoke, "You should know that your magic is no match for the most powerful unicorn in Equestrian!"
Celestia looked around to see that the room had been engulfed in darkness. She looked back to Twilight whose eyes glowed white and the dark aura glowed a dark purple. Twilight smiled, "It's time that you and I re-unite together and have some fun with your loyal subjects!"
Celestia stood her ground, "You will not control me. I have played your game before and defeated you and I will defeat you again."
Twilight laughed, "This time you will fall! I finally have something to bring you to your knees and it just so happens to be in this very unicorn."
The white alicorn who had faced many evils and smite many foes had never showed any signs of fear, till now. She backed up looking for an escape route, but of course all her exits were blocked. "YOU'RE MINE!" Twilight shouted as a mass of purple aura shot from Twilight and entered Celestial.
The world and time went silent the darkness dissipated from the room and Twilight fell to the ground released from her captor. The controller of the sun stood there as if a statue to the world. A gentle light started to shine from the alicorns body as she slowly opened her eyes. "It's good to be back," a smile forming on her lips.