NOT FINSHED THIS IS COMPLETELY WROTE BY ME STORY I HAVE BEEN WRITING FORM A LITTLE BIT
This story is about a guy that finds what he thinks is a cat but it wasnât really a cat but, what was it? We donât know yet. Itâs tall, pale, unhuman features, oddly sharp teeth, no eyes? But one minute ago it was a cat. What is the thing..?
Chapter Two - Thatâs not a cat
Chapter Three - A 2nd cat?
Chapter Four - I can't see
So one night I was walking outside at night in the street. It was barely lit with the lampposts but in the distance I saw a small little speck in the distance. I walked closer and it looked like a cat? I kept walking and it was a cat. I walked even closer and got a better look at it. It looked like a cat, it sounded like a cat, but I felt uneasy like something was wrong. Something about this cat was wrong but I couldnât put my finger on it. I pet it and I went on my way. But as I walked away I felt a breath on my neck. I turned around and all I saw was the cat but something else was wrong but I couldnât tell what. But still I kept walking and feeling the same feeling. After the 3rd time of this happening I started getting scared and started jogging. Even after I started jogging I still felt the same. But also the cat was always behind me when I looked back. I was getting confused.
I looked back one more time but that wasnât a cat. I only got a glimpse of it but it was tall and not a cat with unhuman features. âMaybe Iâm just seeing thingsâŠâ I thought, but the more I thought the more freaky it got âLike what if what I saw was trueâ I thought. I slowed back down at a walking paste and looked behind me and saw nothing but I felt something brush my leg. When I looked down it was just the cat rubbing its head on my leg. âThatâs so cuteâ I thought. I leaned down to pet the cat but when I saw its face I froze, that was not a cat at all it looked wrong. It had no face..? I still pet it but I was terrified now. I started walking again. The cat slowly followed behind. âAm I dreaming?â âThis doesn't seem real.â I thought. I quickened my pace because I felt uneasy.
As I was almost already jogging at this point I saw another small little speck. I was terrified. âWhat if itâs another cat just like that one I just saw?â I thought to myself scaredly. âNo no no.. no. no. This canât be happening..â I thought to myself. I was getting closer and it looked like another cat. I slowed my pace again hoping that it wasnât another cat. âIâm already scared to death, I will cry if this is a cat just like that one that is ever so slowly keeping my paceâ I thought to myself terrified of the thought. As I got closer I realized it was just the neighborhood stray. But it seemed scared of something behind me. I turned around really quick to see what it was. I saw it more clearly now that it was tall, pale, unhuman features, oddly sharp teeth, and no eyes... But just a minute ago it was a cat. I acted like I saw nothing to avoid it finding out I saw it like that. My heart was literally in my throat out of fear. I am not terrified of what will happen if it finds out that I saw it like that. I turn my head back to the stray cat but it's gone? All that was left was a.. dark red liquid. I let out a scream.
As I let out a scream a cold hand was placed on my mouth and all I could hear was this wind like scream in my ears. I tried to cover my ears because it hurt so bad. I finally opened my eyes and I couldn't see anything. I let out a blood curdling scream. âT-this can't be h-happening right nowâ I thought. I felt a warm liquid rolling down my face. I tried to break free of its grasp but I couldn't because it was too strong. I kept trying to break free til I couldn't breathe. I passed out for some amount of time. I had no concept of time anymore. When I woke up the thing was gone but I still couldn't see. I touched where my eyes should be but they weren't there.. it was just nothing. I screamed but I heard something or someone come up to me and ask âWhat's wrong?â They asked. I said âI.. I can't see please. Help me.â When I opened my eyes they screamed too.. out of fear they called an ambulance and they took me to the hospital.
I think I passed out? I'm not too sure. But when I woke up, I wasn't where I was before. I felt like I wasn't in the same universe. I felt like something was off. I heard noises like voices but they didn't sound right. They were wrong, it's like it was just gibberish. I felt like I was overthinking it so I left it alone. I started listening around to see if I could hear anything around me, I heard beeping from a device. âWell that's normalâ I thought. But then I heard this gut-retching scream that I thought it sounded like but it wasn't a scream it was like the scream form before like the high pitched scream. But I wasn't going to overthink it but after that scream stopped I got a horrible headache and started screaming. It felt like something was breaking its way through my skull. The door swung open and I heard those voices that sounded like gibberish came back. I could hear it more clearly now it was gibberish but it was like the screams like wind. But the pain in my head came back but so so so much worse. I think something was breaking through my skull and after that I passed out. Chapter sixSight As I woke back up my head was throbbing badly. When I opened my eyes I could see again it was weird, it was blurry everywhere but my head started hurting worse and worse like something was breaking though my skull. I passed out because of the pain. When I awoke I could see clearly and I wish I couldnât. I felt whatever the thing was that was trying to break though my skull getting closer to breaking my skull. I let a scream escape my mouth, and the doctor..? The doctor came in and started to talk to the nurse that he brought with him, but I still couldnât understand them. It still sounded like gibberish to me. But they also had unhuman features like the cat thing from before. I couldn't be anything more than horrified. I couldn't help but let out a scream of pure terrified horror. I finally felt whatever it was breaking completely through my skull. I screamed in agony. I wish I couldn't see because that hospital room was.. so creepy it had a dark red liquid at the bottom of the walls but as you looked up the walls parts of it was brown. It also smelled metallic and sweet.. The only thing that I could think of that is like that is blood..
I felt a warm liquid running down my forehead and the pain worsened in my head. It felt like whatever it was breaking through my skull was getting close to breaking through. I let out a pained scream.
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