NSFW Warning:
I am writing my first smut and need to know if this sounds good or what I should do to make it better. Here is a small glimpse... I would love feedback =3
Deviously Sans wrapped his tongue around Grillby's dick, taking his time to enjoy each moan that escaped Grillby's lips. Slowly, Sans peppered wet sloppy kisses; starting from the balls and working his way down to the tip of his penis. Grillby's dick grew stiffer with each wet kiss, Sans swore he could feel a few stray flames enter the cracks of his teeth. The stray embers frolicked in Sans' mouth, exploring every nook and cranny. It felt as though the embers were mapping the inside of Sans' mouth. A small moan escaped the skeleton as the flames circled his tongue before slithering down Sans' throat. Startled by the new sensation a stream of gray flew between them as Sans coughed out smoke. Clicking his tongue on the roof of his mouth, Sans hummed in satisfaction. The flames alone felt nice in his mouth, but it made him wonder what Grillby would taste like...
