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A man who is running for mayor is forced to undertake a quest to save his daughter while simultaneously avoiding the police who have zero'd in on him for a murder.

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One sentence summary
A man who is running for mayor is forced to undertake a quest to save his daughter while simultaneously avoiding the police who have zero'd in on him for a murder.
That's what reading a book is like, funny enough it's the same with writing one too!
When I write one really good line
^ THAT IS THE MOST ACCURATE GIF
And it’s almost always the line you can’t fit into the next draft.
A piece from ch.3
Leo stopped and stared reverently at the wreckage. Became lost in it. Ed was a child, stalking around the vehicle like it were dead animal. Prodding at it. Scrutinizing. Ed was nothing like Leo. Leo was Picasso while Ed was doing finger-painting.
Quote #1
"Some things are better left in the unknown, that way, we all stay safe. The less you know, the less likely you are to get hurt."
Ch. 2
The flash of the red light camera illuminated the cab of Chris Wilks' Chevy Silverado. The muscle in his cheek twitched; but a ticket is the last of his worries. Wilks glanced at his rearview mirror, no body behind him. His headlights caught a street sign -- Lake Shore Boulevard. The clock in his car drew his eyes, one thirty-seven AM. Twenty-three minutes. Panic throbbed in his chest. Wilks began breathing heavier, and his foot followed suit. The speedometer crawled higher and higher, approaching 120km/h. Another flash went off. Wilks couldn't care less, he was running out of time. Something vibrated. Wilks tightened his grip on the wheel; knuckles whitening. He took a sharp left without signaling. His mind was racing, his heart was racing, he was racing. He had his destination in mind, and he wouldn't stop until he made it. Something vibrated again. Annoyed, he reached over and picked up his phone -- blocked -- he silenced the call and threw his phone into the cup holder. I do not have time for this. The clock appeared to be mocking him now; the greedy, green glow sucking up every second that he had left. Flashing lights began to come into focus up the road in front of him. "Shit, a checkpoint." Just as he spoke, a loud rattling noise broke his concentration. Wilks grabbed his phone -- blocked -- he pressed the button to answer and put the phone to his ear. "What?" "Fifteen minutes." "Who is this? Why are you doing this?" "I could ask you the same question." "What the hell are you talking about?" Wilks barked. Silence came through the receiver. "Tell me!" "Perhaps we should ask Miranda." Chris felt vomit rise in his throat, and his face went numb. All of his breath and been punched out of his lungs, he was suffocating. "Fifteen minutes. Oh and I wouldn't go below seventy if I were you." "Or else what?" Wilks spat into the mouthpiece. A long pause followed. "Or else you explode. Good luck Mr. Wilks." The call was ended. Wilks eyes filled with tears. Sorrow caught in his throat and he threw his phone onto the passenger seat and it bounced and landed on the floor. Tears began rolling down his face uncontrollably, and he wiped his face with the sleeve of his hoodie. Get it together. He grit his teeth. His speedometer's needle began falling. Wilks accelerated; forgetting the police checkpoint that he was quickly approaching. His headlights passed an orange sign: SLOW Police Checkpoint Ahead. Max 30. Out of the corner of his eye, Wilks noticed a back alley. A cop up ahead was holding a flashlight and held his hand up, palm out. Wilks' gripped the wheel with damp hands and slowed to eighty-five. A bead of sweat rolled down his temple. His heart was thundering against his ear drums. I'm running out of options. The cop kept his hand up. Wilks glanced towards the alley again. A fire ignited within him, he was seeing red; he turned hard toward the alley. The cop was on the radio and was running to his car. With tires squealing and heart racing, Chris was speeding down the alley. His Silverado -- despite the speed -- was narrowly managing to fit down the ally. A man opened a door and walked out in to the alley. The man took a cigarette out from behind his ear and wrapped his lips around it. Wilks headlights shone in the mans eyes and he jumped back out of the way. Wilks swerved and collided with a dumpster, but he maintained control. Flashing lights grew behind him, and sirens drowned out his engine. He caught sight of the clock -- one fifty-six -- and defeat warmed over Wilks entire body. He shut his eyes, only for a moment, and opened them to see a brick wall that stopped his Silverado with brute force. The explosion that followed was brilliant.
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Ch. 1
The battery in the clock died again. That’s the second time this month. This unnerved the man. The same man who is now holding a cold cup of coffee. He raised the cup slowly to his mouth and took a small sip. The temperature didn’t phase him, nothing did. His mind was elsewhere, drowning in his thoughts; trying to sort through the mess that has enveloped him in the last seventy-two hours. A door opened behind him. He wasn’t sure if he had actually heard the sound, despite the calm of the icy room, his mind was deafening. “You alright man?” A voice broke through the void. The man turned to see another detective standing in the room. The young man’s face bore the image of concern mingling with anxiety. “I’m alright.” “Do you want me to go in alone?” “Nah, I need this.” The man feigned a smile at the young detective. Once the door had closed, the man turned to face the window in the room. He gazed through the glass at the man sitting in the chair. Hands and feet cuffed and shackled. A prisoner. He was trapped, about to be brought to justice, and yet, he appeared serene. Someone knocked on the door. The man remained silent, staring at the prisoner. He raised the cup to his lips once more, and he grimaced at the taste. He put the cup down on a table and grabbed his notes folder. When he opened the door the young detective was standing there with his fist raised knuckles out. “I was beginning to worry. You ready?” “Yeah, I think so.” “I need you to be certain, no ‘B’ game.” “Of course partner, I only ever bring my ‘A’ game.” The older detective smiled as though a child would when visiting an aunty. A cheek pinching aunty. His naive counterpart returned with an enthusiastic smile and together they began walking down the hall. The man approached the door labeled INTERROGATION ROOM B, and took a deep breath. He opened the door and proceeded inside. This room was even colder than the previous one. The man nearly exhaled as one would on a cold winters day. He sat down and stared at the man across the table, as he did on countless occasions over the years of his career. But this time seemed different. The man could always pinpoint the exact emotion that the suspect was feeling, get inside their head and wear down their defenses. That was his ‘A’ game. However, today — of all days — felt like his first rodeo. The young detective shut the door, turned on the camera, and then began asking preliminary questions. The suspect answered every question without taking his eyes off the man in front of him. “Tell me.” The man started. “How did you do it?” “How did I do what?” “How did you get the bombs inside those people’s vehicles?” “I don’t know what you are talking about.” A fist came slamming down on the table that made the young detective jump. “You know damn well what I am talking about!” The man shouted at the suspect. The handcuffed man wasn’t phased, he simply stared, a malevolent grin spread across his face. “Nevermind how. Why did you do it? All those innocent people.” The man spoke with a shakiness in his voice, hopelessness. The suspects smirk turned into a full blown smile now. “Innocent? You think those people were innocent?” The suspect spoke with an icy tone. The chilling look he gave only added to the seemingly sub-zero temperature of the room. The man fell silent, allowing the suspect to continue. “People don’t get into a vehicle that they know will explode. Unless, they are already dead to begin with.” The words struck through the man like an emotion seeking missle set to anger. The man was out of his seat now, and his chair hit the wall behind him with a shattering smack. He reached across the table and grabbed the suspect’s collar and pulled him towards him. “Let him go!” The young detective jumped in and pulled them apart. The man was staring into the suspects eyes, fire blazing inside of him. He then grabbed his notes folder and opened it. The suspect stirred in his seat, handcuffs clinking against the metal of the chair. Without a word, the man slammed down five photos. “I want you to tell me what you think when you look at these pictures.” The suspect leaned forward and peered down at the gruesome display. A tear began to well in the suspects eye, followed by a few more. The man glanced at his partner who was sporting a ‘we got him’ look. A wave of victory and relief flooded the man and he swept up the pictures and stood to leave when he heard a chuckle. Terror coursed through the man’s veins and began pulsating in his temple. The chuckle grew until it became borderline hysteria, “Shut your mouth! You psychopath.” The man shouted at the criminal, but the laughter didn’t quit, in fact, it became even more intense. Finally, the criminal stopped, fell completely silent. The man could hear the deafening sound of his own thoughts again, but that sound was distingushed by what the criminal said next. A phrase that the man knew he would one day hear, just not from a sick son of a bitch like this. The criminal stared at the man with his frozen eyes. “Your time is up detective.”
My Current Project
Title: Target On My Back (open to changes and suggestions) Derrick Freedman is the most well liked man in town. Beautiful family, running for mayor, making promises to clean up the city. To everyone he seemed to be the perfect leader. Then one night, Derrick sticks his neck out for one of his citizens, and gets his entire world flipped upside down. Now, in the wake of a serial killer with a vendetta, and the entire city turning against him, Derrick must beat the odds, and save his family, as well as himself. But how can he do that with a target on his back?
Ch. 1
The battery in the clock died again. That’s the second time this month. This unnerved the man. The same man who is now holding a cold cup of coffee. He raised the cup slowly to his mouth and took a small sip. The temperature didn’t phase him, nothing did. His mind was elsewhere, drowning in his thoughts; trying to sort through the mess that has enveloped him in the last seventy-two hours. A door opened behind him. He wasn’t sure if he had actually heard the sound, despite the calm of the icy room, his mind was deafening. “You alright man?” A voice broke through the void. The man turned to see another detective standing in the room. The young man’s face bore the image of concern mingling with anxiety. “I’m alright.” “Do you want me to go in alone?” “Nah, I need this.” The man feigned a smile at the young detective. Once the door had closed, the man turned to face the window in the room. He gazed through the glass at the man sitting in the chair. Hands and feet cuffed and shackled. A prisoner. He was trapped, about to be brought to justice, and yet, he appeared serene. Someone knocked on the door. The man remained silent, staring at the prisoner. He raised the cup to his lips once more, and he grimaced at the taste. He put the cup down on a table and grabbed his notes folder. When he opened the door the young detective was standing there with his fist raised knuckles out. “I was beginning to worry. You ready?” “Yeah, I think so.” “I need you to be certain, no ‘B’ game.” “Of course partner, I only ever bring my ‘A’ game.” The older detective smiled as though a child would when visiting an aunty. A cheek pinching aunty. His naive counterpart returned with an enthusiastic smile and together they began walking down the hall. The man approached the door labeled INTERROGATION ROOM B, and took a deep breath. He opened the door and proceeded inside. This room was even colder than the previous one. The man nearly exhaled as one would on a cold winters day. He sat down and stared at the man across the table, as he did on countless occasions over the years of his career. But this time seemed different. The man could always pinpoint the exact emotion that the suspect was feeling, get inside their head and wear down their defenses. That was his ‘A’ game. However, today — of all days — felt like his first rodeo. The young detective shut the door, turned on the camera, and then began asking preliminary questions. The suspect answered every question without taking his eyes off the man in front of him. “Tell me.” The man started. “How did you do it?” “How did I do what?” “How did you get the bombs inside those people’s vehicles?” “I don’t know what you are talking about.” A fist came slamming down on the table that made the young detective jump. “You know damn well what I am talking about!” The man shouted at the suspect. The handcuffed man wasn’t phased, he simply stared, a malevolent grin spread across his face. “Nevermind how. Why did you do it? All those innocent people.” The man spoke with a shakiness in his voice, hopelessness. The suspects smirk turned into a full blown smile now. “Innocent? You think those people were innocent?” The suspect spoke with an icy tone. The chilling look he gave only added to the seemingly sub-zero temperature of the room. The man fell silent, allowing the suspect to continue. “People don’t get into a vehicle that they know will explode. Unless, they are already dead to begin with.” The words struck through the man like an emotion seeking missle set to anger. The man was out of his seat now, and his chair hit the wall behind him with a shattering smack. He reached across the table and grabbed the suspect’s collar and pulled him towards him. “Let him go!” The young detective jumped in and pulled them apart. The man was staring into the suspects eyes, fire blazing inside of him. He then grabbed his notes folder and opened it. The suspect stirred in his seat, handcuffs clinking against the metal of the chair. Without a word, the man slammed down five photos. “I want you to tell me what you think when you look at these pictures.” The suspect leaned forward and peered down at the gruesome display. A tear began to well in the suspects eye, followed by a few more. The man glanced at his partner who was sporting a ‘we got him’ look. A wave of victory and relief flooded the man and he swept up the pictures and stood to leave when he heard a chuckle. Terror coursed through the man’s veins and began pulsating in his temple. The chuckle grew until it became borderline hysteria, “Shut your mouth! You psychopath.” The man shouted at the criminal, but the laughter didn’t quit, in fact, it became even more intense. Finally, the criminal stopped, fell completely silent. The man could hear the deafening sound of his own thoughts again, but that sound was distingushed by what the criminal said next. A phrase that the man knew he would one day hear, just not from a sick son of a bitch like this. The criminal stared at the man with his frozen eyes. “Your time is up detective.”
The Perfect Moment
An elderly man sat in a café. All alone, and un-disturbed. A copy of his favourite book sat next to his steaming cup of coffee. His cell phone sat in his pocket. He brushed his fingers across the hard, bumpy cover of the book. A passing car reflected sunlight from its window. He turned his head and heard the sound of waves slapping the shore. His phone started to ring. He reached forward and touched his mug. Seemingly cool to the touch, he picked it up and had a sip. Black coffee, his favourite. A smile began to form, lifting one corner of his mouth. As he swallowed he felt the warm, comforting feeling. He slowly set his cup down and it clinked gently with the saucer. A seagull flew over head, squawking. He leaned back in his chair, placing his hands behind his head. He could feel the heat from the sun on his face; making the smile grow. His phone rang again. The man didn’t move. The young couple at the next table looked over with annoyed faces. The elderly man didn’t notice, nor did he care. He sat forward again. Grabbing his mug he drank two mouth-fulls. Soft chatter filled the café. A waitress walked up to his table. “Would you care for more coffee, sir?” The man turned to the sound of her soft, angelic voice. “No miss. If I have much more, I will be up all night.” The man smiled revealing false teeth. The waitress — confused — looked up at the sun. The cell phone rang again. She turned her head back to him. Irritation crept up her spine, and she opened her mouth to speak but was interrupted. A disembodied, female scream came from a far distance. Far enough as to not be able to pinpoint exactly from where it came, but close enough to hear. A few more faces turned in the café to look. No return scream or any other noise followed. The waitress returned to the man — who’s phone was still ringing — and asked: “Sir, your phone is ringing.” The man didn’t move, smile never fading. “I know. I am just waiting.” The waitress looked around the out door café. “Waiting for what?” Impatience was seeping into her tone now. The man didn’t reply. She stared blankly at him, waiting for his response. Finally, her frustration overpowered her. “Sir, I’m sorry but you will either have to answer it or turn it off, you are disrupting—” “I am waiting.” Another scream sounded. This time either a little closer, or a little louder. People were now standing. Panic began to writhe in the girls stomach like an eel. The man simply continued to smile, seemingly un-affected by the scenario surrounding him. The waitress turned around to go get her manager when the man spoke again. “I am waiting for the perfect moment.” All the colour was drained from the girls face. She hurried inside to find her manager. The cell phone rang again. People had stopped worrying about the phone, they were now leaving their tables. Everyone had gotten up and began to run. More screaming, male and female loudened. The man reached into his pocket and pulled out his phone. He flipped it open and pressed it to his ear. “Finally! What the hell were you doing? Never mind, is it done? Did you do it?” The man fell silent. Listening to the chaos rapidly enveloping around him. Then he spoke into the receiver. A harsh, unyielding tone. “It’s done, and they are never going to know what hit them.”
For all you writer types out there.
Lol love this ;)
Poem #3
Beauty is best defined by nature, But nature is best defined by evil. The trees that bear the paper of our wealth Have roots that do not spread within the soil, But rather deeper into a fire. The fruit bearing tree of knowledge Provides us with much sin, And not much else. All these beautiful creatures That inhabit the earth, Provide us with life and pain. Trees that are so beautiful, Yet so evil, Are nothing more, Or less, Than us.
Writing exercise
An idea for a good writing exercise.. Requires minimum 3 people Each person writes on a piece of paper the number 1-20 down one side 1 2 3 4... And then they fill in number one with an idea for a BEGINNING of a story. In number 20 they put an ENDING. Once done they pass the paper to someone else who then fills in 2-19 with events for the story. After that they then pass it on to one last person to write the story (short story).
Poem #2
The spaces within these walls Contain my very soul, Home is where the heart is But where does the soul reside? Within these walls, these walls Which are built with neither Brick nor wood. But rather A material that is much more intimate A material that is shared amongst All living things. Home may be where the heart is, But the walls of our hearts is where The soul lives and breathes, An inextinguishable fire that only Continues to burn because of the Constant search for acceptance From another heart.
Poem #1
Two opposing forces, Clashing against each other, Causing pain? No. The clashing of these two forces Is an overwhelming example of How two peope, no matter how Opposite, can strike against one Another and cause a spark That will ignite their hearts into one Unifying embrace.