Heidi's basement

A slice-of-life comic about three friends in secondary school. This is where I post all the doodles that's still in draft phase!

[howtopronouncegirls]

How to Pronounce Girls draft #0

The first draft of HTPG! It's entirely OOC by now and their personalities here are way different from what they are now so treat this as an insight of me discovering their voices and interaction for the first time ヾ(^^ゞ)

[howtopronouncegirls]

Rifqi knows best

[howtopronouncegirls]

How to Pronounce Girls draft #1

(Read from left to right)

a really rough draft of an episode i’m currently writing! ^^/

couldn’t help myself from sketching this part so here it is,, do tell if you have any comments to give (i.e: writing, placement) I’m trying to improve as much as I can :D

The script:

Heidi puts his hand to the side of his face, as if he’s trying to echo his speech, “I’m hooommeeee, I have a friend with me~,” he announced as he steps into the house. “Come on in.”

Rifqi seems hesitant to enter, afraid of the non-mahrams in the house being unprepared for his visit, “Your sister wouldn’t mind?” he asked.

“Whatever, she’s stuck in her room all day, won’t be a bother at all,”

*sighs “You should at least tell her properly”

“She’ll be fine. When she hears us talking, she’ll notice,”

“I’m heading to the toilet first, make yourself comfortable,”

Never knew he’d be the type to have books all over his room. Educational ones even…

“Heidi, you’re home already? Remember that you’re supposed to cook for to-,”

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGG %^*!!!!

I told him to check with her properly…

*Heidi comes out from the toilet* “What’s up?”

“Oh my God, you selfish brat! At least tell me you’re having a friend over!!”

“Already did, Princess. You’re the one who keeps listening to music on full volume in the house alone. Lucky enough not to get robbed by now,”

“What did you say to me, ugly!?”

“Look, you’re being dramatic. Rifqi probably didn’t even notice you,”

“Our eyes met!!”

“Yeah, I don’t care,”

“I’m telling mum!!!”

*Heidi closes the door* “So annoying…”

“I see you two get along well…”

-to be continued...