Long ass essay but honestly you’re great
Author I read your new chapter and MY GOODNESS it was so good. It really shows us Sergio’s first gay awakening but I do wonder will Teddy ever come back or make an appearance in the story again or will Sergio finally open to Luka about why he became homophobic 🤔 i wonder how Luka’s backstory is gonna be like ik it’s probably gonna be just as sad as Sergio’s 😔 I’m so not ready (but I am) This story opened so many doors for me like exploration and sexuality n stuff. Author you must keep writing 🥹✌🏿
Ps. Off topic but I feel like this could be really good scene 👀
this is bit freaky but like maybe in the proceeding chapters Sergio and Luka should have this spicy scene since u mentioned something in the book that awakened an idea. So I turned on my sixth sense. I can’t remember which chapter but I remember it was in Luka POV and it was like “i wishI tie up Sergio to my bed so he could stay with me for ever” or something like that and stuff so I thought I was like how about Lukas dream come true and there is a scene where he ties him up to the bed and he takes control of everything 😏👀
I love your writing author it’s so good 😊 your such an amazing writer and I’m sorry if this sounds like I’m glazing you (it’s bc I am) but like seriously you’re such a great writer bro you’ve honestly inspired me to start writing myself ❤️
Firstly, Thank you so much ❤️ I don’t know what I did to deserve such a kind message 😭 I’ve been reading it over and over trying to put something together
I really enjoyed diving into Sergio’s past in this chapter, it’s something I’ve been working on since the start of this fic. I think the main idea was that Sergio would be struggling from a very early age. I wanted to explore the idea where Sergio has always had feelings for other boys, as early as childhood. Even prior to Teddy.
Sergio is always lying, even in the privacy of his own thoughts. He’s an unreliable narrator, so don’t take everything he says so literally lol 😭 It was a bit tricky trying to convey that. He’s quite frustrating to write, so being inside his head for too long gets exhausting. Sergio’s environment definitely shaped him to what he is today. Religious indoctrination and his father played a major role for how he turned out. That much is obvious.
And yes, I definitely have bigger plans for Teddy! He’s too much of a good character to get rid of. So we’ll definitely see more of him as the story progresses.
As for Luka, his backstory is in the works! 😊 A whole lot of messed up shit coming your way, so buckle up 😭
Also it makes me so happy to hear this story has opened up doors for you to explore your sexuality and identity. I started this fic just as a silly way to express my own thoughts regarding these topics. Not in a million years did I think someone would feel this way about this fuckass fic 💀💀
LMAOO I’m freaky too don’t worry 😛😛😭 I’ve been thinking of a similar scene, but I’ve saved it for a special occasion 😏 I do love me some bossy Luka and service top Sergio 😩
Lastly, you saying I’ve inspired you to start writing is the highest compliment a writer could ever receive 😭😭 You keep referring to me as “author” like bro I just write silly little fics on the internet, there’s no need 😭 it sounds too formal loool 😭
Thank you so much, your comment is the reason why I keep writing in the first place 🫂 I will be rereading your comment whenever I need a dose of dopamine and a kick of motivation (glazing you back) I look forward to seeing you write ❤️
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