Why Project Hail Mary is a Mastery of Subverting Expectations
(And why that one particular news article is wrong for saying that they should have cut out the ending scene).
So, as some people may have seen, an article came out saying that PHM is a great film, but that the ending scene of Grace in the Eridian classroom should have been cut. Unsurprisingly, said article has been dragged through the mud by fans for totally missing the importance of that scene in Grace’s story. While I wholeheartedly agree with the people calling out why it was a bad take, I want to take this as an opportunity to go on a ramble about not just why that scene is important, but also why PHM is a mastery of subverting expectations because the two things can definitely be linked.
When I was thinking about this, my mind also kept going to the First Law Trilogy by Joe Abercrombie, not because it’s similar to PHM, but because they’re both great at subverting the readers/audiences expectations. However, they do it in very different ways.
For those unfamiliar with The First Law, it’s a grim dark fantasy trilogy that subverts typical fantasy tropes by flipping them all on their head. What if the band of unlikely companions all hated each other? What if their journey ended up being a failure? What if the friendly wizard who offers assistance in their quest is actually the worst? It goes against the norm by doing the opposite.
In comparison, PHM subverts expectations, not by flipping tropes on their head, but by recontextualising them. Ryland Grace’s journey is the stereotypical hero’s journey, it just doesn’t play out the way you anticipated, and that’s why it’s brilliant.
Usually, a hero’s narrative plays out as follows:
The hero is reluctant to go on a quest/mission (and often initially refuses)
Something causes the hero to change their mind and they set of on the quest/mission they initially said no to
The hero goes through a journey of self discovery while on their quest/mission
The hero makes a big sacrifice
The hero ends up at home as a changed person
Sound familiar? Yeah, that’s the plot of PHM boiled down to it’s bare bones. So why is so much of the book/film a surprise? We’ve seen that story play out before, right?
Yes, but the reason PHM shocks us so much is because none of those narrative beats play out quite the way you thought they would and a lot of that is down to the way the story drip feeds you information through flashbacks.
For most of the book/film, you think you’ve already seen the first two steps in Ryland’s journey: he initially refuses to work on studying the astrophage before ultimately changing his mind and asking to stay on as a researcher. As a result, you start to build a picture in your head of where Ryland’s story is going to go - not necessarily in specifics, but in a general sense.
Ryland is reluctant to help out with PHM mission
Ryland changes his mind and agrees to carry on studying the astrophage and ultimately offers himself up to go into space (he must have done that because we’ve seen him on the ship)
Ryland goes on a journey of self-discovery while completing the mission
Ryland makes a big sacrifice
Ryland ends up back home as a changed version of himself
The biggest shock comes when you find out that Ryland never chose to go on the Hail Mary. He didn’t offer to go as a way of carrying on down the path he’d stepped onto when he agreed to carry on the research, he flat out refused to do it. And this is how PHM subverts your expectations. It drops a piece of information that makes you rethink the context of the entire story, a story that never plays out the way you thought it would.
Ryland’s refusal wasn’t studying the astrophage, it was getting on the ship
Ryland choosing to do the mission wasn’t done through him becoming a researcher for the project, it was done on the ship when he discovered what he was up there to do
Ryland’s journey of self-discovery happens through the help of an unlikely alien companion
Ryland’s big sacrifice isn’t for Earth, it’s for Rocky
Ryland ends up at home as a changed version of himself, but home isn’t a classroom on Earth, it’s a classroom on Erid
Grace’s journey is the stereotypical hero’s journey, but not in the way anyone anticipated. Andy Weir managed to subvert expectations, not by having everything play out in the opposite way to what you’d expect, but by recontextualising the whole thing. It’s beat for beat a generic hero’s narrative but told in a way that makes the whole thing a surprise.
And that’s why it’s incredible.
It’s also why that final scene is so important. Because Ryland’s story follows the conventional arc of a hero’s, the closing chapter of his journey would always be him ending up at home as a changed version of himself. That was always how his story was going to end. So why not end with that scene on the beach?
Because Ryland’s place is in the classroom.
He says as much early on in the film. The place where Ryland feels most at home isn’t in his house, or on a spaceship, it’s in the classroom. It just so happens that the classroom in question isn’t actually on Earth.
So in conclusion, yes, PHM is a mastery of subverting expectations and, yes, that final scene is necessary. It’s Ryland’s story, and while it’s not the one you’d expect, it’s absolutely the one we fell in love with.