Hello, good morning, afternoon, or evening, depending on which story you're reading this.
I love your analysis and I'd like it if you could help me with a Deltarune AU I'm creating, it's called Deltasoul.
The characters I already have are:
* Shadow Mantle - Bravery
* Titan (or a less powerful version) - Kindness
* The souls of Undertale are left in the care of the dark bosses (or those with the dark crystal, except Gerson) by Gaster to find out what will happen.
* Over time, the Darkness and the souls become friends, and the souls allow themselves to be absorbed so the dark beings can go to the Light World.
* There is a time when the darkness get to know each other and learn their new abilities, until finally emerging into the light world.
* Here there would be a jump of one year; the dark beings already have an established life in the light world, but from time to time they go to the Dark World, to see how the people who matter are doing and help them in secret; but they are discovered and confronted. After a conversation, they decide to talk about more topics each time they return, so they can recover/heal lost ties.
* The knight appears and the events of the game begin, but there will be changes because of the souls.
What is your opinion of the story? What should be changed?
really amused by choices given the context of the characters. and i think playing with ideas on counterparts and how they effect the might be interesting. there are easy opposites to the positives of the themes human souls are linked to. a lot to think about.
jevil and seam - integrity is having good moral, honesty and trustworthiness. jevil and seam were close, whether it was as friends or colleagues, or otherwise. in game jevil seemingly has lost all morals, becomes jaded and uncaring of what he does. while seam seems… helpful? in the progression of things. almost always willing to answer questions. i wonder how that would be if it were flipped. or… what happened that made jevil truly lose his integrity? that seam had to imprison jevil not only for everyone’s sake but his own? depends where you want to go.
spamton and tenna - justice can sometimes be twisted into vengeance. whether they fight over their obvious greeds and wants, things that were promised and never truly thought out or achieved, how they’ve hurt one another equally without realizing. justice can be blind. perhaps, if they actually take a step back or communicate, they may actually see the third party (or parties) that involved themselves more clearly and tore them apart, then… can they get the justice they both deserve?
kris and the shadow mantle - there’s an obvious disparity in certain actions of this story. right or wrong choices we can make. bravery can be good, but what is the agency? is that agency in the right direction, the right choice? what are the consequences, are they paralyzing? do they care? can they truly face it in the end? can they accept it? or will they succumb to cowardice?
there was… something a bit ago that i saw that made me think… of a tie in between the titans and vessels. something something titans being a result of discarded vessels or whatever. something invasive and potentially dangerous to the world. eh. but anyway… mostly how both are quite detrimental to the story. a simple kindness has the ability to change the course of everything. but so does apathy. you can save or destroy a world depending on how you treat it and it’s people.
i think that if the events are going to lead into the main story, depending on where you take it…
what fundamentally changes the darkeners after their merge? how are they able to travel into the light world, what is their goal for being there in the first place? are their abilities only useful in the dark world? or do they have any effect in the light world? do they use this power maliciously or for good?
why are the soul possessing darkeners confronted? are the other darkeners upset they can’t achieve the same freedom as the chosen few? how long were they left in the dark? do they feel betrayed and abandoned in some way? how has that effected their life or even their ability to live? (if we go along with the value theory…)
do these boss darkeners step over a line they shouldn’t, trying to free their people? does it throw things into chaos?
do the lighteners know they’re not true lighteners? does that matter?
i think it can go in all kind of directions really, there’s a lot of room to fill. i’m interested in how it goes.
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