REVISED FINAL FILM
Upon revision of the final film, it became apparent that areas of it were stronger than others - the strong areas being the smaller frames. These sections of the film abstracted the imagery further and lends itself better to the ‘Fine Art’ section of the brief.
The film (prior to projection) was therefore re-edited so that it contained a substantial amount more smaller frames. When projecting and re-filming the final film, I decided to keep the hair of the subject tied back as apposed to hanging loose like before so that the neutral expressions of the face could be seen clearer.
Overall, I am extremely happy with the final revised film and feel that it has been made even stronger than before.












