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Tips on Writing Breakup Scenes

✦ People don’t always cry. shocking, I know. sometimes someone just sits there like a polite zombie, nodding and saying “okay” while their soul quietly packs a bag and moves out the back of their skull. They might want to cry, but also they might just go numb and stare at the salt shaker for ten minutes. Both are valid guys.

✦ Most breakups aren’t a single moment, they’re a slow unraveling that ends in a conversation, so even if your character feels blindsided, it should still carry that surreal “I should’ve seen this coming” haze. Because breakups rarely just drop out of the sky.

✦ The dumbest details stick, like seriously, no one remembers the whole speech, but they’ll remember the scratchy napkin, the weird buzz of a light, that their ex had mustard on their cheek and didn’t notice.

✦ You can always feel a breakup coming. no one says “we need to talk” out of nowhere, because people act different right before. overly nice. extra distant. weirdly cold or weirdly warm. characters should notice that, even if they can’t quite name what it is yet.

✦ Sometimes people still love each other. like, actually still love each other. it’s not always about the love being gone, no. It can be timing, fear, baggage, a hundred other things that get in the way. let your characters say “I love you” and still not stay. It hurts and it’s real.

✦ Closure? lol. most people don’t get it. a lot of breakups end with “wait, that’s it?” or a message that never gets sent or that one thing you almost said but didn’t. There’s rarely a satisfying ending.

✦ No one speaks in perfect sentences mid-breakup. people ramble. they say sorry three times and mean something different every time. Someone’s trying to keep it light. someone else is cracking. sentences trail off. someone forgets how to use words entirely.

✦ After it’s over, people don’t always sob into a pint of ice cream. Some people shut down, some go out and party, some clean their entire room, rewatch a comfort show, or post a spicy selfie with “new era” energy. Everyone breaks differently, so let your characters be weird about it.

✦ And if your character is the one doing the breaking up, let them feel complicated... just because they’re ending it doesn’t mean it’s easy. They might feel guilty and relieved, or they might cry after. Maybe they might mourn the version of the relationship that only existed in their head.

#writing advice

selena-soto

falloutwinc

I wanted to look up the brand of backpack dr. Robby has on the show and someone on a reddit post mentioned that he has a Doctors Without Borders patch on his backpack.

alethialia

So. Entirely possible that Robby met Abbot while he was deployed in Iraq or Afghanistan. Our boys, finding love at war.

I'm fine.

cowardlycandy

Someone PLEASE take his phone away

@neon-travesty

holocrone

The most important person that you're gonna meet today. This is Dana. She's our charge nurse. She is the ringleader of our circus.

Katherine LaNasa as DANA EVANS THE PITT (2025—)

rylandsgrace

The Pitt (2025 - ) I 1.09

kosmogrl

drfruitcake

jackabbot

Dr. Robby and the Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day

thatboisus

maybe i was born to read fanfic and obsess over fictional men idk

jackabbot

#work husbands

alliecathayes

I think I finally understand why I keep coming back now. It's in our DNA. It's what we do, we can't help it, we're the...we're the bees that protect the hive.

THE PITT 1.15 "9:00 PM" (2025) Noah Wyle & Shawn Hatosy as Dr. Michael Robinavitch & Dr. Jack Abbot

riverlarking

abbot said mmm let me not forget my knife that i carry inside the er

thepittsource

“Noah is such a good scene partner. My relationship with him is very similar to Langdon’s relationship with Robby. [...] Once we got to that scene, I was scared of it. I knew it was coming for 10 episodes, and then we got there, and it was so much fun to dance with the master like that. [...] It’s the closest thing you are going to get to a breakup scene on The Pitt.” — Patrick Ball

THE PITT 04:00 P.M.

erwinsvow

i just feel like if you were on abbot’s night shift crew it would be so romantic. in your face, who cares what everyone else sees or thinks, favoritism be damned, romantic. i just don’t see any way around it—there is no way your usual subordinate/attending relationship continues like normal. he would be so incredibly attuned to your wants and needs. dropping off a snack to the computer where you’re sitting doing notes in between patients. bringing fresh coffee when your cup is empty. keeps an extra pen with him because he knows you forget to replace yours when the ink runs out and that you take a lot of notes, enough that your pen runs dry frequently enough. a forehead kiss after a particularly difficult loss or a hug after an exceedingly angry patient. out of eye shot—sometimes. two-am check ins if he’s been busy in the trauma bay while you’re still tending to the chairs. “did you eat yet?” and “have you sat down?” loud enough that the nurses overhear, that your co-residents have something to poke fun at you for. but jack doesn’t care, not as long as you did, in fact, eat and sit down tonight.

ho-ii

Dr. Jack Abbot in '8:00 P.M.' | The Pitt.

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