A Guide To: Writing Bitchy Characters
There are two types of characters I think we all struggle to write at some point - be it playing them ourselves or playing them against other people. The anti-villain/villainous types as well as the ābitchyā characters ā theyāre generally mean, have a hard-edged demeanor that makes talking to them a bit intimidating sometimes. They always seem to have snappy, witty remarks or know just what to say to get your characterās blood boiling.
So, how do you write one?Ā
Words can be carried a number of different ways - by tone and body movement. Is their voice rough? Do they speak with an irritated tone? Is it deadpan? Sarcastic? Defensive? Blase? Abrasive? Authoritative and demanding?
Now, with that in mind, think of mean things to say - they might not be things youĀ would say but theyāre probably what your character would say. Meaner characters generally tend to lack aĀ āpoliteā filter, theyāre more crass - and while what they say may not be honest, it sounds honest with the tone. Think of the things you think about saying or do actually say when youāre mad - sometimes thatās an easier approach. Is what they said just a throwaway comment?
Along with tone, phrasing is important - a simpleĀ āwhat?ā can sound very upfront and demanding if itās got an abrupt tone and uptight reaction. Mediator comments and passive ones arenāt typically used by these types of characters - though sometimes it will be used mockingly to taunt the person (but they can also be sincere if they want to be). For example,Ā āI understand thatā¦ā versusĀ āI know youā¦ā What they say is more direct, more finger-pointing like theyāre out to blame or accuse someone, even with assumptions, they sometimes even lack the ownership ofĀ āIā and useĀ āyouā and/orĀ ātheyā instead when it comes to owning up to things. Itās like a redirection away from them to make the conversation about the other person or to make the person feel like they should take responsibility or blame for whatever it is your character is saying.Ā
If you donāt know what to say, think about their gestures, their movements.
Are they huffy? Do they get defensive and cross their arms over their chest, closing themselves off to the world because how dare you? Do they kick their foot up a little or take a confrontational route by getting closer to the person theyāre talking to? Are they the physical type (leans towards controlling when this route is taken), do they grab wrists or elbows? Or do they shove and swat/slap? Whatās their demeanor like? Is it really intimidating, standoffish, nonchalant, reservedā¦Ā
Body language makes up a huge part of our communication - so it makes sense that their communication also would rely on that. The body can say more than words can. Mean/bitchy characters tend to be more confrontational - they arenāt afraid to say whatās on their minds, be it alone or in a group of people. Sometimes what they say/do has a motive (big or small, from getting a crowd to laugh at their target or to sabotage their targetās career), and sometimes it plain doesnāt and they just say something snarky because itās a natural thing to do.
And why do they do it? Is it a defense/coping mechanism of some kind? How were they treated by their parents, siblings, friends, and other peers? What did they experience for them to behave like that? While sometimes the answer may not be readily available and itās easier to sayĀ ātheyāre just that way,ā try to find a reason - donāt use that reason to justify their behavior but to explain it, because once you can find a reason theyāre like that, the easier it is to find resources on how people behave and depending on how they coped with it.
*They will more readily jump on the defense when anyone tries to insult them, attack their character or talk to them about something serious that may be effecting the other person.
Itās similar to writing villains. They have a more assertive or aggressive stance in conversations, sometimes theyāre meant to challenge the plot and characters, and sometimes their roles can be really antagonistic in general because of that even with personable traits involved to humanize them.Ā
The easiestĀ transition I can think of as a base is giving them witty and sarcastic remarks. What I want you to do is think of phrases such as:
Read them with a condescending and/or sarcastic tone in mind - imagine your character rolling their eyes, shifting from hip to hip and canting their head. Imagine your character looking at their opposite incredulously with dagger eyes or a complete look of indifference as they deliver those words deadpan.Ā
Visualizing what they do/react and hearingĀ how they say it can really help make that transition from taking a simple line that could be comedic into something rude.Ā Keep in mind, though, that theyāre not always mean - and can just say things flatly or be humorous even if what they say might be offensive or upsetting to an extent, because theyāre insensitive about a certain topic or donāt care about whose feeling they hurt.
A mean/bitchy character can speak with any and every tone, itās more their mannerisms and the words they use - they can take something as simple as a compliment and make it sound completely backhanded. And sometimes, they do relent and back down from conversations if their heart just isnāt in it or the effort to cause an upset isnāt arising soon enough. (They can be compared to a bully, theyāre encouraged by reactions - so if a character feeds into it, it only fuels them on).
In the RP community, weāre all at a big advantage with being able to format our texts for emphasis and providing gifs for our characters reactions. While that may not alwaysĀ help, itās good too. But in paras, try to think about their body movements.
And I know I just gave you all a brief mental task above but now, hereās a miniature assignment:
If youāre struggling with how to find your characterās voice, I suggest writing a 300 to 500 word self/solo para just imagining their bodily movements and gestures. How do they breathe? (Huffy, fast and heavyā¦) What do they do with their jaw, tongue and cheeks? (Puff them out, clench, bite their tongue/lips). Do they pace around or sit down? What about their hands? Clenched, shoved in pockets, what? But most importantly: what are their thoughts?
Put them in a scenario that gets their mind going with all kinds of thoughts ā maybe theyāve just been in a vehicular accident, maybe theyāre under a ridiculous amount of stress, maybe theyāre attending an event they loatheĀ going to. Now, take oneĀ thought and have them blurt it out. Allow them to speak their minds. And see where it takes you (and them). Allow yourself to write freely, donāt try to control/police their voice in this assignment - let them think and say what they want, that can help you get a better grasp on what theyāre like/what they say.
Hopefully that will help you break that wall.