Panelling is one of the reasons I like comics so much. As I get more invested in various things, I find that there's always some niche content that plays with the format that I tend to drift towards or like more.
In the case of comics, it's panelling. As I started to draw, I realized that I think in sequences more than others. It's hard for me to imagine a singular slice in time. When a comic provides a snapshot of a moment that unfolds rapidly with lots of moving parts, I love it. Sometimes I'll go back over the comic that I typically read at a chapter a minute, and really digest what I'm seeing. I'll pore over every action line, and the flow of each panel into the next, and really admire the craft of a page.
This is a more modern example of this that stuck out to me, that was so clear and precise in its defining motion that I found it instantly in my ever-growing collection of compositional inspiration. The foreshortening here is fantastic. There's no doubt that the hand is reaching out to the viewer. The deeper sensation you get is that there's storytelling elements within the hand itself. This villain has captured a little girl with amazing powers, and used her for particularly brutal experiments. The dark pit of his hand - I really can't describe it any other way - is reaching out like a horrifying maw threatening to swallow her whole.
Here's how I see this image. Despite the amazing foreshortening, this isn't the intended direction. I would say this panelling plays with the format, but the extent to which the page is dominated by the hand and the strength of that panel's overarching power actually interrupts the flow. The real flow should started at 4, gone through to 10, and then wrapped up in reverse order of 3, 2, 1. So the desired order would look like this:
A nice spiral made particularly ugly by my mouse. There's a lot of strength to this sort of composition, but the dominating power of the final element broke this up for me. If the top right had the most power and flowed into a slightly subdued, perhaps more directly-at-the-camera thrusting hand, I would have understood this complicated flow more immediately and not been confused by the frantic beats of the dramatic page. But then again, you'd have a very different picture at that point.
Last thing I'll say about that page: I've never seen a wide spread in its native print format I really liked. Information is always lost when the pictures sink towards the black hole of the spine, and if you're reading a bound book, there's no way to avoid it short of cutting those pages out. Now, if there was something that played with the format and had people sucked into the center like the natural flaw of printing to the margins of a book, I'd probably fall in love instantly.
That said, double wides have their place and they can be absolutely jaw-droppingly haunting, powerful and shocking. That's reserved for another discussion though so I'll just add this picture that gives me goosebumps every time I reread Akira.
Now that I've introduced a couple of bold compositions and briefly touched on panelling, it's time to get to the meat of the essay. Really I'm just gushing over here and feeling surges of emotion as I get to rave about some of my favorite shit in the universe.
This page is a master class. Of all the things I could post up on my walls, I'd get this in the largest format I could without losing quality and give it the most subdued but expensive frame I could convince myself to buy. Words aren't necessary to describe the tension and emotions of these characters. Vegeta is pressuring Goku so hard that not only is he slightly higher up compared to Goku, his panel is also taller, giving the impression that his power is higher. Goku's more tense, hiding pose is contained within not only a smaller frame, but behind him is a cliff - he's literally stuck between Vegeta and a wall. There's no escape for Goku, and this brief, terse moment is the last few calm breaths he'll get before he's in a world of pain.
The lower 3 panels continue to contribute to already a complicated, immediately visually appreciable, and time-tested format - rooting for the underdog. The wide shot of the canyon between them gives us a breath of air and a sense of purity to the engagement that's about to happen. They're alone. There's no backup. There won't be any interference. This sets the stage for a fight that goes beyond saving the world, and what inevitably contributes to Goku being at terrible dad. He loves to fight, and this is the fight of his life (to date). The bottom two panels put both characters at striking odds with each other, and indicates a shift in tone. Vegeta's expression changes in a shot with the camera above him, making him smaller. Goku's is one looking up, giving the appearance of enlargement. The panels are also equal - suddenly, Vegeta isn't as sure about this fight as he was in panel one. He's about to have a fucking real ass fight on his hands. This kind of shit is what makes me shocked that manga is so cheap. We get so many pieces of art that work together to create something more powerful than any of them could hope to achieve individually.
The space between the panels also contributes to the power of this page - I'd bet money that this page is on the right, and I'll tell you why. It's important to have a good deal of space around the page because of possible printing errors and the spine of the book. Things would get sucked in and details lost if the margins weren't large enough. Toriyama uses his experience with this to his advantage. Not only is Goku with his back to the wall, the entire reality behind him is vanishing into the spine of the book. Not only can't he flee, but if he does, he's as good as dead.
The flow of this page is impeccable. It's readable from a thumbnail, and intense in its clarity. I'm a little more particular about the angle of the bubbles I've drawn over this page for a very important reason, and I'll explain as I go over each part of the page. Going by the natural flow of top to bottom, right to left, Vegeta's hair is the first thing that greets you on the page, and it naturally leads into Vegeta himself. His position is such that the line of action within him is biased to the left, which is, conveniently enough, his grunt. This grunt seems minor but is actually key in leading the reader into the next panel from the top, over Goku's. This serves to emphasize the confidence in Vegeta and his actual position over Goku.
Goku's pose is right biased and bends to the right, which serves to ease the flow of the reader through his hair, down to his leg where we get the tap of his foot, fighting for even the most minor position. Both characters move their legs, but Vegeta's is more subtle. Both Vegeta and the reader see Goku's movement, but Vegeta moving his back leg is something you'd have to break flow to see - I think this is 100% intentional and serves to show that Vegeta's skill is higher. Not only is his power greater, but his ability to distract his opponent even in subtle ways to get a better position has contributed to a long career of successful engagements (until now).
The bottom 3 panels are also easy reads. From Goku's foot, we drop into Vegeta posing on his cliff, before following the wind to the right and down to Goku. The SFX contribute to the standoff - the only other sound is silence. By the time we arrive at the right of the page, we drop into vegeta's panel. It's angled from top left to bottom right, and the contour of his shoulder is almost an extension of the cliff Goku's standing on. No deeper meaning there - that's just an example of fantastic readability. Vegeta's arm leads us into Goku's hand, at which point we roll over his face and complete the scene.
There are two dominant angles here, and they're both used alongside the lighting to emphasize the fighting spirit of both combatants. In both the top pair and bottom pair of panels, both Goku and Vegeta are tilted towards each other - they're literally opposing angles. The lighting of the two fighters also contributes to the sense of opposition, which is most clearly shown in the faces of each fighter. In the top view, Vegeta gets more light, and Goku's face gets a sliver. In the bottom, both get roughly equal amounts, both facing each other - lighting from opposite angles. I probably couldn't beat this horse deader than it already is.
Panelling is great! It's so fantastic I wrote a fuckin essay on the fly just now and my hands are sore so I'm going to take a break. There was another page of Dragonball I was going to discuss but maybe that can be in a part 2 if people want it.