✨ So, you’ve finished your draft. Now what?
You’ve lived in your Google Doc for months. You know your characters’ coffee orders and their deepest traumas. But you’ve also hit that point where you can’t tell if a plot twist is genius or if it’s just confusing.
That is where I come in.
Every writer needs a "Better Reader"—a dedicated Beta Reader to look at your manuscript with fresh eyes. Here is why handing your baby (read: manuscript) over to me will change your writing game:
1. Curing "Draft Blindness"
You know what you meant to write, so your brain fills in the gaps. I read what is actually on the page. I’ll catch where the description is lacking or where the dialogue feels stiff because I’m experiencing the story for the first time.
2. The Plot Hole Patrol
Remember how the protagonist lost their sword in Chapter 3 but used it in Chapter 10? I will. I’m here to track the continuity errors and timeline glitches that slip through the cracks.
3. Pacing Checks
Does the middle sag? Is the ending rushed? I analyze the flow of your story to ensure the reader stays hooked from the inciting incident to the final period.
4. Honest Reaction (The "Screaming" Factor)
Grammar checking is great, but don't you want to know if your jokes are funny? If the angst actually hurts? I provide live reactions and inline comments so you know exactly how your audience will feel.
5. Constructive, Actionable Feedback
I don’t just say "this doesn't work." I tell you why and help brainstorm how to fix it. My goal isn't to tear you down; it’s to polish your work until it shines.
My Inbox is Open!
If you are looking for a beta reader who is thorough, kind, and ready to obsess over your OCs, check my pinned post for my rates/guidelines or send me a DM. Let’s make your WIP the best version of itself.