Public Eye - Fit of Conscience (Season 7 Episode 12; 24 March 1975)
Fit of Conscience opens on a grim note as a tower block of flats suddenly collapses (depicted with plenty of camera shaking and objects falling out of cupboards), leading to several deaths and injuries. The sudden cut after to the quieter, more banal surroundings of a council office after the panic and screaming of this first scene is rather stark as public servants Harris (Michael Spice) and John Friendly (Paul Kermack) meet with builder Arthur Brightwell (Kevin Brennan) and architect Dick Overton (Peter Welch) to form a plan of action on how to deal with the imminent public inquiry into the collapse.
However, Friendly seems rather-guilt stricken about the whole affair and hires Frank Marker (Alfred Burke) to track down George Berry (Griffith Jones), a fellow public servant also involved with the construction of the collapsed tower block who has since retired and moved home. Marker is unsure of what exactly Friendly's motivations are, since while Friendly apparently wants to testify to the public inquiry with damning evidence implicating him and Berry in a corruption scandal with Brightwell, Marker is aware that by helping Friendly, he's essentially helping him and Berry condemn themselves in court.
After Friendly finds Berry and learns that Berry would rather forget the whole thing, it turns out that Berry is conspiring with Friendly's wife Evelyn (Margaret Whiting), having had an affair with her several years before while Marker learns that Berry's rather expensive flat has effectively been gifted to him by Brightwell. Friendly then wants Marker to find out if like him, Berry's corruption surrounding the tower block was an isolated act or if he's been consistently corrupt for longer, and with Berry preparing to leave the country with Evelyn, it seems he has a lot to hide…
Written by David Ambrose, his only Public Eye script, this is a complex tale with a lot going on. Although flawed, this episode's qualities are also undeniable, being a scathing critique of corruption in local politics, which in this case has led to fatal repercussions. Indeed, the initial scene in the council office appears as though Harris and Brightwell particularly want to cover up the truth, concerned more what the inquiry means for their own futures rather than the consequences of their actions.
John Friendly's motivations surrounding his apparent desire to be a whistleblower are complex, multi-facted and also somewhat confusing. On the surface, it seems like he wants to do the right thing, prepared to blow the whistle even at personal cost to himself since both he and Berry are implicated in his evidence. While Berry seems greedier, Friendly's corruption was driven more by desperation, needing the money offered by Brightwell to help pay his son's gambling debts, however his son has since sadly died in a car accident and his death has haunted Friendly ever since.
Yet, as Marker observes, Friendly may really be reluctant to testify to the inquiry since he already has the evidence and seems to have gone cold on the idea since visiting Berry and failing to convince him to join him in testifying. When Marker challenges Friendly on what he really wants to do, he sums up Friendly's apparent reluctance in this fine statement that has long stuck with me for it's searing honesty: "People who want to do something generally just do it. They don't hunt about for reasons not to".
Another factor involved is Berry's previous affair with Evelyn, suggesting Friendly may want revenge against Berry as well, he is certainly bitter with Berry about the affair and unhappy that afterwards, Evelyn focused more on their son than him. However, given Friendly's actions such as talking with Berry to convince him to also testify and also the knowledge that he would go down with Berry as well for his role in the corruption, a revenge motive wouldn't make sense. In fact, while most of Friendly's motivations are well-written, the factor of Eveleyn's affair seems to only unnecessarily confuse things.
Evelyn's role is also interesting, particularly as her loyalties seem uncertain. Though her affair with Berry on the surface appears finished, she's still in contact with him and seems prepared to elope with him to South Africa. She tries to convince Friendly that he's only destroying himself and feeling guilty when he mentions to her that he's planning to testify, playing the part of the concerned wife well. She also tells Marker as much when she visits him in his office, trying to convince him that Friendly's disturbed and asking Marker to stop him testifying. Evelyn's double dealing is superbly conveyed by Margaret Whiting's performance, arguably the best of the guest cast here.
Griffith Jones is also good as George Berry, who is unapologetically corrupt and regrets nothing despite his role in the tower block disaster. When Evelyn brings Friendly's file containing the evidence that will implicate both men, Berry wastes no time in destroying it. Preparing to flee to South Africa, Berry also self-satisfyingly boasts that the police have nothing on him and that there's nothing anyone can do to stop him leaving. Indeed, when Marker confronts him, we know that Berry will ultimately escape justice and that there's nothing Marker can do to stop his escape. It's also in these final scenes that we finally see Friendly at the inquiry, proving once and for all whether or not he will have the courage to say anything there.
Although much of the writing surrounding Friendly, Evelyn and Berry is good, sadly Marker's role here isn't as good since he doesn't get too much to do here and most of his scenes seem to involve him wondering about what exactly Friendly is trying to do. Indeed, his character is pretty much sidelined in favour of the guest cast mainly and while Alfred Burke is still excellent, it's a smaller role for Marker than he is worthy of.
The scenes set at the public inquiry that Marker gets nowhere near to are also largely unnecessary and focus too much on uninteresting details, particularly when Dr. Stoddart (Patricia Garwood) gives a long, technical speech about the type of concrete used in the tower block and how it may have caused the collapse. Her character is just one of many uninteresting supporting characters in a rather large cast here, many of whom get little to do and are saddled with forgettable, perfunctory dialogue. This episode would definitely have benefitted from trimming a number of the superfluous characters and having a tighter focus on Marker, Friendly, Evelyn and Berry.
Overall, Fit of Conscience definitely excels in it's harsh criticism of local corruption and the complexities surrounding Friendly's motivations are also interesting. However, this tale is also at times unnecessarily complicated and suffers from too many superfluous characters, seeming to have almost been written as a non-Public Eye script as Marker doesn't get much to do. Not one of Season 7's better episodes but still interesting enough to be worth a look.