Alastor is scheming and Lu wants the truth.
Two old men still talking :)
Well, will Alastor spill the beans? If so, how much? :D What do you think why he was sent to the hotel?
Hey!
It's me!
New part and more talking. More plot incoming:)
Yes there might be again spelling mistakes, typos etc. - sorry!
Short caption cause I am soooo tired, I am awake more or less for 48hours, cause insomnia. *sigh*
Nighty!
Disclaimer:
- I don't own any characters, this is just a fan comic.
- English is my second language, so there might be mistakes.
Additional Infos: Tools: Clip Studio Paint
This is my first long form comic. So far I only dabbled into 4 panel short comics, but for the longest time I wanted to start my own webcomic (with my own story to tell) - but seriously never had the guts to start. (Imposter syndrome *sigh*)
But back last december when I first watched Hazbin it sparked something inside me.
It inspired me so much, that I finally started this comic.
And I am so grateful this fandom pushed me into a new and exciting era <3
Thanks to everyone reading, linking, sharing and leaving lovely comments! This means so much to me! You can't even imagine - ha haaa,.. :>
Part 24/? - "Bad Bambi!"
Alastor is being weird :D And a new prize is decided.
Yes, well.
Don't look at me like that.
Can a girl not.. draw?
Agh - I don't have the words for a caption. 🫣
Does this need any special tags?
I mean nothing is really happening tho.
Recommended (but not obligatory) music for this part: Rain World OST - Childhoods end (Reprise)
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i decided to just finish it today, at last.
I added page with Rosie and Carmilla JUST for the people who asked ahadshdgasg
The main story is over, Alastor is free from Vox, Vox is suffering for what he did, dut the trauma won't go away easily. Long-long years of coping and recovery are ahead, and Alastor will have to face his feelings much more than he would like lol. Yeah i have few comics planned that are going to show his recovery, few scenes that i may even write as a fic, not as a comic, because it focused more on feelings, and texts are better at conveying that and allowing to actually feel what the character is feeling.
The main story is over, but i still have some additional parts that are just as much canon, i just decided not to include them right now, because i was noticing that some people were getting tired from the story, especially from Alastor's sufferings not ening (because the depressing part actually took much longer than it really should have, in like phasing, but i've already took out everything i could to not hurt the narrative too much and make that part of the story have reasonable lengh). Moments, that were taken out, don't have much importance to the plot, but they show more of what Alastor and Vox's relationships were specifically during the year they've "dated".
Plus some scenes from the first year of their deal, before everything went downhill. And a scene where they talk after The canon bar scene, but i actually want to do something... special with it. You really don't wanna miss it, so, stay tuned.
Alright, now! time for a test! rEAD CAREFULLY BEFORE VOTING!
Is it?
NO
YES
Voting ended onJul 3
I decided to go against my better judgement and post it as it is lol. Disclaimer, i do not agree with Alastor on what you should do to yourself, and if you are having such thoughts, please, seek help.
I'm unsure about his future design yet, maybe it'll change. Also, look at him, he's educated now :'3
And yes, i have some ideas about how canon events are gonna go without Vox. First season isn't gonna change lol, but season 2... Velvette may have to take the spot there.
And, of course, i have some ideas about Alastor and Angel interactions! Obviously.
173 pages in 3 months... and the first draft had only 65 pages by the way!!!!!! I thought i'd be done with it in one month AND I WOULD HAVE, but i just kept coming up with more pages, more scenes, partially from the questions that were appearing in the comments, partially because i wanted to expend some secnes (like in the first draft nothing existed between first 3 pages of part 8 and last 3 pages of part 13. And then between last pages of part 13 and last 2 pages of part 20... and many other scenes.)
But for now, thank you, everyone, who have read (I MEAN ACTUALLY READ) the comic, left comments and shared your emotions. This was overall a wonderful experience for me, and i'm really glad to know, that comic did exactly what i was creating it for: helped some SA victims to process their feelings, share them freely and feel support. Also, gave more visibility to sex-repulsed aces, which wasn't planned from the start, but was a natural thing to happen.
This comic gave me SO MUCH attention, that i've never had before, even in the best days of my first era. And i don't know how i'm going to live without 100500 comments appearing just in the first hour, ATTENTION IS SUCH A DRUG GUYS, I'M REALLY ADDICTED!!!!!! PLEASE FEED ME.
I'm probably going to take a little break. In a couple of days i'm going to be reblogging all the stuff that people were making inspired by this comic (and not only) haha, there is some really good stuff! Basically (almost) everything where i was tagged.
And after that I'll continue with Breakfast or RotRD (i maybe even post a poll to decide which one to do first). And after that back to some sweet angsty radiosilence in Forced Broadcast. And of course i'll be posting for other AUs, like Blinded and Turned humans sometimes when i have the mood... and some other stuff... yeah.
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the rest of the part under cut!!!
CW! Some nudity, continued rape from the prev part (but for just 1 page)
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I WANTED TO GET TO THIS PART FOR SO LONG OHHHH!!!!!! From the start of the comic actually!!!!!
THIS IS MY FAVORITE PART (like the whole ending i guess)
Alastor putting on his clother is my fav moment btw. Just so much pride and dignity in it, idk why
I bet this isn't want yall expected HUH? Yeah, i have very unique (?) thoughts about Alastor's broadcast. I saw some artists depicting him literally in his radio tower ripping sinners limb from limb, but like. It's boring and it's so not Alastor to me. Broadcasting screams is much more sophisticated (holds a teacup like a princess) than you may think.
Okay so, i was wondering in which of my big comics i'll get to Alastor putting someone of the broadcast first. Never would've guessed that it would be this one.
Also, this comic helped me to finally figure out the last part of Alastor's ritual that i had missing, what force is tearing the souls apart. So, um, remember in breakfast, people were joking like, why Velvette was screaming? - because her best dresses were destroyed in fromt of her or smth... WELL, THESE JOKES WEREN'T TOO FAR OFF LOL
Also, i have only Val left to put in Alastor's broadcast out of the Vees. Velvette was there in Breakfast AU, Vox is about to be sent there in this one... Val remains. I'm betting on canon Al to put him in the broadcast.
Also!!!!! Thank you to all the smarties in the comments who explained how the deal broke to those who didn't catch up. Yall my heroes, i'd probably die if i had to explain in 50+ times. Both in tumblr and tiktok.
Alright, explaining everything last time. Alastor made Vox to skip a day or 2 (i'm honestly still can't remember the math i did im stupid okay 😭) and think that the New Year comes earlier than it actually is. Last time they had sex on January 1st of 1964 and next was supposed to be on january 1st of 1965, but ended up being on dec 30-31 of 1964, making it twice a year. Deal SPECIFICALLY says ONCE a year, so, unless Alastor asked for more, Vox having sex with him more than once a year is against the deal. And yes, Alastor hired someone to set the fireworks early, it's not said, but implied.
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YES I'M EVIL.
Also yayy i finished this before 6 in the morning!!! now i just need to.... check 100500 comments and add people to the taglist... yayy. i'm not complaining.
Surprisingly, i don't have anything to yap about today... oh well.
No, wait, have to say, few people caught on what i'm doing differently now 😏 but not too much for me to say it. Some pointed that out but unintentionally.
Ok thats it. Wanna see ur long ahh comments.
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Incompatiable Frequencies (18+) | Bonus part (again)
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This part is a bonus because it's from Vox's POV
This time even i (who's writing him btw), had a fasepalm and severe urge to shake vox like a maracas from his thought process.
Also, i don't know where i was going with Rosie's demonic form, this is just a hint of it, idk how her full form looks like
ok, i decided that from now on i'm not adding any more pages to the main plot, and if i really want to, i can post them later as bonus parts after i finish this comic, because I WANT TO GET TO THE ENDING GOD DAMN IT!!!!!
in the previous part many people picked up on the detail of Vox's eyes being covered - it's because in dreams we usually can't see faces clearly or they look different. But i love all the different meanings you found in it.
ALSO IMPORTANT THING that apparently isn't as clear as i thought, my bad. When Alastor's text is red on black - he has his radio filter. When it's black on red - no radio filter. Also, Vox's text is blue on black because he has this like old tv sound, in this form. In present times he has normal sound.
I wanted to say something else... but i forgor...
So many people say that they usually don't care about Alastor or can't feel sorry for him, but it's different in this story. Other say that this is the first fan comic that makes them cry, and honestly, this is the best compliments ever. Here with people saying i'm helping to process trauma, or i got them out of the artblock... thank you all 🥺💖 also, i read and see every comment here, in tiktok, on youtube and reddit, so, if you ever think "i'd comment but what's the point, the author won't see it anyway" - I WILL SEE. I SEE EVERYTHING. If i figure out how to get into insta, i'll be checking comments there as well (because SOMEONE seems to be reposting my art there WITHOUT ASKING ME EVEN) And don't get me started about pinterest... um. i wanted to say that i see every comment, but i can't answer to everybody, because i'm drawing the next part lol
But also some people say something like "ugh this is just oc that looks like Alastor" have you read the comic or you saw just one part in the wild where Alastor is crying? If you have seen the whole comic and still think that Alastor is ooc... well, first of, how do you think he should act in situation like this? second, well, we have different view on Alastor... and mine is clearly better, because more people saying that i actually get him right.
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In one of my favourite fics ("The friends that ruin you" by @number1trashenthusiast ), Alastor names Lucifer "duckie" (which is so sweet), but since I usually read fics translated (I'm spanish), the word he uses instead is "patito", which, for me, intensifies the cute agression.😭💖🦆
Also thank you to the author of this fic, I don't even know how you do but you write absolute magic.😭👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼💖
AAAAAAH, thank you so much! I love the warm tones and the little heart and the expressions and the EVERYTHING <3
I also agree; patito is even cuter than "duckie" :)
In one of my favourite fics ("The friends that ruin you" by @number1trashenthusiast ), Alastor names Lucifer "duckie" (which is so sweet), but since I usually read fics translated (I'm spanish), the word he uses instead is "patito", which, for me, intensifies the cute agression.😭💖🦆
Also thank you to the author of this fic, I don't even know how you do but you write absolute magic.😭👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼💖
AAAAAAH, thank you so much! I love the warm tones and the little heart and the expressions and the EVERYTHING <3
I also agree; patito is even cuter than "duckie" :)
