I have nothing to say for myself except that maybe Gale shouldâve taken that dollar bill⊠also this is just me going bananas and trying new brushes and having feelings, Iâm sorry, youâre welcome.
Hi @artisttess you inspired me to write a little something!
Based on Chocolate - read below the cut or on AO3 if you prefer!
Gale sighed as he spooned the last mouthful of something that might once have been turnips and potatoes into his mouth. It was bad. Rotten. Occasionally, the soft texture of a maggot came through the bready, wheaty flavour of mouldy root vegetables. He could hardly stand it, when his teeth would slide through one. The first time heâd eaten a worm, heâd thrown up. But they were all getting used to it â getting used to the reality that they either ate this, or starved. And since John had come back, Gale didnât want to starve anymore. John was counting on him. He needed to pull through, even if that meant stomaching a maggot or two now and then.
That didnât make the taste any better, though. Didnât make the nausea any less. Especially when Galeâs stomach had felt unsettled and on edge all day. Heâd never been good with eating, and trying to force-feed himself something that so deeply disagreed with him had left him gagging over the pits they called toilets in the Stalag more than once since heâd been shot down.
He was trying to keep that from John. His not eating regularly had been easier to hide at Thorpe Abbotts. Now, with them all piled on top of one another like so many pickled fish, trying to eat regularly had Gale tied up in knots, sick with the normalcy.
As they lined up for their after-lunch appel, John sidled up next to Gale. He had a look on his face, twisted and sour. There were still bruises fading around his eye. Neither of them had brought them up yet. Like everything, John would tell Gale when he was ready â if he ever was.
âYouâre looking green there, Major. Lunch not up to your standards?â
Gale grimaced. He didnât like Johnâs snide remarks, his commentary â like he was a sports narrator in a box, high above the action, rather than on the ground, living it with the rest of them. He didnât understand why John couldnât acknowledge that this was their reality now. That it wasnât changing. That he couldnât just separate himself from it the way he drank to separate himself from his problems in England and America.Â
Gale knew John had been trying to trade for hooch. He hadnât brought it up. It didnât feel worth his effort, not when he knew John would do whatever he wanted anyway.
âNot really sure what you were expecting, John,â he replied, unsure, as usual, how to deal with Bucky when he was like this, âNot like theyâre trying to keep us fit and healthy in here. Gotta eat what we can, when we can. Doesnât really matter whether or not itâs to our taste.â
John gave a snarling sort of laugh, and stared down at his boots. Shook his head like he was surprised and disappointed. Gale felt his heart sink. He hated this, hated the way John looked at him like he was some sort of disappointment for trying to survive. It made a sick feeling rise in his throat, anger curdling with the rotten leftovers of his lunch in his mouth.
âDunno why youâre acting like this, John,â Gale implored, hurting but also angry and unsure how to balance those two emotions at once, especially in this place, as hard-eyed German soldiers worked their way down lines of bedraggled men with dogs snarling at their feet, âLike we get a choice. Gotta make do with what we got, donât we? AndâŠand it would really help me. With the boys, I mean. If I had your support. If I knew I could count on you to back me up, yâknow?â
He saw John bristle. Saw his hackles raise like he was a dog, greasy brown curls practically rising off the back of his neck. When he turned, his eyes were flinty and his expression was closed, empty, veiled in some sort of emotion that Gale couldnât possibly discern.
âYou think thatâs what this is, Buck?â John said, a sad sort of detachment in his voice, like he was talking to someone who wasnât really there, âThink this is me not supportinâ you? Takinâ this all too light? Did it ever occur to you, huh, that Iâm trying to do what I goddamned well have to do to survive? That I feel like walkinâ into that fence and lettinâ those Krauts shoot me at least once a day, but I canât, âcause I got you, and I need to support you? And in order to survive, maybe that means goinâ a little screwy in the head, so I donât fucking let them put a bullet in my skull?â
For a moment, Gale just stared. A sharp, horrible pain stabbed through his gut, worse than any hurt from eating rotten food. He nearly doubled over from it, the air sucked from his chest the way it had been when heâd bailed out of his fort.Â
John looked at him, cold triumph in his eyes. Victory, for making cool, calm, collected Major Cleven stutter. For stealing the air from his lungs, the warmth from his soul. His face crinkled, a cruel version of his usual smile.Â
Shame filled Gale from his frozen toes to his head. Something hot prickled at his eyes. He was so nauseated suddenly, so sick to his stomach. Waves of hot and cold washed over him in turns, and the sky was spinning before him in a cruel vortex. Dogs barked, someone shouted. He couldnât find it in himself to care, because he was supposed to be protecting his men, and with John, heâd failed.
The moment they were told to fall out, Gale stumbled to the side, making for the block of toilets on the east end of the compound as fast as his shaky legs could take him. He swallowed back bile until he didnât need to anymore. Rotten potatoes and half-digested maggots splattered into the hole at his feet. He couldnât even smell it over the reek of shit and piss and thousands of men eating and digesting in close quarters.
When he was done, he looked up. Scanned around the open lavatory. It was empty.Â
Foolishly, heâd hoped there would be footsteps behind him. A hand, big and warm, comforting on his shoulder while he lost nutrients his failing body couldnât afford to lose. But the room was barren, vacant. Not even the sound of a few rats could overlay the sounds of Galeâs hiccupping misery, the hole of failure boring into the centre of him.Â
Rubbing a hand over his face, not bothering to wash his hands, he stumbled out into the cold. Pulled his coat close around him, shivering, feeling suddenly feverish against the cold as he made his way back to the hut. John wouldnât be waiting for him, he knew. But he couldnât find it in himself to care.
When he made his way back, he just slumped on his bed. He still felt sick and miserable, cheeks flushed and eyelids heavy with exhaustion. It took very little time for him to sink into a restless, fitful sleep.
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âHey, Buck,â a voice filtered in Gale's subconscious â dark thoughts and twisted images of a fort falling, dark curls mixed with blood in an empty field, a noose around a pale throat that wasnât his own, âBuck, wake up. Gale!â
His given name made him start. Gasping, eyes teary, he jolted upright in his bunk.
The light had shifted from day to night. Heâd slept the day away. The boys had needed him, and instead heâd curled away from his responsibilities. Guilt panged through his gut, and he frowned, rubbing a hand over his face and his sweaty forehead. Someone had slid a hat over his head. It smelled like greasy hair and cigarette smoke.Â
âGale,â the voice said again, reminding him suddenly of why heâd woken up in the first place, âHey, you awake in there? You sick or somethinâ? Need me to call the doc?â
Bucky. Gale shook his head. He was tired. Sad. Sick to his stomach, yes, but so was everyone. Dysentery, probably food poisoning. He wasnât sick in any way a doctor could fix.
âIâm fine, John.â He said shortly, sitting the rest of the way up and planting his socked feet on the floor. The tan fabric of his long underwear was slowly going grey from months of not being washed. At one time, it wouldâve drive him mad. Now, Gale couldnât find it in himself to care.Â
The mattress dipped next to him. Surprised, Gale looked over to find Johnâs bulky body hunched next to him. He wasnât wearing his hat. His face was red, scrunched up with something that approximated shame. Shuffling his boots back and forth on the floor, rubbing his hand over his chin in that awkward way he did when he was searching for the right words. It didnât happen very often. Bucky always had the right words. It was Gale who was left wanting.Â
They sat for a moment, before John stood back up. Gale frowned.
âYou want something, Bucky?â
âIâŠah. I got you something. I-Iâm sorry, Gale. I shouldnâtâa said what I did earlier, at appel. I know youâre trying so hard. Hell, I see you trying. See you fallinâ apart when youâre trying to convince the guys you got it together. This place us driving us all crazy. But I shouldnât have said that to you. You ainât trying to hurt me. JustâŠsometimes I feel like I canât be as good as you. Canât be goddamned Major Cleven, when Iâm a major too. Just the worse one. The one no one goes to, âcause heâs losing his marbles, and his best friend is trying to keep him from walking up to that fence.â
Gale just cocked his head. Sleep still had him in its clutches, and he felt hazy and sad and confused. Wasnât John angry at him?
But then John produced a small golden bundle from his pocket. Held it out before him like it was more valuable than gold. And really, it was â when Gale saw the label, he couldnât contain a small gasp of wonder. He hadnât seen that in almost half a year.Â
He reached out, hardly daring to hope. Almost closed his fingers around Johnâs precious cargo.Â
And then, he wondered. What had John done for that? For something so rare, so precious? What had he given up?Â
Gale recoiled and shook his head. He couldnât take that. Not knowing the sacrifices John mustâve made. He couldnât do that.
Johnâs face fell. He prodded his gift closer, frowning.Â
âCome on, Buck. I know for a fact that lunch left a bad aftertaste. Take it.â
Gale was frozen. Entranced, almost, by the golden wrapper. It was better than Christmas, after so many months of nothing but rotten turnips and potatoes; Red Cross packages picked over for anything better before they ever got to the men.
In the end, he was weak. Johnâs eyes were big and apologetic, and Galeâs stomach hurt for something better, something more. He reached out and took it. Read those words â chocolate â embossed on the shining paper.
âJesus, John,â he breathed, âWhat the hell did you trade for this?â
Bashful, John shrugged. Handed the food over like not even a little bit of him wanted to keep it, squirrel it away for himself.Â
âCigarettes,â he said easily, a smile twitching on his face, hoping for forgiveness, âBeen trying to quit anyways. You forgive me, doll?â
Gale tore open the wrapper carefully, broke off the smallest chunk of dark, chalky chocolate. He placed it on his tongue and let it melt in the warmth there. It was sweet, dark, succulent. Oozing across his bereft tastebuds and indulging every single one. He couldnât help the delighted moan that escaped his mouth, the way his head threw back and his eyes shut in ecstasy. It was sinful. Wonderful. It was everything.Â
When he opened his eyes again, carefully folding the wrapper back up and stuffing it into the little hole of his straw mattress, John was waiting. His brow was wrinkled, concerned, and Gale realized he hadnât given him an answer yet.Â
âI forgive you, Bucky.â He said softly. Wrapped his arms around John when he was sure no one was going to come barging through the door. He was warm and real.
Please, Gale thought, though he didnât dare voice it out loud, donât you run for that fence. Donât you dare leave me behind, John Egan.Â
âThe interrogation wasnât a usual one. They took us into a room. Sat us each into a chair. They asked questions. Then they pulled out the knife.â
This is random but your art always reminds me a little bit of Mike Mignola. Like I think if he drew yaoi it would look something like your work. I mean this as a compliment of course youâre obviously incredibly talented đ
Uooo that makes me so happy. Only recently, around half a year ago I would say, have I started pursuing black flat spaces in line-art, before that I was kind of scared to use contrast and be overall âedgyâ but when I tried to sharpen it a bit I realized it was such a EFing satisfying thing to do. And the coloring and rendering is like spreading butterrr, so delicate đ
I love the way you handle colours! It would be so interesting to see this scene (or the closeup of Gale's face that I couldnât find) in your art style, if you feel inspired:
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