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Zombie Apocalypse! --------------------------------------- Hello my dears <3 I have this weird thing where, every few months, I just become obsessed with zombie apocalypses. Somethimes it hits me harder than other times and, although it didn't even hit me that hard, this time, I still wanted to talk about it.

I think, after the first big outbreak, when everything has kind of slowed down, crazy internet debates would start.

About the people in infected areas that are still alive

and about weither to save them...

I think the countrys that are partly infectet would obviously try to save their own people in infected areas. And I think it would go wrong. Terribly wrong. Then, the gouverment or people in charge would have to consider the risks. The people would start to speak up, saying, it would be too dangerous to save more people. More people that are send to these areas could die, or worse, bring back the infection. The virus could spread even more and more people would be in danger. While considering that, the people in charge would try to find a save way to help more people. However, on the other side, people would start to say they are monsters for not sending help right away and doing everything they can. Massive debates would break out and people would be mad. Lifes are at steak. The ones from people in inffected areas and the ones from the people here. Fear would make everything worse. Fear of the virus. Fear of being just as much in need of help as the other ones are now.

And with every new infected crossing over borders, the ininfected areas would shrink.

And someone resboncible would be found.

And fear and anger and sadness would cause chaos, even without zombies...

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hey<3 I hope you liked it! Next post will be about social media in an apocalypse!

Yours, Kiki<3

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Orlando Bloom man...

Legolas has a place in my heart,

but Will Turner...

Will Turner has a place in my vagina

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Miraculous Rewrite --------------------------------------- Hello my dears! <3 I wanted to talk about my rewrite again. ----------------------------------------

I already talked about the overall story and you may or may not have noticed how the start is pretty slow and not that much is happening. This is because I did not like how fast the real show was going in the beginning. Like, they could somehow manage to have a slow burn over five seasons for Marinette and Adrien and have every step take ages but let her fall in love with him in three seconds. Same thing for Cat Noir.

I did saw other people remove the love-square completely in their rewrite but will definetly not do that in mine. I really like the idea of the love-square in the show, I just think it is really rushed in the beginning and poorly executed in the end.

So basically, I want to strech the first episode out to the whole first season. Now, the main plot points of season one will still be happening and there wont be just one villain or something like that. But especially in the beginnign where there wont be thaaat much happening with the super heros, I want to really focus on the build up of the friendships.

I want to use the first season for everything to fall into place and not just the first episode like the real show.

Marinette wont like Adrien in the first episodes because she is getting tourmented by Chloe and she is always talking about him. But Marinette will be kind of forced to hang out with him because Alya starts to hang out and be friends with Nino. Adrien will be scared of loosing all his friends again but wouldn't want to be rude and he would slowly warm up to his friends and learn much about being a teenager while slowly exploring being a super hero.

The first quater or half will manly focus on the teenagers and their drama in school. Everxthing superhero related will be very special and exiting for the viewer (like someone could watch my rewerite XD). Maybe you wouldnt even see Adriens hero form till Marinette sees him for the first time and just see Adrien being tired in the morning after you heard more news about a mysterious figure in the news. I would really like to explore Chloes charakter in this first quater and the drama that comes with a really powerfull mean girl, not the softie she was in the show.

After Marinette starts to explore her power there will be much more hero stuff, wich will be very exciting (or so I hope). Ladybug first will think Cat Noir is a criminal too. They will have a rocky start and not get along too well. But with time they will learn to form a strong team while defeating criminals. Only every few episodes there will be an akumatised villain and in the first season tha will only mean a peson with a strongly influenced mind (I will talk about Hawk Moths powers again). In the season one finaly they will eventually meet their first rival with superhuman strenght , but that is a whole nother story.

At the end of the season I want to have:

A close friend group with Alya, Nino, Marinette and Adrien where everyone gets along with everyone

A Marinette with a sweet, NORMAL chrush on Adrien

A strong, trusting partnership between Ladybug and Cat Noir

A Cat Noir with slight feelings for Ladybug that he cannot admit to himself

and an interesting drama to continue the story

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That's it for now. I hope you like it <3

Please share your opinion and suggestions!

Yours, Kiki <3

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Zombie Apocalypse --------------------------------------- There is a Zombie Apocaplyse but instead of just turning after a bit of time, you turn when you die. ----------------------------------------

Zomies are running up and down the street. If one of them bites you, you will get very sick but you wont turn until you die.

Bad news: The virus itself is killing you

Good news: While there is no cure, there is treatment.

Now every infectet person is trying to keep themself as healthy as possible and the short timer till death gets restart after every round of medicine.

But how long can you outrun death and what happens when the medicine slowly goes out?

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Thanks for reading!

Your Kiki!

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Miraculous Rewrite -------------------------------------------------------Hello my dears<3 I wanted to talk about my Miracolus rewrite again.

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The overall story:

The story begins like the real show. Marinette and Adrien are etting ready for their first day in school after summer break but Adrien is gettig ready for his first school day ever because it's the first time his father allowed him to go. At this morning they both decide to wear their Miracolus for the first time. Marinette wears the earrings she bought at a flea market a few weeks ago and Adrien wears the ring a distant relative gave him at the funeral of his mother two years ago. They go to school where they first meet and have a pretty normal day (details will eventually follow). In the afternoon Marinette stays for her dutys as co student representative where she gets insultet by Chloe and Adrien goes home where his father does not want to hear anything from him. Both are lonely and sad and in that moment their Miracolus is activatet for the first time. They have the starter talk with their kwamis and Adrien does not hesitate to take the changse to get out while still being carefull not to be seen like Plagg told him to. Marinette decides to stop wearing the earrings because she thinks she is crazy. Over the next week there are a bunch of crimes in Paris with lots of offenders claiming to not know wat they did or why they did it. Then new storys of a mysterious figure saving people and/or handing of offenders to the police. One night Marinette goes outside to find her runaway cat but ends up being followed by creepy men. Hiding behind some trashcans, she tranzformes for the very first time to get away safely. Tikki convices her that there are far more people like Marinette that need help and that she could give it to them and so Marinette starts to become the second mysterious figure saving people. What Tikki does not tell her is that she can sense one of the other Kwamis being used against their will and that that's why she wants Marinette to step in action.

In the meantime Alya and Nino become closer friends wich brings Marinette and Adrien closer too. They hang out, watch movies, eat ice cream and have fun. In that time, marinette starts to develop a chrush for Adrien (but not nearly as obsessive like in the show).

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Yours, Kiki!

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Miraculous Rewrite --------------------------------------- Hello my dears <3

Lately, I've been thinking a lot about Miracolus. I think everybody who watches the show can agree with me when I say : the show is really, really terrible. However, I still love it with all my heart even tho it makes me scream or want to kill someone somethimes. After thinking about it for some time I came to the conclusion that the show has an exiting and interesting concept but they just messed up pretty bad and while I could just continue watching the show with that tought in my head and ramble about it here, my brain wouldn't let me ...and I startet to rewrite the whole show...

While the story is not completely formed right now, I do plan on making posts for every episode each in the future. But first we need to get down the basics.

Charakters:

Marinette- Marinette and Adrien are both the main charakters an I plan on treating them as equaly important. Marinette will be 16 in my rewrite and I try to treat the show less like a kids show and more like just a tv show. In my rewrite she is friendly and a good friend but also insecure and a bit of a controll-freak. She has to plan everything perfectly and gets stresssed when things don't go as planned. Marinette still loves to design and sew clothes. She herself doesn't wear as extravagant chlothes like you would expect from a fashion designer because she is to insecure but also because she needs practical chlothes in her day to day life. That is because she is not only sewing but also often helping out in the bakery of her parents. Marinette is also co-student representative and the helper of Chloe who is student representative. In the beginning of the show, Marinette is just really close with Alya, her childhood best friend. Later in season one a friendgroup consisting of Alya, Nino, Adrien and Marinette forms.

Adrien- Adrien will be 17 in my rewrite and new in the class. He will be one of the oldest in the class exept for Nino and Juelika. He is friendly and kind but it is hard to get to know this side of him because he is cind of cold and silent towards everyone because he is so afraid of his farther taking everything away from him. Adrien has the same hobbies like in the show: learning mandarin, playing the piano and fencing. He is wearing headphones most of the time and uses highbrow language and gestuers. Because of that and his friendship with chloe he is not really liked by his classmates. No one exept Nino who just does not care and takes Adrien with him all of the time. When Nino befriends Alya because he kind of likes her, the friendgroup is formed and they all start to hang out with each other. Adrien obiously wears the clothes of his fathers brand. He has dark blonde hair, long enough to fit in a braid.

Alya- Alya is Marinettes best friend. She has an internet blog with the name "Lady Wifi". After the first misterys about secret heros of the city she dedecades her whole blog to them and defends them on there. She is a strong and confident young woman but tends to focus to much on stuff and get obsessed with things that interest her. She wants to become a journalist and likes to read and watch movies. Alya plays a big part in the friendgroup.

Nino- Nino is Adriens best friend. He is all about freedom and kind of a role model for Adrien. Nino catches interest in Adrien and just carries him around everywhere, introduces him to new people and shows him the school and his interests. He loves to take fotos and film little movies. He wants to change the world with his art and just have a lot of fun. Right at the begining of the show he has a crush on Alya who fascinates him.

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These are the most important charakters for the start of the Show. I hope you like it so far. Pleas share your ideas!

Yours ,Kiki!

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Hello my dears <3 I just wanted to itroduce myself . My name is Kiki and I wanted to start sharing my thoughts and ideas with people on tumblr and hopefully entertain some of you! As you may have noticed English isn't my first language and especially my spelling can be pretty bad. I hope you dont mind it too much, Yours Kiki!