Return of the Jedi by Chibi and Pine
This is the first book in a trilogy following the adventures of Din Djarin and Luke Skywalker in a modern retelling of Return of the Jedi and beyond. Chapter 1 on AO3
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Return of the Jedi by Chibi and Pine
This is the first book in a trilogy following the adventures of Din Djarin and Luke Skywalker in a modern retelling of Return of the Jedi and beyond. Chapter 1 on AO3
Guess what we finally posted
had a dream where i logged in to ao3 and saw this
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How to Fix Underwriting
1. Slow down at emotionally important moments.
Big emotions need space to land. If a scene feels rushed, pause the plot briefly to show how the moment affects the character.
2. Add reactions, not explanations.
Instead of explaining what a character feels, show it through physical responses, hesitation, or small actions that reveal emotion naturally.
3. Ground every scene in the senses.
If a scene feels thin, add one or two sensory details—sound, texture, smell, or temperature—to make the moment feel lived-in.
4. Let thoughts interrupt action.
A line of internal thought can deepen a scene without slowing it too much. Thoughts show stakes, fear, longing, or conflict beneath the action.
5. Expand consequences, not events.
You don’t need more things to happen—you need to show what matters. Focus on how events change relationships, decisions, or self-perception.
6. Strengthen setting where emotion peaks.
The environment should echo or contrast the emotion of the scene. Setting is not decoration—it’s emotional reinforcement.
7. Add specific details instead of general ones.
Underwriting often relies on vague language. Swap “they argued” for one sharp line of dialogue or a specific breaking point.
8. Let dialogue breathe.
Short dialogue exchanges without pauses can feel flat. Add beats—silence, gestures, interruptions—to give the conversation weight.
9. Show transitions between scenes.
If scenes jump too quickly, readers feel disoriented. A brief transition helps establish time, mood, and emotional continuity.
10. Clarify stakes early in the scene.
If readers don’t know what can be lost, scenes feel empty. Make sure the character wants something specific and fears losing it.
11. Use the “what are they feeling right now?” check.
After each major beat, ask what emotion is dominant in that moment. If it’s missing on the page, the scene is likely underwritten.
12. Expand scenes that feel “too clean.”
If a scene resolves too neatly or quickly, it probably needs more tension. Messy emotions and unresolved feelings add depth.
Return of the Jedi: A Modern Rebellion RP by @chibiauthorchan and pinesbinds. This has been a months long project between the two of us where we've taken Return of the Jedi and turned it into a modern setting. The story of Din and Luke begins at Jabba's Palace where bounty hunter, Mando, was tasked with delivering the prized Han Solo. A simple bounty that quickly turned into being blown away by Jedi Luke Skywalker's fighting abilities. Armed only with a staff too!
Yeah.... The Career Swap got put on hold 😅
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I would be such a good writer if I could just *clenches fist* write.
if ever you find symbolism in my writing please tell me i’d like to know about it too
*blows dust off blog* So, anyone interested in extremely self indulgent MCU insert fic?
Dearly Departed: Chapter 2
Word count: 840 Warnings: (Past) Major Character Death Summary: At a time in his life where hope seemed to be a ghost of the past, Izuku stumbles upon a latent quirk that shows him another ghost. Pairing: None (Platonic BakuDeku, for now at least) Chapter 1 ~~~~~~~~
“Deku! Oi, Deku! ... DEKU!!!”
A head of curly green hair suddenly jolted up only to be smacked with a thick manila folder stuffed full of official documents. Wincing at the pain he looked up to the now-familiar sight of the ghost of his childhood friend smirking down at him. It wasn’t hard to deduce that he’d fallen asleep at his desk yet again, what more with work on top of him this time. It’s wasn’t a rare occurrence.
“Finally,” Katsuki’s ghost breathed out a sigh, “You know it’s a miracle you made lead detective, even with my help.” The spirit shook his head before helping himself up onto the wooden desk feeling absolutely no remorse as he made more room for himself by sweeping off stray papers.
“Kacchan, it’s not fair that you criticize me for having a messy office when you make your fair share of the mess.” Truth be told there was absolutely no reason that paperwork was now strewn about. It had been discovered years ago that Katsuki could not only interact with simple objects in the living world but could also phase through anything he chooses.
“Think of it this way, it’ll get your ass out of that chair.” The other’s words were as smug as ever. All the Police Detective could do was sigh in response. He didn’t even get the chance to respond before his office door was being opened.
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this is why you write your outlines first
The only thing worse than forgetting what the third chapter was gonna be is writing an outline.
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I’ve had the joy of quite a few of these comments! I love them!
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