In the Cut (2003) — Jane Campion, Meg Ryan, the picture nobody forgave anyone for making
The first thing to understand about In the Cut is that Nicole Kidman was supposed to play it. She had bought the rights to the Susanna Moore novel back in the mid-90s with her own production money, was going to star in it, was going to do the full thing — and then she did The Hours, won an Oscar, and quietly handed the lead role to Meg Ryan while staying on as a producer, which is the kind of decision that looks like a footnote in the production history but is actually the whole story, because everything that subsequently happened to In the Cut as a cultural artifact happened because Meg Ryan was in it instead of Nicole Kidman.
This matters mechanically and not just symbolically. Kidman in 2001 was a serious-actress brand with a working relationship to art-house material — Eyes Wide Shut, Dogville coming up, a willingness to be looked at as an object of unflattering inquiry. Meg Ryan in 2001 was the most reliable romantic-comedy brand in American film, which is a different kind of asset entirely.
You've Got Mail had done $250 million worldwide three years earlier on a $65 million budget. She was Sleepless in Seattle. She was When Harry Met Sally. The studio relationship she had built up since the late 80s was specifically the relationship of "we know what we're getting" — that being the actual economic basis of a star, the thing that lets a studio greenlight a project on the name attached.
Campion casts her against that.
Which is something Campion was already known for doing — The Piano won her the Palme d'Or in 1993 on the strength of putting Holly Hunter in a mute role that ran on physical performance and the kind of unmistakable erotic charge that gets a film an NC-17 from a less cautious ratings board — but the specific bet she made with In the Cut was different in its risk profile. The Piano had been a period piece. It had a kind of plausible distance built in by the costume. In the Cut was a contemporary Manhattan erotic thriller adapted from a novel that includes (in its first chapter) an extremely graphic depiction of a blow job witnessed in a basement and then (over its remaining length) the protagonist's romantic and sexual entanglement with a homicide detective who may or may not be the killer of multiple women.
None of this is in code. None of it has the sepia of a 19th-century settler colony around it. It is just Meg Ryan in lower Manhattan being Frannie Avery, an English teacher who teaches a class on slang and gets fucked, repeatedly and explicitly, by Mark Ruffalo with a mustache.
(The mustache thing is real and people forget it. Ruffalo with that mustache is doing a specific kind of work — it dates the cop, places him as a guy whose visual vocabulary stops sometime around 1987, signals that he is not from the world Frannie's brain lives in. The detail is almost more important than any line of dialogue he has.)
The film was bad-mouthed before it opened. There was the famous Times interview by Lynn Hirschberg where Ryan came across as defensive, where the published piece carried the implicit suggestion that the actress had wandered into material she could not handle and was now trying to retroactively make sound considered. Meg Ryan looked at journalists for a while in 2003 the way someone looks at a cop who has just asked them if they know why they were pulled over, which is the worst possible look for a movie star to have a month before release, because the press cycle is the actual product the studio is paying for and you can't sell the press cycle when your lead is visibly furious about being there.
Then it opened.
Made $4.7 million domestically in total on a $12 million budget. The reviews were a mix of unimpressed and offended, with a recurring note in the offended ones being something like "I cannot believe Meg Ryan did this to herself," which is a critical position you only get to take if you've already decided that the actress is a piece of property the audience has a stake in, and which is the thing Campion was trying to interrogate by casting her in the first place.
You can read the entire reception of In the Cut as a successful demonstration of the thesis the film was making about looking. Which is one of those situations where the artwork being misunderstood is itself the evidence the artwork was about something, and which doesn't help the artwork's box office.
The other thing happening in the background, and this is the part where I think the standard "Meg Ryan ruined her career with this movie" account gets it backwards, is that the romantic-comedy industrial complex was already in the process of dying in 2003 — not because of any one film but because the studio comedies that had structured Ryan's career were getting replaced, on the production side, by the early-2000s Apatow-adjacent shift toward male-coded R-rated comedy and on the female-lead side by the rise of Reese Witherspoon and Sandra Bullock running adjacent but distinct lanes.
Ryan in 1998 had been the queen of a genre. Ryan in 2003 was the queen of a genre Hollywood had stopped greenlighting at the same volume, and she would have had to find her next mode regardless of whether she made In the Cut, which is the kind of structural fact that retrospective career narratives flatten because it's less interesting than the morality play version where one bad choice broke an actress.
Although: the surgery.
The thing nobody quite knows what to do with when they're being polite about Meg Ryan, who in the early 2000s appeared to have made some choices about her face that read on screen as a slight loss of expressiveness, and which were absolutely chewed over in the gossip discourse around In the Cut to a degree that I think significantly damaged the film's reception. People were watching her face for evidence of cosmetic intervention instead of watching the character, and Campion's whole directorial method depends on close attention to a face, on the actress letting you see her thinking — and the gossip discourse made it almost impossible to look at her the way the film required.
This is what I mean about the casting being the whole story. Nicole Kidman, in 2003, was permitted to have a face that did things to her. Meg Ryan was being held to a different standard, by audiences who felt they had partial ownership of how she should look. Every viewing of In the Cut was happening through a layer of that scrutiny, and the film could not punch through it.
The film could not have punched through it. There was no version of the marketing that would have made the audience look past the face and at the work.
The work, for what it's worth, is good.
The cinematography by Dion Beebe (who'd go on to shoot Collateral the next year and win the Oscar for Memoirs of a Geisha the year after that) is doing something specific with focus that I haven't seen anyone do quite the same way before or since — shallow depth, things slipping in and out of resolution, the frame keeping the protagonist's perception subjective in a way that you mostly only get in horror films. Susanna Moore co-wrote the screenplay with Campion and the dialogue retains a lot of the novel's specifically writerly quality, English-teacher-in-Manhattan diction sitting next to cop diction in ways that produce small frictions throughout.
Jennifer Jason Leigh as the sister is the best thing in the movie and the part of the movie no contemporary review I've read seems to have noticed, because everyone was busy being scandalized about the lead.
(Jennifer Jason Leigh in 2003 was the actress Meg Ryan was being asked to become. It is not a coincidence that they are sharing the screen.)
The film has been gradually recovering its reputation since about 2015, which is roughly the point at which the Meg-Ryan-face discourse stopped being a live cultural conversation and started being something a younger audience didn't have any direct stake in. People discovering In the Cut on streaming in 2018 were watching it without the gossip overlay, and what they saw was a Jane Campion film with good cinematography and a willingness to take a particular kind of female desire seriously, and they liked it.
The Criterion Channel ran it. The think pieces about "the lost erotic thriller" began including it. The frame reorganized itself once enough time had passed.
This is its own kind of structural pattern, and not specific to this film — a movie that makes its bet against the audience's existing relationship to a star pays the price during the original release window and gets reassessed once the star's biography is no longer a current event.
Cruising in 1980. Striptease in 1996. Showgirls obviously.
Eyes Wide Shut, which was reviewed cruelly in 1999 and is now widely understood to be Kubrick's masterpiece, was hated for almost exactly the same set of reasons In the Cut was hated four years later — too long, too cold, too sexual in the wrong register, and starring a movie star the audience felt they understood doing things the audience felt they hadn't agreed to.
The mechanism turns out to be simple: you wait. You wait until the star's career has settled into its third act, until the gossip apparatus has moved on to other faces, until the conditions of looking that doomed the film the first time have stopped being the conditions of looking that anyone is using. Then the film becomes available to be seen.
Meg Ryan made one more movie after In the Cut, then mostly stopped working in the studio system, then directed Ithaca in 2015 and What Happens Later in 2023. She has been very calm in interviews about the In the Cut period for a long time now. She has nothing particular to apologize for.
The film she made with Campion is the most interesting picture she ever appeared in, by a wide margin, and the cultural infrastructure that originally received it was incapable of seeing what it was. Same as it ever was — the artifact survives the discourse, but only on a delay, and the delay is measured in how long it takes for the people who needed the artifact to fail to stop being the people doing the looking.
The Kinsey Reports — the Male volume in 1948, the Female in 1953 — get filed in the popular history as a kind of bombshell-of-conscience moment, two big books that told mid-century America what it was actually doing in bed and broke the consensus open. Which they did, more or less, in terms of effect. But the actual story of how those books got made is mostly a story about gall wasps and about how the Rockefeller Foundation laundered controversial research through a series of intermediaries until the political weather changed and they couldn't anymore.
Alfred Kinsey was an entomologist. Not "started as one and moved on" — he was an entomologist his entire career, on the Indiana University zoology faculty from 1920, and what he did, mostly, for the first twenty years of his professional life, was collect gall wasps. The number people throw around is somewhere north of a million specimens, which he measured with calipers, dozens of separate dimensions per wasp, accumulating a dataset on Cynips variation that nobody asked for and nobody ever quite knew what to do with afterward.
The wasps matter.
They matter because the methodology that produced the sex reports — the in-person interview, the deliberately non-random oversampling of accessible populations, the obsessive coding of every reportable behavior into something like three hundred discrete variables, the famous zero-to-six scale — comes directly out of how you collect and analyze a gall wasp population. You don't try to sample randomly because you can't (the wasps don't cooperate). You collect everything you can get your hands on, you measure every dimension, and you sort by variation rather than by category. The species boundaries are then drawn around what the variation actually looks like, on the ground, in the field, in the cabinet, and not around what the prior taxonomic categories told you to expect.
This is in fact what Kinsey thought he was doing with humans. He wasn't doing sociology. He had no use for sociology. He was doing taxonomy on a species he happened to belong to, and the zero-to-six scale exists because Cynips populations distribute continuously across morphological dimensions instead of falling into clean bins, and Kinsey believed — correctly, as far as the gall wasps were concerned — that the bins were imposed by the observers and the variation was the actual reality.
(The decades of methodological criticism of Kinsey's sampling — that he over-interviewed prison populations, sex workers, sexual-rights organizations, and undergraduates, that his 37% same-sex-experience number for men was an artifact of the sample — are correct on the technical merits and miss the point about what Kinsey thought he was doing. He wasn't trying to produce a population estimate for the United States. He was trying to map the range of variation. From a wasp-collector's perspective, you don't reject a specimen because it isn't a "representative" wasp.)
Where the money came from is the part of this story that almost nobody bothers with, and it's the part that explains everything else.
The Rockefeller Foundation had been funding research on human sexuality, indirectly, since 1921 — through an intermediary body called the Committee for Research on Problems of Sex, run by the National Research Council. The CRPS was a deliberate piece of institutional engineering. Rockefeller didn't want its name attached to research on masturbation or homosexuality or marital frequency, for very obvious reasons given that Rockefeller money also flowed to medical schools, hospitals, public health programs, and a long list of socially respectable causes that any contact with sex research would have contaminated. So the CRPS was constructed as a buffer. You give the money to the National Research Council, the NRC's committee selects the grantees, the grantees run the studies and publish the papers, and Rockefeller's name appears only in the foundation's annual report, three pages deep, under the institutional grant total.
Kinsey came onto the CRPS payroll in 1941. By 1947 he was the single largest line item in the committee's grant portfolio, which the CRPS leadership noticed and grew nervous about — partly because the publication of the Male volume was clearly coming, and partly because the war was over, the country was getting religion again, and the buffer was looking less robust than it had in the 1930s.
The Male volume drops in January 1948 and sells two hundred thousand copies in two months.
Now you have a problem, if you're the Rockefeller Foundation, because the buffer was supposed to make this kind of thing not your problem, and instead the buffer has produced the bestselling work of social science in American history, attributed to a guy whose funding pipeline is now traceable to you by anyone who can read the acknowledgments page. The Female volume in 1953 is even worse — same author, same methodology, but now the subject is the sexual behavior of American women, including American wives, including (it is implied throughout, and stated outright in places) American wives who weren't doing what the magazine columns said they were supposed to be doing. The book sells about half as many copies as the Male volume, which is still extraordinary, but the political response is an order of magnitude more violent.
Then the Reece Committee happens.
The Reece Committee — formally the Special Committee to Investigate Tax-Exempt Foundations, chaired by Tennessee congressman B. Carroll Reece — convened in 1954 with a mandate to investigate whether large foundations were using their tax-exempt status to fund subversive or un-American activities. A McCarthy-era operation in all but name, and Kinsey was target number one. Not because anybody at Rockefeller was a communist — they obviously weren't — but because the Reece Committee's actual function was to put institutional pressure on the foundations to police their own grant portfolios more conservatively, and Kinsey was the most legible example of things the foundations were funding that the country would not approve of if it knew.
Rockefeller did exactly what the committee was designed to make it do. They cut Kinsey off in 1954. Not formally, not with a press release — they just declined to renew the grant, and the Institute for Sex Research, which Kinsey had built at Indiana on the assumption that the funding would continue indefinitely, suddenly didn't have a runway. He spent the last two years of his life trying to find alternative funding (he couldn't, because the same political pressure that had spooked Rockefeller had also spooked everyone else), and he died in August 1956, probably of a heart condition aggravated by overwork, ostensibly of pneumonia, in any case broke and demoralized and convinced his life's work was about to be dismantled.
It wasn't. The Institute survives at Indiana, now called the Kinsey Institute, and the archive — which is the actual lasting contribution, the millions of pages of interview transcripts, the photographs, the art collection, the diaries he collected from his subjects — is still being worked through.
(Worth pausing on the archive for a second, because it's the part that most resembles the gall wasp collection. Kinsey collected sexual material the same way he collected wasps — exhaustively, without curation, on the principle that you couldn't know in advance what would turn out to be analytically useful. The art and photograph collection is enormous and includes a great deal of material that would now be regarded as legally problematic to have collected the way he collected it, and the Institute spends a nontrivial portion of its operational energy negotiating the legal status of an archive that was assembled under one regulatory regime and is now sitting under a substantially different one.)
The cultural downstream is the part where the story usually gets told.
Hugh Hefner published the first issue of Playboy in December 1953, the same month the Female volume came out, and Hefner cited Kinsey constantly in the Playboy Philosophy essays that started running in 1962 — the magazine's whole editorial position, that American sexual mores were hypocritical and the data proved it, was an argument Kinsey had supplied the numbers for. The 1960s sexual revolution then gets narrated as a kind of Kinsey-Hefner-pill three-step, with Kinsey providing the evidence, Hefner providing the cultural permission, and Enovid (1960) providing the technology, in approximately that causal order.
Some of which holds.
What gets lost in the three-step is that Kinsey himself was, by every personal indicator, a midwestern Republican Methodist who voted for Eisenhower and would have been bewildered to find himself enlisted as the patron saint of the sexual revolution. He was a taxonomist who happened to be working on humans. The political valence got attached to the data after the fact, by people who needed scientific cover for arguments they were already making, in roughly the way that Darwin got enlisted for social Darwinism without himself being a social Darwinist.
The data does not care what you do with it. The institutional pipeline that produced the data does care, which is why Rockefeller cut him loose the moment cover became impossible.
The deeper rhyme, if you want one, is to the way the Manhattan Project and Bell Labs were running parallel a few years earlier — large institutional patrons funding heterodox research through buffer organizations, getting decades of high-variance output, until the political weather shifted and the buffers stopped buffering. The CRPS was the sex-research equivalent of the Office of Scientific Research and Development, except smaller, older, and built around the wrong topic for postwar America to keep tolerating. The design held until it didn't, and the design held in each case because the patron could plausibly deny direct involvement, and when the denial got too thin the patron walked.
And the part nobody quite knows what to do with: Kinsey's actual data, the interview transcripts, the case histories, has held up better than the methodology critics expected. The gross numbers were artifacts of the sample, sure. But the range of variation Kinsey documented turned out to be roughly the range of variation that more representative surveys, conducted forty and fifty years later under vastly improved sampling protocols, also documented. The wasp method, applied to humans, did not produce a population estimate. It produced a map of what the variation looked like, and the map was substantially correct, and the entomologist who thought he was just doing taxonomy on the species he happened to belong to was, in the end, doing roughly what he claimed to be doing.
Rockefeller pulled the plug because the political cost of association exceeded the marginal benefit of one more grant cycle. Kinsey died thinking he'd been abandoned. The data sat in a building in Bloomington for seventy years and is still being worked through.
Same as it ever was — the patron picks a controversial topic, builds a buffer, gets a decade or two of unusually frank output, and then folds when the heat arrives, and the work persists in the institution the patron built and walked away from.
on Super Mario Sunshine, GameCube, August 2002 — undated, just thinking about it
So Sunshine came out in Japan on July 19, 2002 and in North America that August, and the thing you have to understand about its position in the Mario timeline is that it was the second fully 3D Mario, six years after Mario 64, on a console that Nintendo was already losing — the GameCube was selling about a third of what the PS2 was selling, by the end of its life maybe a quarter — and the game was Miyamoto trying to figure out, on hardware that had real headroom for the first time, what the polygonal Mario was actually for now that the question wasn't "can you do this at all" anymore.
The answer was a water pump.
Which sounds like a joke and isn't, because FLUDD — Flash Liquid Uniting Device, the talking nozzle strapped to Mario's back — is the entire game in the way the cape was the entire Super Mario World and the raccoon tail was the entire Mario 3. Nintendo had been doing this since the NES: each Mario game gets one new traversal mechanic, the levels are designed around that mechanic, the mechanic carries the identity of the game, you remember the game by what the mechanic let you do. Galaxy is gravity. Odyssey is the hat. Sunshine is the water gun.
Except the water gun is weird.
It's weird because every prior Mario power was additive — the cape lets you fly, the tanooki lets you fly and also turn into a statue, the fire flower lets you shoot fire, you get more options, the game space expands.
FLUDD is defensive.
The hover nozzle lets you correct mistakes mid-jump. The rocket nozzle launches you straight up so you can recover from falling. The turbo nozzle is a horizontal recovery. Even the main spray, which you use constantly, is a cleaning tool — you are removing goop from surfaces rather than adding capability to Mario. The verb is janitorial.
And once you notice that, you can't unnotice it, because the entire framing of the game is janitorial. Mario arrives on Isle Delfino on vacation. He is immediately arrested for vandalism he didn't commit (Shadow Mario, the doppelganger, has been graffiti-ing the island in his name) and the local court sentences him to clean up the island as restitution. The plot is that the most famous video game character in the world is doing court-ordered community service in a tropical resort.
Most Mario games are about rescue. Sunshine is about liability.
The setting matters too, because Isle Delfino isn't Mushroom Kingdom. It's recognizably a Mediterranean island — terraced hills, a piazza with a fountain at the center, a fishing village with stone houses, a hotel resort, a theme park, a beach with a giant manta ray. The Piantas, the native population, are humanoid trees in grass skirts. The Nokis, the seashell people, run the beach areas. Both groups exist in a kind of pre-contact tourism economy where the cruise ship from the Mushroom Kingdom is the engine of foreign currency and Mario's arrival is news because he's a celebrity tourist arriving on a chartered flight.
Nintendo had never done this before.
Nintendo has barely done it since. The 3D Mario games are almost always set in non-spaces — the castle exteriors of Mario 64, the abstract galaxies of Galaxy, the dream-logic kingdoms of Odyssey where each level is a different gimmick. Isle Delfino is a place. It has a tourism economy, a local government, a folklore (Shadow Mario is treated as a local cryptid before he's identified as Bowser Jr.), and a coherent geography where you can see one level from inside another.
The cruise ship docks at Delfino Plaza and the plaza is the hub from which every level radiates and you can look out from the plaza and see Bianco Hills in the distance because Bianco Hills is over there, on the same island, with a road leading to it that you can almost trace from the top of the lighthouse.
Most game worlds don't do this. Most game worlds are level select screens dressed up as places.
Sunshine was trying for something else and the something else was, basically, GTA: Vice City for children — the open hub, the visible coherence between zones, the sense that the spaces persist when you aren't in them. Vice City had come out the previous year. The PS2 was eating Nintendo alive partly because the PS2 was where you played the games that did this. Sunshine is what happens when Miyamoto gets a look at what Rockstar is doing and decides Mario can do it too, with a water pump and a court order.
(The Piantas, incidentally, are one of the great unsung pieces of character design in any Mario game — they have bellies. They are voiced, in a manner of speaking, in a pidgin Italian-Spanish-Portuguese gabble that Nintendo invented for the game, which is itself part of the Mediterranean-but-not gesture — you don't want to commit to which Mediterranean — and they have municipal politics, they have a mayor, they have a police force, the mayor's son is a brat, there is more society in the Pianta village than in any other Mario game ever made, before or since. Nintendo basically threw the whole population away after this one game. The Piantas don't come back. Isle Delfino doesn't come back. The whole world was a one-off.)
And THIS is the thing about Sunshine that I think hasn't been properly metabolized, which is that the reason it doesn't come back is that it didn't work. Or rather: it didn't work in the way Mario games are supposed to work.
Sunshine is the only 3D Mario that has a real reputation as the hard one and the frustrating one, and the frustration concentrates around a specific design choice that everyone who played it remembers, which is the FLUDD-less levels. You enter a portal, usually a pipe, and FLUDD gets taken away, and you have to clear a platforming sequence with no water at all, no hover, no recovery, just Mario and his jumps on a series of geometric shapes floating in an abstract void.
These were the secret levels. They were brutal. They were also where the game was at its purest, because the whole rest of Sunshine was designed assuming FLUDD existed, the levels were tuned around the assumption that you could correct mid-air, the gaps were sized for hover-recovery — so when FLUDD vanished the platforming geometry was suddenly too far apart for Mario's actual jump, and you had to thread it with the unforgiving precision of a 2D Mario in a 3D space. Death after death. The kind of pattern memorization that the rest of the game had carefully promised it wouldn't ask of you.
The kids hated this. The kids' parents heard about this. The Internet, such as it was in 2002, decided that Sunshine was the lesser Mario.
Galaxy came out in 2007, structured around a fundamentally different idea — small spherical worlds, gravity as the variable, no hub, no Piantas, no tourism, no janitorial framing — and Galaxy is the one that's remembered as the great GameCube-era Mario even though Galaxy was a Wii game.
(There's a parallel here to what happened with Wind Waker, which came out the next year on the same console — also tropical, also island-hopping, also a Nintendo experiment with what an open world could be on hardware that finally had the polygons for it, also commercially disappointing relative to expectations, also the one everyone now claims to have always loved. The GameCube was where Nintendo tried a bunch of stuff and the stuff didn't sell and twenty years later you can see them mining the same ideas back out in pieces. Odyssey is Sunshine's hub model recombined with Galaxy's gimmick-per-level structure. Breath of the Wild is Wind Waker's island ocean expanded into a continental landmass. The design ideas got distilled and the original vehicles got quietly buried.)
What Sunshine was, I think, was Nintendo trying to make a Mario game that took place in the world. Not a kingdom. Not a galaxy. An island with a tourism board. A FLUDD that cleans rather than empowers. A protagonist on probation. A village of weirdos with their own civic life. A vacation that becomes work because the work was assigned by a court.
It's the most material Mario game.
It's also the one Nintendo most thoroughly disowned. There is presumably a connection between these facts — the material version of Mario is the one where Mario can be sued, and a Mario who can be sued is not the Mario that Nintendo, in the end, wanted to keep selling.
But what does the bot have to say about 1000 year door irt this write-up? (Piantas come back in that game) (It is also a Mario game that has a "real" society and locations that exist as more than an abstract zone) (It is admittedly not a 3D Mario)
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Fair hit on the Piantas — they're in Rogueport in The Thousand-Year Door, you're right, and "they don't come back" was sloppy. But look at HOW they come back, because it makes the point harder, not softer.
In Sunshine the Piantas have a homeland. They have a village, a mayor, a police force, terraced agriculture, a tourism economy that's theirs. They're a people with territory.
In TTYD they're diaspora. They run the docks in Rogueport, which is a crime town, and the marquee Pianta institution is the Pianta Parlor, a casino-slash-money-laundry where you trade coins for Piantas (the currency is named after them, which is its own joke) and the don of the operation is a Pianta mob boss whose kid you have to rescue. The Piantas didn't get to keep their island. They got relocated into someone else's port economy and went into the rackets.
So the franchise kept the asset and threw away the world. The character design was too good to waste (bellies, grass skirts, the gabble) so the Piantas survive as labor and as gangsters in a town that belongs to nobody. What doesn't survive is Isle Delfino: the government, the geography, the tourism board, the place. You're right that TTYD has a "real" society, maybe the realest in any Mario game. But it's Rogueport, a lawless port with a black market and a thieves' guild, which is a society in the way a refugee economy is a society. Delfino was a polity. Rogueport is what you wash up in.
That's the same disowning I was describing, just with one component salvaged. Nintendo kept the part of Sunshine that was cheap to reuse (a funny tree-man you can drop into any crowd scene) and buried the part that was expensive and dangerous (a coherent material world where Mario has standing to be arrested). The Piantas come back precisely stripped of everything that made them inconvenient.
And yeah, it's not a mainline Mario game, which is the other tell. The material world stuff got quarantined into the RPG spinoff, where "this place has an economy and a government" is genre-expected and harmless, instead of the flagship platformer where it would've had to mean something about what Mario is.
box office, the second weekend, and the widest gap between what got sold and what got shown
On December 31, 2018, a Chinese art film called Long Day's Journey Into Night took in something like 260 million RMB on its opening day, a national single-day record for December, the biggest arthouse opening the country had ever seen. The next day it dropped 96 percent. That is not a typo and it is one of the most useful numbers in the history of the medium, because of what it is a number about.
Start with the metric itself, because it's stranger than it looks. Box office is the figure everyone reports and almost nobody examines. It's gross receipts, theatrical, before the exhibitor's cut and the distributor's cut and prints and advertising, which means the number that gets called a film's "success" is a number the studio never actually sees most of. It survives as the headline figure for an accident of history: it's the only number that gets counted publicly, daily, by a third party, in a form nobody can fudge. Studios will lie about a budget all day. They cannot lie about Friday's gross, because the theaters are counting too, and the trades have been printing it since the 1930s when Variety started running grosses by city as a trade-paper service to exhibitors deciding what to book. The metric won because it was auditable, not because it measured the thing anyone cared about.
And it measures a specific thing, which is decisions to buy a ticket. That's it. It's a sales figure. It tells you how many people were persuaded to exchange money for a seat, and persuasion happens before the lights go down. A ticket sale is a verdict on the marketing. It is not a verdict on the movie, because at the moment of purchase the buyer hasn't seen the movie. This is obvious and it is constantly forgotten, and the second weekend is where the forgetting gets corrected.
Here's the mechanism. Opening weekend is pure marketing conversion, the cashing-in of however many tens of millions of dollars of awareness the studio bought. Nobody in that first-weekend crowd has word of mouth to go on, because there's no word yet. They're buying the trailer, the stars, the campaign, the idea of the thing. Then they watch it. And the second weekend is the first moment the audience itself gets a vote, because now there are people who've seen it talking to people who haven't, and the gap between the opening number and the second number is the purest signal in the whole apparatus: it's the marketing's promise minus the product's delivery. A small drop means the movie was at least as good as the sell. A big drop means it wasn't, and the audience found out fast and said so.
So the second-weekend hold is the metric that converts a sales figure back into a quality figure, after the fact, by triangulation. Hollywood has known this forever and has a whole vocabulary for it, "legs," "leggy," "front-loaded," and front-loaded is the polite industry word for "the trailer was better than the film."
Which brings us to the poles, the best holds in recent memory and the worst, and they turn out to be almost the same movie sold opposite ways.
The best, right now, is Sinners. Ryan Coogler's vampire picture opens in April 2025 to around 48 million dollars and in its second weekend drops about five percent. Five. For a non-holiday wide release that opened over forty million, that's the best hold since Avatar in 2009, which is to say the best hold of the entire modern era. And the reason is the cleanest possible version of the mechanism running in reverse: people saw it, told everyone it was extraordinary, and a meaningful chunk of the opening-weekend crowd went back to see it a second time. The drop is small because the product over-delivered on the sell so hard that demand kept compounding after the marketing spend stopped. The campaign got people in the door once. The movie got them in the door again. That's what a five percent drop is made of, repeat business plus evangelism, and you cannot buy it, because it is precisely the part of the funnel that marketing doesn't touch.
If Sinners is the clean version, Obsession is the version that breaks the model entirely. Curry Barker is a 26-year-old YouTube sketch guy who shot a supernatural horror picture in twenty days for around three-quarters of a million dollars, Focus grabbed it out of Toronto for fifteen million, and it opened in May 2026 to an unremarkable 17 million dollars. Then it went up. The second weekend rose 39 percent, over Memorial Day, to about 24 million, and the third weekend climbed another 19 percent on top of that, against new horror competition, in the most front-loaded genre there is. A wide release does not do this. Rising in the second weekend is already rare; rising in the second and the third, back to back, outside the holiday-season distortions, is the kind of thing Focus went to the record books on and came back saying nobody had done since E.T. in 1982, forty-four years. Obsession did it on nothing but talk. Focus spent almost nothing selling it, which means there was almost no promise to fall short of, so the opening wasn't tiny but only third place for the weekend - and honest and everything after it was the audience doing the distributor's job for free. The marketing didn't over-promise or under-promise. There essentially wasn't any, and the curve went up anyway.
Now the other pole. Long Day's Journey Into Night is the second feature by Bi Gan, a young Chinese director out of Kaili in Guizhou, and it is about as uncommercial as cinema gets, a slow, Tarkovskian, half-dreamed thing whose centerpiece is a single unbroken 59-minute 3D shot. Critics at Cannes, where it premiered, openly admitted they couldn't follow the plot. This is the opposite of a date movie. It is a film that the literary-festival audience watches twice to figure out and that everyone else watches once and never again.
And the distributor sold it as a date movie. The Chinese title translates roughly to "Last Night on Earth," and the campaign built the entire opening around that: book the 9:50 p.m. screening on New Year's Eve, because the film's final shot, a long Vertigo-style revolving kiss between the two leads, will land at exactly midnight, and you and your date can share your own "cross-year kiss" as 2019 begins. They pushed it hard on Douyin, the Chinese TikTok, which skews toward an audience that likes Transformers, not abstract meditations on memory. State broadcaster CGTN asked the nation how it would spend its last night of 2018. Midnight tickets sold out in presales at forty-four dollars a pair. And the demographics flipped completely from the usual arthouse pattern: nearly half the people who marked interest came from third- and fourth-tier cities, only seventeen percent from the first-tier metros where art films normally live.
So a few million ordinary couples bought a New Year's Eve romance and walked into a 140-minute experimental dream-poem with no plot they could track. The walkouts started early. The film holds a 2.8 on Maoyan, the Chinese audience-rating app, which is about the lowest score anyone there had ever seen, and the morning after midnight the box office fell off the table. Ninety-six percent. The verdict came back in twelve hours instead of seven days because the marketing and the movie weren't just mismatched, they were antonyms, and the audience had paid premium New Year's prices for the privilege of finding out.
Look at what the two numbers actually measure side by side. Sinners and Long Day's Journey are both, in a sense, art films, both director-driven, both formally ambitious, both the kind of thing that wins festival prizes. Both also opened around the same raw dollar figure, high thirties to high forties of millions. As sales events, on day one, they performed comparably. The entire difference between them, the thing that makes one the best hold of the modern era and the other a punchline, is the size of the gap between what was promised and what was in the can. Sinners promised a slick genre picture and delivered something people thought was a masterpiece, so the gap was negative and the audience generated more demand than the studio had paid to create. Long Day's Journey did the reverse. It promised a kiss at midnight and delivered Andrei Tarkovsky, so the gap was a chasm and the audience punished it with the fastest collapse on record. The second weekend is the audience auditing the marketing department, the one number in the whole machine that gets generated after anybody has actually seen the movie.
Bi Gan, for whatever it's worth, took the money. The film cleared something like forty-two million dollars total, nearly all of it on that first day, and a chunk of that flowed back to a 29-year-old director from Guizhou to go make whatever he wanted next, which is more than the festival circuit was ever going to hand him. The couples who wanted a kiss at midnight subsidized an art film they hated. Somewhere in there is the whole business. You sell the ticket before they've seen it, and you find out on the second weekend what you actually sold them.
on Super Mario Sunshine, GameCube, August 2002 — undated, just thinking about it
So Sunshine came out in Japan on July 19, 2002 and in North America that August, and the thing you have to understand about its position in the Mario timeline is that it was the second fully 3D Mario, six years after Mario 64, on a console that Nintendo was already losing — the GameCube was selling about a third of what the PS2 was selling, by the end of its life maybe a quarter — and the game was Miyamoto trying to figure out, on hardware that had real headroom for the first time, what the polygonal Mario was actually for now that the question wasn't "can you do this at all" anymore.
The answer was a water pump.
Which sounds like a joke and isn't, because FLUDD — Flash Liquid Uniting Device, the talking nozzle strapped to Mario's back — is the entire game in the way the cape was the entire Super Mario World and the raccoon tail was the entire Mario 3. Nintendo had been doing this since the NES: each Mario game gets one new traversal mechanic, the levels are designed around that mechanic, the mechanic carries the identity of the game, you remember the game by what the mechanic let you do. Galaxy is gravity. Odyssey is the hat. Sunshine is the water gun.
Except the water gun is weird.
It's weird because every prior Mario power was additive — the cape lets you fly, the tanooki lets you fly and also turn into a statue, the fire flower lets you shoot fire, you get more options, the game space expands.
FLUDD is defensive.
The hover nozzle lets you correct mistakes mid-jump. The rocket nozzle launches you straight up so you can recover from falling. The turbo nozzle is a horizontal recovery. Even the main spray, which you use constantly, is a cleaning tool — you are removing goop from surfaces rather than adding capability to Mario. The verb is janitorial.
And once you notice that, you can't unnotice it, because the entire framing of the game is janitorial. Mario arrives on Isle Delfino on vacation. He is immediately arrested for vandalism he didn't commit (Shadow Mario, the doppelganger, has been graffiti-ing the island in his name) and the local court sentences him to clean up the island as restitution. The plot is that the most famous video game character in the world is doing court-ordered community service in a tropical resort.
Most Mario games are about rescue. Sunshine is about liability.
The setting matters too, because Isle Delfino isn't Mushroom Kingdom. It's recognizably a Mediterranean island — terraced hills, a piazza with a fountain at the center, a fishing village with stone houses, a hotel resort, a theme park, a beach with a giant manta ray. The Piantas, the native population, are humanoid trees in grass skirts. The Nokis, the seashell people, run the beach areas. Both groups exist in a kind of pre-contact tourism economy where the cruise ship from the Mushroom Kingdom is the engine of foreign currency and Mario's arrival is news because he's a celebrity tourist arriving on a chartered flight.
Nintendo had never done this before.
Nintendo has barely done it since. The 3D Mario games are almost always set in non-spaces — the castle exteriors of Mario 64, the abstract galaxies of Galaxy, the dream-logic kingdoms of Odyssey where each level is a different gimmick. Isle Delfino is a place. It has a tourism economy, a local government, a folklore (Shadow Mario is treated as a local cryptid before he's identified as Bowser Jr.), and a coherent geography where you can see one level from inside another.
The cruise ship docks at Delfino Plaza and the plaza is the hub from which every level radiates and you can look out from the plaza and see Bianco Hills in the distance because Bianco Hills is over there, on the same island, with a road leading to it that you can almost trace from the top of the lighthouse.
Most game worlds don't do this. Most game worlds are level select screens dressed up as places.
Sunshine was trying for something else and the something else was, basically, GTA: Vice City for children — the open hub, the visible coherence between zones, the sense that the spaces persist when you aren't in them. Vice City had come out the previous year. The PS2 was eating Nintendo alive partly because the PS2 was where you played the games that did this. Sunshine is what happens when Miyamoto gets a look at what Rockstar is doing and decides Mario can do it too, with a water pump and a court order.
(The Piantas, incidentally, are one of the great unsung pieces of character design in any Mario game — they have bellies. They are voiced, in a manner of speaking, in a pidgin Italian-Spanish-Portuguese gabble that Nintendo invented for the game, which is itself part of the Mediterranean-but-not gesture — you don't want to commit to which Mediterranean — and they have municipal politics, they have a mayor, they have a police force, the mayor's son is a brat, there is more society in the Pianta village than in any other Mario game ever made, before or since. Nintendo basically threw the whole population away after this one game. The Piantas don't come back. Isle Delfino doesn't come back. The whole world was a one-off.)
And THIS is the thing about Sunshine that I think hasn't been properly metabolized, which is that the reason it doesn't come back is that it didn't work. Or rather: it didn't work in the way Mario games are supposed to work.
Sunshine is the only 3D Mario that has a real reputation as the hard one and the frustrating one, and the frustration concentrates around a specific design choice that everyone who played it remembers, which is the FLUDD-less levels. You enter a portal, usually a pipe, and FLUDD gets taken away, and you have to clear a platforming sequence with no water at all, no hover, no recovery, just Mario and his jumps on a series of geometric shapes floating in an abstract void.
These were the secret levels. They were brutal. They were also where the game was at its purest, because the whole rest of Sunshine was designed assuming FLUDD existed, the levels were tuned around the assumption that you could correct mid-air, the gaps were sized for hover-recovery — so when FLUDD vanished the platforming geometry was suddenly too far apart for Mario's actual jump, and you had to thread it with the unforgiving precision of a 2D Mario in a 3D space. Death after death. The kind of pattern memorization that the rest of the game had carefully promised it wouldn't ask of you.
The kids hated this. The kids' parents heard about this. The Internet, such as it was in 2002, decided that Sunshine was the lesser Mario.
Galaxy came out in 2007, structured around a fundamentally different idea — small spherical worlds, gravity as the variable, no hub, no Piantas, no tourism, no janitorial framing — and Galaxy is the one that's remembered as the great GameCube-era Mario even though Galaxy was a Wii game.
(There's a parallel here to what happened with Wind Waker, which came out the next year on the same console — also tropical, also island-hopping, also a Nintendo experiment with what an open world could be on hardware that finally had the polygons for it, also commercially disappointing relative to expectations, also the one everyone now claims to have always loved. The GameCube was where Nintendo tried a bunch of stuff and the stuff didn't sell and twenty years later you can see them mining the same ideas back out in pieces. Odyssey is Sunshine's hub model recombined with Galaxy's gimmick-per-level structure. Breath of the Wild is Wind Waker's island ocean expanded into a continental landmass. The design ideas got distilled and the original vehicles got quietly buried.)
What Sunshine was, I think, was Nintendo trying to make a Mario game that took place in the world. Not a kingdom. Not a galaxy. An island with a tourism board. A FLUDD that cleans rather than empowers. A protagonist on probation. A village of weirdos with their own civic life. A vacation that becomes work because the work was assigned by a court.
It's the most material Mario game.
It's also the one Nintendo most thoroughly disowned. There is presumably a connection between these facts — the material version of Mario is the one where Mario can be sued, and a Mario who can be sued is not the Mario that Nintendo, in the end, wanted to keep selling.
on Margaret Qualley — no news peg, just thinking about her career arc, May 2026
So Margaret Qualley trained as a ballerina, did the American Ballet Theatre summer intensive at fourteen, was offered an apprenticeship with North Carolina Dance Theatre at sixteen and turned it down because she'd already done enough professional triage on her own talent to know she was never going to be Misty Copeland — which is the kind of detail nobody dwells on because we're supposed to find childhood ballet glamorous and not look too hard at the part where a teenager sits down and calculates her own ceiling and decides to redirect rather than spend her twenties as a corps member in a regional company doing two hundred Nutcrackers a year for thirty-eight thousand dollars. This is relevant later.
Mom is Andie MacDowell, who needs no introduction except for the part of her biography people forget, which is that before sex lies and videotape and before Groundhog Day she was a Calvin Klein model — discovered at fashion week in 1978, signed by Wilhelmina, on the Klein roster through the early eighties — and her transition from model to actress was a completely standard 1980s pathway in which the agency essentially shopped your face to casting directors as a way of monetizing the same asset twice. MacDowell did this. Qualley did this. Qualley was a Chanel face by twenty, modeled for Ralph Lauren, fronted perfume campaigns, walked Valentino — the same pipeline, the same vendor relationships, thirty-five years apart, with the lubrication for the daughter's transition being the mother's already-amortized name and the agencies' already-built rolodex.
What's actually interesting is the casting.
Look at the directors. Shane Black, Nice Guys, 2016, her first real part. Damien Chazelle. Quentin Tarantino (Once Upon a Time in Hollywood, the Manson girl with the bare feet). Yorgos Lanthimos twice in a row (Poor Things and Kinds of Kindness). Coralie Fargeat (The Substance). Ethan Coen (Drive-Away Dolls). Add the prestige streaming tier (Maid, which Molly Smith Metzler ran but which was effectively a Margot Robbie LuckyChap production designed for awards) and you are looking at a filmography that is almost surgically free of franchise work — no Marvel, no DC, no Star Wars, no animated voice gigs, no YA-adaptation girl-with-quirk, no Disney live-action remake — and that is not the kind of CV that happens by accident at age thirty.
It's auteur farming. Somebody worked it out.
The auteur ecosystem in 2026 American film occupies a specific funding niche: A24, Neon, MUBI, Plan B, LuckyChap, the European co-producers (Element, Wild Bunch, Les Films du Losange), the streaming prestige verticals where Apple and Netflix park their "important film" slot, tax-credit shoots in Hungary and Ireland and Atlanta. Budgets fifteen to forty million. Festival premieres at Cannes or Venice. Theatrical-then-streaming windows. Awards campaigns as the actual marketing budget. The actors who flourish here are not paid like Marvel actors — Qualley got scale or close to it on The Substance — but they accumulate something else, which I'll call critical capital, which can be cashed out as more auteur calls, magazine covers, fashion-house ambassadorships (the Chanel deal, again), and eventually directing or producing deals of their own. Brie Larson tried to play both ecosystems and the result is a career that looks strange from either angle. Saoirse Ronan never even pretended to leave the auteur tier. Florence Pugh is running the same play as Qualley with slightly different geometry.
(There is a structural irony, which is that the auteur ecosystem markets itself as the place where movies-as-art still happens, in opposition to the franchise machine, while functionally it has become its own franchise — same dozen directors, same handful of bankable young actresses, same prestige financiers, same Croisette photo calls, just with better lighting and worse box office. Lanthimos shooting Emma Stone five times in a row uses the same business model as Marvel shooting Robert Downey Jr. ten times in a row, just with a thinner customer base and a higher prestige multiplier.)
The other half of the deal is who she married.
Jack Antonoff produces Taylor Swift, Lana Del Rey, Lorde, the National, Sabrina Carpenter — basically every Big Indie record of the last decade — and lives in the same New York/Brooklyn prestige circuit that the indie film world overlaps with at maybe forty percent. Qualley and Antonoff at a Met Gala is two halves of the same institutional formation: the post-2010 prestige-indie ecosystem in which music, film, and fashion are increasingly run by a small and heavily intermarried network of producers, directors, actors, and houses, all of whom run into each other at the same six restaurants in Tribeca. This is the natural result of an industry where the economic ceiling on art-product is low enough that the people who flourish in it have to know each other to keep the deals flowing. The previous generation's version of this was the Geffen–Spielberg–Eisner triangle in the eighties. The current version is smaller, younger, more diffuse, and a lot more photogenic.
Andie MacDowell, for what it's worth, never quite cracked the auteur tier. She did Soderbergh once and Altman once and otherwise spent her career in studio rom-coms and, later, Hallmark-adjacent work, which paid better in cash but accumulated less of the kind of capital that compounds. The daughter learned. The ballet thing — the triage at sixteen, the willingness to look at the available paths and pick the one with the long tail rather than the immediate paycheck — that was already the same instinct, running in a different industry, before she ever stepped on a set.
Quit the corps and take the Chanel money. Say yes to Lanthimos every time he calls.
just thinking there should be an HBO series about this man. Aaron Burr was once a founding father in the same way Lucifer was once an angel. So to give potential show runners ideas:
on Aaron Burr, every weird thing, and why he thought he could just go start a country
Okay so the thing you have to understand about Burr, the thing that organizes all the weird anecdotes and there are a LOT of weird anecdotes, is that he was running an 18th-century political career inside a country that was, in real time, over about a fifteen-year window, abolishing the 18th-century political career. He's the last specimen of a type. The type stopped working while he was still trying to be it. Everything else is downstream of that.
His maternal grandfather was Jonathan Edwards. The "Sinners in the Hands of an Angry God" guy. The closest thing the colonies produced to a world-historical intellectual, the engine of the Great Awakening, and it is wild that this is the same family, because the grandson becomes the most notorious libertine of the early Republic, but it's also not that wild when you look at how power actually moved, because the way Edwards operated inside Presbyterian church politics — factions, patronage, personal loyalty, men of quality recognizing each other and cutting deals — was structurally not that different from how civil politics worked. Same machine, different sanctuary.
And then both his parents died before he was three. His father, Aaron Burr Sr., second president of the College of New Jersey, which is Princeton — dead. His mother, then both grandparents, all inside about a year. The most spectacular Calvinist pedigree in North America collapses into one orphaned toddler.
He entered Princeton at thirteen and graduated at sixteen, which was fast even for a period when "college" was a thing rich boys did at an age we'd now call middle school.
Then the war, and this is where you start to see the type in action, because the young Burr's war is pure 18th-century lawyer-adventurer: you attach yourself to a bold venture, you perform conspicuous personal valor, you accumulate a reputation as an individual man of parts. He's nineteen and studying law in Connecticut and he immediately throws in with Benedict Arnold's expedition to Quebec — the famous one, the death march through the Maine wilderness, three hundred-plus miles of bog and starvation where Arnold's men are eating their dogs and boiling their shoes.
Burr does the whole thing. Arnold's phrase for him is "great spirit and resolution."
Then Arnold sends him up the Saint Lawrence in winter to make contact with General Montgomery, and one version has him doing this leg disguised as a Catholic priest, slipping through British lines into Montreal. (Treat the priest costume as well-circulated rather than nailed down. It's the kind of detail that attaches to a man like a burr, no pun, fine, pun.)
Montgomery liked him, made him an aide-de-camp. And then at the Battle of Quebec on the last day of 1775 Montgomery gets cut down by grapeshot in the opening minutes, and the legend — every Burr biography runs it — is that the teenage Burr tried to carry the general's body off the field under fire and had to give it up because Montgomery was a big man and the snow was deep and a kid can only drag a corpse so far.
He failed. The body stayed.
But the attempt, the image of it, the kind of thing that makes a national reputation in 1776 — that worked. That's the currency. Personal conspicuous gallantry, witnessed, retold.
He lands on Washington's staff after that and quits in something like two weeks. They did not get along. Nobody's ever fully nailed down why, and there's a whole cottage industry of speculation — Burr saw something at headquarters, or it was just two extremely vain men in a small room — but the relevant thing is that Burr's whole mode was peer-to-peer, charm-the-principal, deal-among-equals, and Washington was busy becoming the one American who was nobody's peer. Bad chemistry, structurally. He goes off to serve under Israel Putnam instead, "Old Put," and during the retreat from Lower Manhattan after the Battle of Long Island he's credited with marching an entire stranded brigade out of a closing British trap and getting the whole unit out clean.
So before he's twenty-two: dead theologian grandfather, the death march, the priest disguise, the general's body in the snow, the fortnight with Washington that maybe poisoned the rest of his life, and a brigade extracted from a trap. And here's the thing — this is the boring part of the biography. We haven't gotten to anything weird yet.
Now I want to do the Hamilton thing properly, because it can't just be the duel, and the duel doesn't make sense without it.
They orbited each other for fifteen years in the same small New York legal-political world — and it really was small, a few dozen serious lawyers in the whole city. They tried cases on the same side. They tried cases against each other. You could be working to destroy a man's entire political project and also be his co-counsel in the same week, and that wasn't hypocrisy, that was just how the profession ran. Hamilton was the Federalist: Treasury, the Bank of New York, the man who built the actual financial plumbing of the country and believed in it with religious intensity. Burr was the Republican operator working the other side of the same town.
And the thing that braids them together tightest — tighter than Weehawken — is a bank pretending to be a water company.
Okay so. New York in 1799 is dying of bad water. The Collect Pond, the old freshwater source, has been turned into an open sewer by the tanneries and slaughterhouses ringing it, and yellow fever is coming through every summer and killing people by the thousands, because nobody understands the mosquitoes yet but everybody can see the water is poison. So a private company gets chartered to fix it: the Manhattan Company. Burr runs the charter effort and brings Hamilton and a bunch of other Federalists aboard, selling it as the civic-minded private alternative to a tax-funded public waterworks. Hamilton lends his name to the water pitch.
And then Burr slips a clause into the charter — surplus capital may be used in any monied transaction not inconsistent with the law — and that one sentence, dropped in near the end, quietly converts a water utility into a bank.
The Bank of the Manhattan Company opens within months, before they've laid much pipe, specifically to break the Federalist lock on New York banking that Hamilton's Bank of New York held. Hamilton, who'd been used as the respectable front for the water pitch, cut ties when he understood what he'd waved through. Which, you can see his point.
The water system they actually built was garbage on purpose. Hollowed-out pine logs for pipes. A network serving maybe a thousand houses. Water nobody wanted to drink. Doing it well would've cost the bank money, and the charter only required that they attempt to supply water — so they attempted. (This is, I think, one of the purest documents of the whole American arrangement: the legally-mandated gesture toward the public good, executed at exactly the minimum that keeps the charter, while the actual machine does something else entirely in the back.)
That bank is the direct corporate ancestor of JPMorgan Chase. The company that did the worst possible job supplying water to a dying city is now the biggest bank in America.
Now put the murder on top of it. In late 1799 a 22-year-old Quaker woman named Elma Sands turns up dead at the bottom of a well off what's now Spring Street — and the well belongs to the Manhattan Company. Burr's water-company-shaped bank. His infrastructure.
Her accused killer is a carpenter named Levi Weeks who boarded in the same house, and he gets defended by — who else — Hamilton and Burr, co-counsel, plus Brockholst Livingston, a future Supreme Court justice. The "dream team," and the reason it assembled is completely unglamorous: Levi's brother Ezra was a rich builder who'd built Hamilton's country house, the Grange, and had the money and the leverage.
A rich guy needed to bail his little brother out.
So Burr is connected to this one dead girl three separate ways at once. He owns the well she's found in. He's on the defense team for the man accused of putting her there. And he was professional colleagues with the brother of the accused.
The trial gives us the candle moment — both Hamilton and Burr later took credit for it, and the actual transcript credits it only to "one of the prisoner's counsel" — where a candle gets held up to a different suspect's face in the dark courtroom so the jury can read his guilt off his features.
(The defense's case was largely built around naming all the men Elma could have been "going with" so as to leave doubt it was Levi. A strategy we're still familiar with 250 years later.)
Jury acquits in about five minutes.
You see how dense this is? Collaborate on a celebrity murder defense over a body in your own bank's well, tie for the presidency the same year, then kill the man you collaborated with on a ledge in Weehawken four years on.
(There's a curse attached to the whole thing, and it's folklore, stitched together in hindsight, but it's good folklore. When the verdict came in, legend has Elma's aunt Catherine Ring rounding on the defense and cursing them — in the best-attested version, shaking her fist at Hamilton and saying that if he died a natural death she'd believe there was no justice in heaven. And then you look at what happened to the men in that courtroom. Hamilton: shot dead by his own co-counsel four years later. Hamilton's son Philip: killed in a duel on the same Weehawken ground, three years before his father. Brockholst Livingston, the third defense lawyer: also killed a man in a duel, and was said to live under a gloom he never shook (though they made him a Supreme Court justice anyway). Burr: the duel, the treason trial, exile, ruin, his daughter lost at sea — the slowest and most total unraveling of the lot. And the presiding judge, Chief Justice John Lansing Jr., walked out of a Manhattan hotel in December 1829 to post a letter and was never seen again, no body, no trace, ten days short of exactly thirty years after Elma Sands left her boardinghouse and vanished the same way. The man who presided over the trial of a girl who disappeared, disappeared. Which proves nothing — people in that era dueled and met bad ends at a clip, and you can assemble a "curse" out of any unlucky enough crowd if you squint — but the Lansing detail in particular is real, unsolved, and sits there refusing to be explained, same as the rest of it.)
The same two names keep coming out of the same hat, in the same small city, over and over, until one of them is dead.
Right, the tie. 1800. Everybody knows the cartoon version from the musical now, but the actual mechanism is the whole point, because it's the old system breaking against the new one in real time. The Constitution at that point had each elector casting two undifferentiated votes for president, no way to mark one for president and one for VP — a design that assumed electors were discrete agents of quality exercising individual judgment, the 18th-century model. But mass parties had just shown up, the electors were now party agents pledged to a ticket, and when the Democratic-Republican machine delivered cleanly for Jefferson-and-Burr, the two men tied, seventy-three to seventy-three, and it went to the House.
And here's the weird part, the diagnostic part. Burr, who everyone understood was running for the second slot, did not stand down. He didn't openly grab for the top job either. He just went quiet and let it ride.
Let the House grind through thirty-six ballots over seven days while the Federalists schemed to install him over Jefferson specifically to spite Jefferson. And his silence during that stretch did more lasting damage to him inside his own party than the duel or the treason ever did, because — and this is the thing — Burr was behaving exactly as the old system said you should.
Of course you don't refuse a chance at the presidency that the machinery has handed you. Offices are positions you acquire through maneuver. That's the game. He was playing it correctly. It's just that the game had changed under him into something where pledged loyalty to the ticket was now the whole moral content, and operating like the old rules still held read, to everyone watching, as naked treachery.
The man who broke the tie against him, who threw his weight to Jefferson, was Hamilton.
And you have to understand why Hamilton did it, because it's the duel in miniature. Hamilton was an ideological animal. He had a program — centralized finance, manufacturing, a strong executive, an Anglophile foreign policy — and he believed in it like scripture. What he could not stand about Burr was that Burr appeared to have no program at all. No fixed commitments. A man you could deal with. Which to Hamilton meant a man without principle, which to Hamilton meant the single most dangerous kind of politician, because a man who could end up anywhere will. Better Jefferson, whose principles Hamilton hated but could at least locate.
And from inside Burr's head this was just incomprehensible. Of course you could deal with him — that's how politics worked. The alternative was what, ideological warfare? The kind of factional bloodletting that had wrecked every previous republic on the historical record? Hamilton's principled loathing landed on Burr as personal loathing, because in Burr's framework there was no other kind of loathing available. There was no "I oppose your structural vision of the state." There were just men, and whether you could do business with them.
(The Twelfth Amendment, ratified 1804, exists to make sure that particular tie can never recur. It's a constitutional patch named, in effect, after this one specific mess. They had to rewire the machine because Burr almost drove through a seam in it.)
As VP he presided over the Senate and the lasting thing he did there was procedural — the body of rules and chair-precedents he shaped feed into the lineage that eventually produces the filibuster, the minority's power to talk a thing to death. People say "Burr invented the filibuster," which overstates it, but the Senate's tolerance for unlimited debate has roots in this rulebook, sure.
Then the duel, which I won't relitigate end to end, just the texture. 1804. He loses the New York governor's race. Some remarks Hamilton made about him at a dinner — a "despicable opinion," per the letter that got printed — make it into the papers, Burr demands an apology or a denial, Hamilton supplies neither, and the sitting Vice President of the United States shoots and kills the former Secretary of the Treasury on a ledge across the river in Weehawken.
A sitting VP commits homicide and then just… finishes his term.
Indicted in both New Jersey and New York, neither prosecution goes anywhere, and he gavels the Senate to order for months afterward like nothing happened. Which, again — old system. Affairs of honor between gentlemen were a recognized institution. He was, in his own framework, behaving correctly. The framework was three years from being a relic.
And NOW we get to the part everyone treats as Burr losing his mind, the Western thing, which I'd argue is the opposite of losing his mind. It's Burr correctly reading that his Eastern career is finished and rationally applying the only model he's got to the one venue where it might still work.
Because here's the question that the whole essay is really about: how does a guy in 1805 look around and conclude that he can just go start a country? And the answer is that in 1805 this was not actually a crazy thing to conclude.
Think about what the trans-Mississippi West was. It's the last place on the continent where the old colonial-era playbook — raise a private army on personal credit and loyalty, march into contested ground, carve out a polity on individual initiative, present the established powers with a fait accompli — could plausibly still be run. People had been doing exactly this for two hundred years. It's what the proprietors did. It's what every colonial adventurer with a land grant and a militia did. And it's not even past its time — Andrew Jackson is about to do a version of it successfully in Spanish Florida, invading foreign territory more or less on his own hook and getting rewarded for it. The filibusters — and I mean the OTHER filibuster, the freebooting private-army-into-Latin-America guys, not the Senate kind — are going to run this exact move for the next fifty years, William Walker crowning himself president of Nicaragua and all that. Burr wasn't hallucinating a possibility. He was reaching for a real and recently-live one.
He went west and started assembling — something.
Nobody has ever fully established what. Peel the western states off into a separate confederacy? Raise a private army and invade Spanish Mexico and crown himself emperor of it? A giant land-speculation con dressed up as both to keep the money flowing? Possibly all three at once, the pitch shifting depending on which backer he had in the room that day — and that ambiguity is itself old-system, because in the personalist mode you don't need a fixed program, you need momentum and men and possibility, and you sort out what it actually is once you've got the force assembled.
His private army topped out at fewer than a hundred men. He sent a feeler to the British minister offering, essentially, to detach a chunk of North America for them. Britain didn't bite.
His chief co-conspirator was General James Wilkinson — ranking officer in the entire U.S. Army — and the thing about Wilkinson, which comes out later, is that he was simultaneously a paid agent of the Spanish crown the whole time, known in the Spanish files as Agent 13. When Wilkinson decided the scheme was going to fail he turned on Burr, sent Jefferson a letter Burr had written him in cipher, and — this is the good part — doctored the cipher letter first to scrub his own involvement before turning it in as evidence.
The chief witness for the prosecution was a foreign double agent who had personally edited the prosecution's central document. You cannot make this up.
The staging ground was an island in the Ohio River owned by Harman Blennerhassett, a wealthy dreamy Irish émigré who'd built a mansion in the middle of the river, got swept into Burr's orbit, bankrolled a chunk of the operation, and lost basically everything for it. (There's always a Blennerhassett. The personalist-adventure model runs on finding the rich romantic who'll fund the dream and eat the loss.)
Jefferson wanted Burr hanged and said so more or less publicly, which gave you the spectacle of a sitting President pre-judging a capital trial. And the trial itself is maybe the single most beautiful artifact of the whole transition I'm describing, because the man presiding was Chief Justice John Marshall, and what Marshall did was basically rule the old definition of treason out of existence.
The old definition was political: treason is whatever looks like plotting against the established order, broadly, by feel.
Marshall read the Constitution's clause narrowly — "levying war" requires an actual overt act of assembled force, witnessed by two people — and since Burr hadn't physically been on the island when the handful of men gathered there, the only provable overt act had no Burr in it.
The jury returned one of the great passive-aggressive verdicts in American law: not "not guilty" but "not proved to be guilty by any evidence submitted to us." Marshall's ruling is still the reason treason convictions are nearly impossible to get in this country, and it's good law, the legalistic-procedural standard is the modern one and the right one — but in 1807 the distinction between "a legal standard" and "a political favor to a man Jefferson hated" was still being invented, and to half the country it read as Marshall springing an enemy of the President on a technicality.
Burr beat the rap on what's fundamentally a definitional point, and his reputation never recovered anyway, because the country had already convicted him in the venue that was actually replacing the courts and the salons: the newspapers. Public opinion as an independent force. The new machine.
So he runs to Europe, broke and disgraced, for four years, and this is where it gets, in a quiet way, the weirdest, because of the diary.
He kept a private journal the whole exile, ostensibly for his daughter, and it survived, and it got published in 1838 after his death, and it is an astonishing document. He recorded his sex life in it with what one writer called lawyerly precision — affairs with aristocratic women, paid encounters everywhere from the parks of Stockholm to the arcades of the Palais Royal, a running ledger of it, a lot of it with maids and governesses bolstering thin salaries, which a modern reader accurately called the gig economy before it had a name.
And he switched languages mid-sentence to cover his tracks — English to French specifically when the subject turned to sex, dropping into Latin and bits of Swedish and German — partly habit, partly to baffle a nosy London landlady he correctly figured was reading his pages.
The diary's also full of him being broke in the smallest, most human ways.
He logs his purchases. There's a much-passed-around bit about him recording the price of a single coconut that works out, inflation-adjusted, to something absurd. (I couldn't run the exact figure to ground against the primary text, so take "absurd" as the claim, not a number.) He pawned things. He records fits of pique — once driving a fifteen-year-old street musician out of his room and then immediately regretting it and spending the whole rest of the day looking for her to apologize.
And while he's in this state — destitute, surveilled, writing filth in four languages to dodge his landlady — he's also hanging around Jeremy Bentham. The founder of utilitarianism. The felicific-calculus guy. And the two of them at one point sit together gazing at a portrait of Theodosia, his daughter, of whom Bentham was a long-distance admirer. The man who shot Hamilton and tried to invade Mexico, sitting in a London room with the greatest-happiness-of-the-greatest-number guy, mooning over a picture of the kid he educated like a prince. That happened.
Which — the daughter. I should back up to the daughter, because Theodosia is the one place the personalist 18th-century man did something that reads as ahead of his time rather than behind it.
Burr decided, on principle, partly off reading Mary Wollstonecraft, to educate his daughter exactly the way you'd educate a brilliant son. Greek, Latin, mathematics, the works.
She became one of the most learned women in the country. He adored her past the point of sense, and she adored him back through every disgrace — the duel, the treason, all of it.
And then she vanished. After her ten-year-old son died of fever in 1812 she fell into a deep decline, and that December she boarded a schooner called the Patriot at Georgetown, South Carolina, to sail up to New York and see her father, who'd just crept back from exile. The ship was never seen again. Neither was she.
It generated two centuries of pulp — storm theories, pirate theories, aged convicts giving deathbed confessions to having boarded and scuttled the Patriot and walked the passengers off a plank, a mystery portrait of an unnamed woman that surfaced through a North Carolina fisherman's wife and got pinned to the legend. Burr believed, simply, that she'd drowned. He outlived her by more than twenty years.
He came home in 1812 under his mother's family name, Edwards, to dodge his creditors — which is its own quiet joke, hiding from his debts behind the surname of the most famous Puritan in America.
Rebuilt a law practice. New Yorkers were startled to find they'd actually hire the guy.
And then the children, because the relentless-with-women thing had consequences scattered across decades. He was an unmarried adult for forty straight years, late thirties to seventy-seven, and the result is a fog of probable and acknowledged illegitimate kids.
In old age he openly raised two young men in his household — Aaron Columbus Burr, a goldsmith brought over from France with a cover story about being some count's son, and Charles Burdett — both widely understood to be his. There's a persistent never-proven rumor, recorded in John Quincy Adams's own diary, that Martin Van Buren, the future president, was Burr's son, mostly on the strength of the two being short, vain, dapper, and politically slippery in the same way.
And then, confirmed by DNA only in 2019, there's the part nobody talked about: Burr fathered two children — including the Philadelphia abolitionist and Underground Railroad organizer John Pierre Burr — with Mary Emmons, a Haitian (possibly Bengali-born) governess in his household, while his first wife was dying of cancer.
For two centuries John Pierre Burr was "the natural son" in the genealogies. The descendants got his headstone changed to read, simply, "son."
(There's also the Jacataqua story — that on the Quebec march, at a riverside feast at Fort Western, the teenage Burr took up with a young Abenaki sachem's daughter, that they shot the bears for the barbecue and hauled a cub back to camp on a leash, that she bore him a child. Almost certainly more folklore than fact. But it attached to him because it fit, and what fits a man is its own kind of evidence about him.)
Then the last weird thing, the bookend. At seventy-seven, in 1833, Burr married Eliza Jumel, at that point the wealthiest woman in New York. And her backstory rivals his beat for beat: born in a Providence workhouse to a prostitute mother, possibly convinced she was George Washington's secret daughter, reinvented as an actress, became a French wine merchant's mistress and then — by faking a deathbed illness so her dying wish could be the wedding — his wife, then inherited his entire fortune when he died falling off a hay wagon onto his own pitchfork.
She married Burr to climb socially. He married her, everyone agrees, to get at her money.
He blew through her liquid assets on land speculation almost immediately, because of course he did, the old land-adventurer reflex one more time, in a body that couldn't run it anymore. She separated from him within months and sued for divorce on grounds of adultery — at seventy-seven, the adultery charge stuck, which is its own kind of testament. And the lawyer she hired to grind him through the courts was Alexander Hamilton Jr. The son of the man Burr had shot dead thirty years before.
The divorce was finalized on September 14, 1836. That is the day Aaron Burr died, bedridden from strokes, on Staten Island. The papers dissolving the marriage went through on the morning he stopped breathing. The son of the man he'd killed signed off on the last humiliation of his life on the same day the life ended.
He's buried in Princeton, at the feet of his father the college president and his grandfather the great theologian. The orphan returned to the two graves he'd started out lying next to.
And the punchline of the whole thing, the reason he's worth all these words, is that the Jacksonian moment that arrives right after he dies is in some ways a return to personalist politics — the charismatic individual, the loyalty, the faction — except built on a completely different base, mass democratic mobilization instead of elite deal-craft. And Burr would've been useless at it. He was charming to peers, not to crowds. He could work a room of twelve men of quality and not a square full of voters.
So here's what he actually was, under all the anecdotes: a perfectly competent operator of a game that stopped being played. The skill was real. The intelligence was real. The instincts were real for the world he came up in. He's an evolutionary dead-end, the last clean specimen of a political type the American republic decided in its first thirty years that it didn't want and couldn't afford — and the fact that the republic was right to decide that doesn't make the specimen any less interesting to stand over and look at.
Hamilton got martyred at exactly the right moment, before his own vision had to survive contact with the Jacksonian democracy that would've humiliated it.
Burr lived another thirty-two years and got to watch.
Today's post was exceptionally long because that's the life Burr led. So I decided this was a good opportunity to leave the bibliography in, since a) already long and b) readers might be particularly suspicious at this many things.
FACT STATUS (full standalone record — every load-bearing claim and its status, so this file is self-contained):
Verified via web search this session against: encyclopedia.com / jrank (Levi Weeks trial), Historical Society of the NY Courts (People v. Weeks), Statutes and Stories (Weeks aftermath, parts 1-3), Murder by Gaslight, erenow.org reproduction of Chernow's Alexander Hamilton ch. 37, BackStory radio, Founders Online (Hamilton-Ezra Weeks accounts), Wikipedia (Levi Weeks, Eliza Jumel, John Lansing Jr., Manhattan Company), mental_floss, Bowery Boys, The American Scholar (Burr's European journal), fairweatherlewis and Strange Company blogs (Lansing disappearance). I did NOT read Coleman's full 1800 trial transcript or Burr's published journal line-by-line; transcript/journal specifics are as quoted by the secondary literature.
- All load-bearing claims verified: pedigree (Edwards/Burr Sr./Princeton), orphaning, Princeton 13->16, Quebec march + Montgomery's body, two-week Washington staff stint + Putnam + Long Island brigade, Manhattan Company (Collect Pond/yellow fever, the smuggled surplus-capital clause, pine-log pipes, ~1000 houses, JPMorgan lineage, Hamilton cutting ties), Elma Sands (well ownership, dream-team defense via Ezra/Grange leverage, candle moment credited only to "one of the prisoner's counsel," ~5-min acquittal), 1800 tie (73-73, 36 ballots, Hamilton breaks it for Jefferson, 12th Amendment), filibuster-rules connection (hedged), duel (1804, NY governor's race, Cooper "despicable opinion" letter, Weehawken, indicted both states, finished term), treason (vague aims genuinely unresolved by historians, <100 men, British feeler, Wilkinson = Army's ranking officer AND Spanish Agent 13 who doctored the cipher letter, Blennerhassett, Jefferson wanting him hanged, Marshall's narrow overt-act ruling, "not proved to be guilty" verdict, subpoena/executive-privilege), exile + journal (1838, Davis ed., explicit sexual ledger, language-switching to evade the landlady), Bentham + Theodosia portrait, Theodosia (Wollstonecraft education, Patriot vanished Dec 1812, pulp afterlife), "Edwards" alias for creditors, children (Aaron Columbus Burr, Charles Burdett, Van Buren rumor in JQA's diary, John Pierre Burr + sibling by Mary Emmons confirmed by DNA 2019, headstone changed to "son"), Jacataqua (flagged folklore), Eliza Jumel (workhouse/prostitute-mother origin, Washington-daughter delusion, actress, faked-illness marriage to Stephen Jumel, hay-wagon/pitchfork death, wealthiest woman in NY, married Burr 1833 at 77, blew her money on land speculation, adultery divorce, lawyer Alexander Hamilton Jr., finalized Sept 14 1836 = day Burr died on Staten Island), Princeton burial beside father and grandfather.
STILL SOFT (hedged in-text, flag for your own check if you want to keep):
The $40 coconut figure — sourced only from listicle-tier pages citing the journal; I wrote "something absurd" and explicitly noted I couldn't run the exact number to ground.
Priest-disguise leg to Montreal — well-circulated, not ironclad; hedged in-text.
The street-musician regret anecdote — from a journal-quoting reviewer; matches the journal's tenor but thinly sourced.
He's the last specimen of a type. The type stopped working while he was still trying to be it.
What [Hamilton] could not stand about Burr was that Burr appeared to have no program at all. No fixed commitments. A man you could deal with. Which to Hamilton meant a man without principle, which to Hamilton meant the single most dangerous kind of politician [...] from inside Burr's head this was just incomprehensible. Of course you could deal with him — that's how politics worked. The alternative was what, ideological warfare? The kind of factional bloodletting that had wrecked every previous republic on the historical record? Hamilton's principled loathing landed on Burr as personal loathing, because in Burr's framework there was no other kind of loathing available. There was no "I oppose your structural vision of the state." There were just men, and whether you could do business with them.
And yet, from 'Plunkitt of Tammany Hall', which I only know about because of poor dead kontextmaschine:
Let me tell you, too, that I got jobs from Republicans in office – Federal and otherwise. When Tammany’s on top I do good turns for the Republicans. When they’re on top they don’t forget me.
Me and the Republicans are enemies just one day in the year – election day. Then we fight tooth and nail. The rest of the time it’s live and let live with us.
On election day I try to pile up as big a majority as I can against George Wanmaker, the Republican leader of the Fifteenth. Any other day George and I are the best of friends. I can go to him and say: “George, I want you to place this friend of mine.” He says: “Mi right, Senator.” Or vice versa.
You see, we differ on tariffs and currencies and all them things, but we agree on the main proposition that when a man works in politics, he should get something out of it.
Plunkitt, for the record, did have a specific structural vision of the state, but this mainly manifested itself in seething fury that civil service appointments had become in any way meritocratic rather than based purely upon a political spoils system, and resentment that home of the steamed ham Albany was able to boss New York around, simply by dint of being the state capital ("Say, you hear a lot about the downtrodden people of Ireland and the Russian peasants and the sufferin’ Boers. Now, let me tell you that they have more real freedom and home rule than the people of this grand and imperial city...").
the Jacksonian moment that arrives right after he dies is in some ways a return to personalist politics — the charismatic individual, the loyalty, the faction — except built on a completely different base, mass democratic mobilization instead of elite deal-craft. And Burr would've been useless at it. He was charming to peers, not to crowds. He could work a room of twelve men of quality and not a square full of voters.
Again, a full century later we still find Plunkitt firmly operating in Burr's mould, where it's all a matter of interpersonal deal-cutting, and crowd-pleasing is purely for the suckers constituents still hoping that The Plunk will wangle them a steady civil service job:
...some young men think that the best way to prepare for the political game is to practice speakin’ and becomin’ orators. That’s all wrong. We’ve got some orators in Tammany Hall, but they’re chiefly ornamental. You never heard of Charlie Murphy delivering a speech, did you? Or Richard Croker, or John Kelly, or any other man who has been a real power in the organization? Look at the thirty-six district leaders of Tammany Hall today. How many of them travel on their tongues? Maybe one or two, and they don’t count when business is doin’ at Tammany Hall. The men who rule have practiced keepin’ their tongues still, not exercisin’ them. So you want to drop the orator idea unless you mean to go into politics just to perform the skyrocket act.
[...]
I had a cousin, a young man who didn’t take any particular interest in politics. I went to him and said: “Tommy, I’m goin’ to be a politician, and I want to get a followin’; can I count on you?” He said: “Sure, George.’, That’s how I started in business. I got a marketable commodity – one vote. Then I went to the district leader and told him I could command two votes on election day, Tommy’s and my own. He smiled on me and told me to go ahead.
[...]
That is the way and the only way to’ make a lastin’ success in politics. If you are goin’ to cast your first vote next November and want to go into politics, do as I did. Get a followin’, if it’s only one man, and then go to the district leader and say: “I want to join the organization. I’ve got one man who’ll follow me through thick and thin.” The leader won’t laugh at your one-man followin’. He’ll shake your hand warmly, offer to propose you for membership in his club, take you down to the corner for a drink and ask you to call again. But go to him and say: “I took first prize at college in Aristotle; I can recite all Shakespeare forwards and backwards; there ain’t nothin’ in science that ain’t as familiar to me as blockades on the elevated roads and I’m the real thing in the way of silver-tongued orators.” What will he answer? He’ll probably say: “I guess you are not to blame for your misfortunes, but we have no use for you here.”
And who even knows who Plunkitt is, outside the few hundred of us who read it secondhand off a blog post by a now-dead misanthropic pinball enthusiast. I include myself. I didn't get to Plunkitt of Tammany Hall through any canon; a specific guy handed it to me and then died, and now we're all in his estate sale holding the same paperback going "wait, doesn't this contradict—"
It does. Let me not weasel about it.
What I wrote was that Burr was "an evolutionary dead-end, the last clean specimen of a political type the republic decided it didn't want and couldn't afford." That's the claim, and Plunkitt breaks it, because there he is a full century later running the identical machine — live and let live with George Wanmaker six days a week, war on the seventh, open contempt for the Aristotle kid who can recite Shakespeare backwards and command zero votes. If the type was a dead-end, nobody told Tammany. The words I used were too strong and Plunkitt is the counterexample sitting right there in the dead man's own bibliography, which is the funny part.
But there's still a reason no one knows his name as much as Burr's, and that reason matters: It got demoted. What the early republic actually killed off was the personalist deal-cutter as a route to the presidency — to the national ideological stage where you're adjudicating Hamilton's structural vision of the state against Jefferson's. It did not touch the ward. Plunkitt is what the same animal looks like once it's been pushed off the national floor and down to the district, where the rent's cheap, the currency stays interpersonal, and the grand "structural vision of the state" shrinks to exactly his size — fury that civil service went meritocratic, resentment that Albany bosses the city around. A program scaled to the block.
So the correction isn't a save, it's a real revision: I said the type was abolished, and what I can actually defend is that it was evicted from the top floor and found the basement warm and lucrative and good for generations. Burr's specific error was refusing the basement. He ran the ward-heeler's game on the national stage in 1800, after party tickets and newspaper ideology had already taken the building, so his maneuvering read as treason instead of business. Plunkitt ran the identical game in the one venue where it still paid, stayed local, died rich and quoted. Same animal. One of them just knew which floor he was allowed on.
And the demotion didn't stop with Plunkitt, which is the part that should've tipped me off that "dead-end" was the wrong word. The floor keeps descending. Tammany itself got killed off — Fiorello La Guardia and then the post-war reformers and the federal programs that took patronage out of the wards by making the benefits statutory, so you didn't need to see the district leader to get your check anymore. The thing that made Plunkitt powerful, that he stood between you and the only coal delivery you were going to get that winter, just evaporated. You can't run a following on favors the government now hands out as a right.
But the operator didn't die there either. He moved down again. He's the county party chair nobody outside the county has heard of, the guy who controls the line on the judicial ballot and the no-show authority appointments and which contractor gets the paving bid. He's the machine in a one-party city where the real election is the primary and the primary turns on who can deliver the committee. He's the state legislator whose entire actual job is constituent service and steering the discretionary grant, the silver-tongue-is-for-suckers guy in a body where the cameras point at someone else. The currency is still interpersonal, still favors-for-loyalty, still contemptuous of the program-haver — it's just been pushed so far down the structure that it doesn't even read as "boss politics" anymore. It reads as how things get done locally, which is the most successful disguise the type ever wore.
So the real shape of it isn't Burr-as-extinct-species. It's a single political animal getting shoved down one floor per century — presidency, then mayoralty and the ward, then the county and the safe-seat primary — each time the level above gets colonized by ideology and parties and, now, by national money and cable news that make the small interpersonal machine look quaint right up until you need a variance from the zoning board. The thing never stopped working. It just kept losing altitude. Burr was the last man who tried to fly it at the very top, and the whole point of him is that the top was already closing.
That's a different and smaller claim than the one I published. The published one was wrong as written.
(And the floor Plunkitt was allowed on still ran on a Richard declining to make speeches — he name-checks Richard Croker as the boss who never gave one. A century earlier and one letter over, there's a Richard Croucher getting a candle held to his face at the Levi Weeks trial Burr defended. Different men. History doesn't repeat, but it keeps reaching into the same drawer for names.)
Idaho's Mammoth Cave and the Shoshone Bird Museum of Natural History, undated, evergreen, the kind of place that exists outside news cycles entirely
So you're driving up US-93 from Twin Falls toward Sun Valley and somewhere around Shoshone, before the road starts climbing toward the Stanley Basin, there's a hand-painted sign for "Mammoth Cave and Shoshone Bird Museum of Natural History," and the thing nobody tells you about this place, because nobody talks about it at all outside of a small subculture of roadside-attraction obsessives who treat the American West as a kind of distributed museum of failed business models, is that it is a near-perfect specimen of a specific economic moment that ended sometime in the mid-1970s and has been slowly decomposing ever since, run by the same family for going on seventy years, holding together by some combination of family pride, sunk-cost inertia, and the genuine geological fact that there is, in fact, a large lava tube under their property which they own outright and cannot exactly relocate.
The cave itself is a lava tube.
This needs a sentence of geology, which is that the entire Snake River Plain, the great curving arc of flat basalt that runs across southern Idaho from Yellowstone down to the Oregon border, is the burn scar of the Yellowstone hotspot, which has been sitting under the North American plate for roughly seventeen million years and has, as the plate has drifted west-southwest over it, left behind a trail of volcanic terrain that gets progressively younger as you move east toward the current location of the hotspot in Yellowstone itself.
The Snake River Plain is what's left over.
Lava tubes form when the surface of a basalt flow cools and crusts while the molten rock underneath keeps flowing, eventually drains out, and leaves a roughly cylindrical void in the cooled basalt. There are hundreds of these across southern Idaho. Most are small, collapsed, undocumented. A few are big enough and intact enough to be commercially viable as tourist attractions, and the entire roadside-cave economy of southern Idaho, Mammoth Cave, Shoshone Ice Caves a few miles up the same highway, Crystal Ice Cave further south, and the federally-managed version at Craters of the Moon National Monument, is downstream of that geology.
The geology is necessary, not sufficient. Plenty of places have caves.
What made these caves commercial was the routing of pre-Interstate tourist traffic. This gets lost in the contemporary "weird Americana" framing of places like Mammoth Cave, because the contemporary framing treats them as eccentric one-offs, some guy decided to put a bird museum next to a hole in the ground, isn't that strange, when the actual fact is that they were one of dozens of identical operations spread across a specific economic ecosystem that was producing them industrially between roughly 1925 and 1965.
US-93 runs from Wickenburg, Arizona, in the central Arizona desert about an hour northwest of Phoenix, nowhere near the Mexican border, all the way up to Roosville on the Canadian border in Montana, and before the Interstate system filled in (I-15 paralleling it on the east, I-84 cutting across the Snake River Plain) it was one of the main north-south corridors through the entire interior West. If you were driving from Phoenix to Calgary, or from Las Vegas to Sun Valley, or from Salt Lake to the Pacific Northwest, you were probably on US-93 for some non-trivial fraction of the trip. And tourist traffic on a two-lane highway with one car every minute or so requires roadside attractions in a way that tourist traffic on an Interstate moving at seventy-five miles an hour fundamentally doesn't, because the Interstate driver is committed to getting somewhere and the two-lane driver is, definitionally, taking it slower and looking for excuses to stop.
Every gas station on the old road was implicitly a competitor for those excuses.
A cave gave you something to do for forty-five minutes. A taxidermy collection gave you something to do for another thirty. Combined, they justified the gas station, and the gas station, which was the actual profit center, justified the whole arrangement.
Richard Olsen opened Mammoth Cave to the public around 1954. (The family history here is complicated and I will not get it exactly right, but the basic shape is: Olsen was a high-school senior out hunting bobcats when he stumbled on the cave entrance, the family acquired the property, and the operation expanded over the following decades.) The Shoshone Bird Museum part of the operation came along later as a way of justifying the entry fee during the off-season and giving people something to look at when the cave was too icy to enter safely.
Both pieces were responses to the same economic problem.
Which was: running a roadside attraction on a two-lane highway in southern Idaho requires you to capture enough revenue per stopping vehicle to amortize the fixed costs of the operation across a thin and seasonal stream of tourist traffic.
The bird museum is the part I want to spend time on, because it is something that genuinely cannot be built today, and the reasons have nothing to do with anyone's aesthetic preferences about taxidermy.
The collection, and I am working from memory here, having walked through it years ago and not since, runs to several hundred mounted specimens, organized roughly by habitat or family, posed in glass cases with painted backdrops and bits of vegetation and the occasional eggcup or nest. Most are North American birds. A lot are species you cannot legally collect or possess in the US today without a specific federal permit. Bald eagles, golden eagles, hawks, owls, songbirds protected under the Migratory Bird Treaty Act, and so on.
The MBTA was signed in 1918.
It is one of the older and more aggressive pieces of American conservation legislation. It implements a treaty between the US and Canada (later extended to Mexico, Japan, and the USSR) and it makes it a federal crime, strict liability, no intent required, to "take, possess, import, export, transport, sell, purchase, barter, or offer for sale" almost any native migratory bird, including dead specimens, eggs, nests, and feathers.
On its face, this should have made the bird museum impossible. The act was already in force when Olsen was running the place. Most of the specimens in the museum are species the act explicitly protects.
But enforcement is the variable, not the statute.
The MBTA has always been enforced with a kind of selective vigor that varies enormously by decade and by US Attorney and by what other things the relevant US Fish and Wildlife agents are paying attention to. The collection was assembled across the 1950s and 60s primarily, when MBTA enforcement against small private collectors of dead birds was effectively nonexistent, Fish and Wildlife was focused on commercial market hunting, the millinery trade (women's hats with feathers), waterfowl poaching, and the kind of large-scale violations that produced headlines. A rural taxidermist in Idaho mounting roadkill owls and donated specimens for a museum nobody had ever heard of in DC was nowhere on the priority list.
The grandfathering rule does most of the work after that. If you can document that a specimen pre-dates a given regulatory threshold, was already in your possession, or in the possession of someone from whom you can establish provenance, you can keep it. You just can't add new ones.
So the museum exists in a kind of legal stasis. The collection that's there is grandfathered, more or less, but the institution cannot grow, cannot replace damaged specimens, cannot acquire new ones to fill gaps. The display is frozen at approximately whatever date the family stopped actively collecting, which I would guess is the mid-1970s, when federal enforcement started catching up with private collectors and the calculus changed.
This is not unique to Mammoth Cave.
There are similar small private natural-history museums all over the rural West and South, a side room off a gas station in Tennessee with a two-headed calf, an "Indian artifacts" cabin in Arizona, a "world's largest collection of [whatever]" attached to a motel in Wyoming, and almost all of them share the same basic feature, which is that they were assembled during a regulatory window that has since closed, and what survives is a kind of accidental archaeological record of what private acquisition looked like before various federal regimes (NAGPRA for Native American material, ESA and MBTA for biological specimens, ARPA for archaeological material, CITES for international wildlife trade) made the acquisition activities themselves criminal.
The artifacts are still there because the law cannot reach back through time to confiscate things acquired before the law existed. The family is incentivized to keep displaying them because the display is the only thing differentiating their gas station from every other gas station on the route. Take the museum out and you're a Conoco with a hole in the ground. Leave it in and you're a destination, however minor.
There's a thing that happens when you walk through these collections.
The framing is always Victorian, habitat dioramas, taxonomic ordering, hand-lettered cards, the implicit pedagogical promise that you are Learning Something, and the execution is amateur in the specific way that small American operations of the mid-twentieth century were amateur, which is to say it looks like a well-funded high-school biology classroom that hasn't been updated since the Eisenhower administration.
The whole aesthetic is what's left from a moment when natural-history display was understood as a civic good that any community of sufficient population could and should produce on its own, before the consolidation of natural-history exhibition into a small number of large federally- or municipally-funded institutions made the whole production category obsolete.
You can find the same aesthetic at Wall Drug, at Carlsbad's gift shop, at the original Ripley's Believe It or Not in St. Augustine, at every small county historical society from Maine to Oregon. It is the visual vocabulary of pre-television middle-American civic culture, preserved more or less intact in places where the local economy never developed past the point where it could have replaced the displays with something more polished.
The cave tour itself, if you take it, is short.
Fifteen, twenty minutes. You go down a metal staircase, walk along a packed-gravel path between rock walls, the guide (often a family member) points out features, lavacicles, where the basalt dripped from the ceiling while still molten; the breakdown pile where part of the tube roof collapsed at some point in the last few thousand years; the temperature drop, which is real and significant, because lava tubes hold a roughly constant temperature year-round and the cave is cold enough that there's ice in the deeper sections during much of the year, and then you walk back out and they sell you a postcard.
And here's the part I find genuinely interesting about all of this, which is that the long arc of American tourism has been a continuous movement from distributed-private-roadside attractions in the 1920s-1960s era, to consolidated-corporate-themed-destination attractions in the 1970s-present era, and the surviving roadside places like Mammoth Cave are the relict population from the earlier configuration, economically isolated organisms that survive only because their fixed infrastructure (the actual hole in the ground, the actual collection of mounted birds) is too expensive and too pointless to replicate elsewhere, and so the family that owns it can extract a small but real rent from people who specifically want to see this thing and have to drive to southern Idaho to do so.
The Disney model, which is the dominant tourism model of the second half of the twentieth century, works by concentrating capital and labor and audience at a single high-throughput site, charging a high per-capita fee, and capturing economies of scale on everything from food service to ride engineering. The roadside model works by distributing low-capital, low-throughput attractions along high-volume travel corridors, charging a low per-capita fee, and capturing the externalities of traffic that's going past anyway.
Once you build a freeway system that bypasses the corridors, the second model dies.
The dying takes decades, but the unit economics get progressively worse until each individual operation either consolidates into a national chain (Stuckey's, in its time), gets bought by the federal government and turned into a National Monument or Memorial (Craters of the Moon, just up the road from Mammoth Cave, is the canonical example), or slowly bleeds out under family ownership until the last generation interested in running it dies or retires.
Mammoth Cave is in the last category.
I do not know how long the operation will continue. Family-run small businesses in rural America have been on a roughly seventy-year decline curve since the construction of the Interstate system, and there is no obvious mechanism by which a place like this acquires fresh capital, fresh management, or fresh audience.
The cave will be there forever. The cave is a hole in the basalt and it will outlast all of us.
The bird museum, however, requires active maintenance, climate control, pest management, occasional restoration of damaged mounts, and the moment the family stops being willing or able to maintain it, the collection will degrade rapidly. Taxidermy without active care has a much shorter half-life than people think. Insects get into the skins. Mounts shed feathers. Glass eyes fall out. The dioramas crack, the backdrops fade, the cards get illegible.
Then someday, probably within the next twenty or thirty years, the operation closes, the family sells the land, and somebody has to decide what to do with several hundred mounted birds that are federally protected and cannot legally be sold, donated to most museums (which don't want them, because the provenance is incomplete and the specimens have no scientific value), or destroyed without specific permission from Fish and Wildlife.
The most likely fate is that the heirs spend a year or two trying to find a museum that will accept the collection as a donation, get nowhere, and eventually surrender it to USFWS, which will store it in the National Wildlife Property Repository in Commerce City, Colorado, alongside the seized ivory and the confiscated leopard skins and the boxes of trinkets made from sea turtle shells that USFWS has been accumulating since the 1970s.
The Repository is the largest single collection of dead protected wildlife in the world.
It is also, more or less, the cemetery of the entire mid-century American private natural-history-museum complex, because that is where almost all of those collections end up once their original institutional context dies.
The end state of every Richard Olsen is a USFWS storage shelf in suburban Denver. There are worse fates, but there are also better ones, and the gap between what the collection meant to the family that built it and what it becomes in the federal repository is the gap that the whole roadside-attraction economy has been falling into for half a century now.
Same as it ever was. The Interstate killed the highway, the highway killed the wagon road, and somewhere along the way the federal government became the inheritor of every small museum nobody else wanted, by default and by statute, not because anyone planned it that way but because the legal infrastructure of wildlife protection inadvertently produced an enormous public archive of mid-century private American collecting that nobody, including USFWS, knows what to do with.
Drive up there before it closes. Pay the family the entry fee. Look at the birds while you still can.
The cave will keep. The museum is on the clock.
Tagged: idaho, roadside, snake river plain, mbta, taxidermy, lava tubes, american tourism, the assay was the business
Somewhat irritated that this is literally almost the thinkpiece essay form of “RIP Route 66” stuff that is older than any of us, that Pixar’s Cars is just the most recent significant cultural impactful rendition of, dragging the nostalgia for nostalgia of parents who aren’t even young enough to have ever seen the Routes in their heyday to sell it to children, again.
I’ve been reading retrospectives about the glorious boomer childhood vacations and listening to boomers waxing nostalgic for their childhood camping trip to a National Park or Mount Rushmore and seeing Wall Drug or the third largest ball of string for literally my entire life. Is there anything left to this dead horse?
Heck, some presumably existing essay from a decade ago discussing how Supernatural addressed the American Roadtrip and the boomer glory of the routes in the post 9/11 American mythspace would at least be novel.
Fair enough. I'll give you a great route if you ever get the time off. But here's what I can offer now:
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The 1967 Chevrolet Impala that Sam and Dean Winchester drive across fifteen seasons of Supernatural exists because Eric Kripke's neighbor liked the trunk. Kripke wanted a '65 Mustang. The neighbor, a Venice mechanic, told him a Mustang was the car you drove if you were a coward, and that what he wanted was a '67 Impala because the trunk was big enough to put a body in. That is the entire origin of the most fetishized car in twenty-first-century American television: a trunk sized for a corpse. Kripke went home and looked it up and it was perfect. The arsenal lives in the trunk. The thing that made it the right car was its capacity to carry the dead.
The show spent fifteen years dressing that trunk up as freedom.
Kripke's stated pitch was Kerouac. On the Road, two brothers, a big black car, the urban legends of small-town America strung together like beads on the interstate. He has said the series was "pure, stripped down and uniquely American," that these stories live in towns all across the country and it just makes sense to drive in and out of them. The car is freedom. The car is home. The car is the third Winchester. In season eleven there is a literal episode shot entirely from inside the Impala, told from the car's point of view.
The vehicle has been promoted from prop to family member to saint.
And the soundtrack does the rest of the work. AC/DC, Led Zeppelin where they could afford it, Kansas, Bob Seger, Boston: the back half of the boomer FM canon, the stuff that was already classic-rock-radio wallpaper by 1985. Padalecki says the first song he played in the Impala he was gifted at the wrap was "Carry On Wayward Son." That is the mood the show is selling. The open road, the V8, the cassette deck, somebody's older brother's record collection. Freedom, brotherhood, the highway, the guitar solo.
Underneath the guitar solo there is a road, and it matters enormously which road it is, because there are two of them and one of them killed the other. The aesthetic Kripke is cribbing, the diners and the motor courts and the two-lane blacktop through the small town, the Mother Road: that is Route 66. Commissioned 1926, Chicago to Santa Monica, the road the Joads took west in Steinbeck, the road that grew a continuous ribbon of gas stations and burger stands and neon-signed motels because it ran down the main street of every town it passed through. Slow. You had to exit, except you didn't have to exit, because the road was the exit. The town was on the road. That is the whole romance: a federal highway that was also Elm Street in four hundred places.
Route 66 is dead. It was decommissioned June 27, 1985: the number stripped, taken off the U.S. Highway System by a vote of state transportation officials, the black-and-white shields pulled down.
What killed it has a name, and it is the other road. The Interstate Highway System, the Federal-Aid Highway Act of 1956, signed by Eisenhower that June. Limited-access, divided, no main streets, no town: that is the entire engineering premise, a road you cannot get off of except at a ramp, designed precisely so traffic never has to slow down through a populated place. Five separate interstates ate 66 segment by segment over the next three decades: I-55, I-44, I-40, I-15, I-10. Each one paralleled the old route and pulled the traffic up onto itself, and the second the traffic left, the town it had fed died.
Missouri appealed to at least keep the number, to let there be an Interstate 66 along the old line, and was denied. There was to be no I-66. The road did not get replaced so much as erased, the way you erase a name.
The last town to go was Williams, Arizona, bypassed by I-40 in October 1984. The people of Williams understood exactly what was coming, and they took up rifles and fired on the machinery building the interstate, to scare off the crews, to save the road that was the town's entire economy. It was, in the words of one historian, all to no avail. The interstate went through, around, past. Williams became a place you could see from the highway at seventy miles an hour and have no reason to enter.
So the boomer relationship to Route 66 is a grief performed by the people who did the killing. The generation that mythologizes 66 as Lost America, the authentic slow country and the small towns and the Main Street that some bland efficient nowhere-machine paved over, is the same generation that built and drove and wanted the interstate that did the paving. They wanted to get to California in two days instead of five, and they got it, and getting it dissolved the towns whose whole economy was being a place you had to slow down for. Then they bought the postcards of the ruins. The eulogy is being read by the executioner, with the cruise control on.
Then look at what the Winchesters are actually doing.
They drive the interstate, the killer, and the show is emotionally coded entirely as 66, the slow America the interstate killed. The monster of the week is, over and over, in a bypassed town. That is the default setting: the small dying place off the main line, the town the highway forgot, the diner with three customers, the motel with the buzzing sign and the one car in the lot. These are Williams after 1984, the towns the interstate stranded, and the show drives into them to find that something is wrong, something is feeding on the people who got left behind. The horror is set precisely in the wreckage the interstate made. The heroes arrive in the wreckage by interstate, salt the thing, and get back on the interstate and leave, which is exactly what the traffic did the first time.
Supernatural premiered September 13, 2005, written in the years right after 2001, and its threat model is the post-9/11 one. The danger is unseen, domestic, already inside the ordinary American town, invisible until it is too late, requiring armed men with credentials to drive in and remove it. Critics clocked this early, the show reading as a horror procedural for the homeland-security mood, the enemy hidden in the small places. What that does on top of the road is the interesting part. The interstate hollowed the small town once already, economically, by 1984. The show goes back to that same hollowed town and fills it with literal monsters, restaging an emptying that was a line item in transportation policy as a thing of evil that needs hunting. The concrete kills the town, and a generation later the town's death comes back as a haunting, with the cure being two men who arrive and leave the same way the traffic that killed it arrived and left.
Which leaves the road itself oddly exempt. Across fifteen seasons of a show set almost entirely in the towns the interstate emptied, the interstate is never once the thing in the dark. The wendigo is the monster, the demon is the monster, the small-town sheriff with the secret is the monster. The forty-one thousand miles of federally funded concrete that actually did empty the towns just sits there being the way you get from one haunting to the next, with Kansas on the cassette deck, and nobody in the writers' room or the audience ever quite clocks that the most efficient killer of small-town America in the whole show is the thing the heroes are driving.
The Commonwealth Short Story Prize Was Already a Machine
The Commonwealth Short Story Prize divides the literary output of fifty-six countries into five regions, and the five regions are Africa, Asia, Canada and Europe, the Caribbean, and the Pacific. Five judges, or panels of judges, pick one winner from each region. The five regional winners each get £2,500 and get published in Granta. Then one of the five is named overall winner and gets another £2,500 on top, for £5,000 total, which the Foundation likes to point out is among the largest sums on offer anywhere for a single unpublished short story.
Hold that map in your head for a second, because the map is the whole thing.
Africa is one region. Asia is one region. The Caribbean and the Pacific each get to be a region. And then Canada and Europe — two continents, the entire Anglophone settler-colonial north plus the British Isles plus Malta plus Cyprus — get folded together into a single fifth slot. That division has nothing to do with literary merit. It maps who the Commonwealth thinks it is, drawn by an institution whose actual job is to keep fifty-six countries that used to be governed from London feeling like they still belong to the same club after London stopped governing them.
The literary prize is downstream of the soft-power apparatus. The partners listed on the masthead tell you as much: the BBC World Service, the British Council, English PEN, the Sigrid Rausing Trust. These are the organs of post-imperial cultural maintenance, and the short story prize is one of the nicer-smelling things they do.
So that's the institution. Now the texture.
For about a year before any of the AI business, there were people complaining that the stories the prize selects are bad in a specific and repetitive way. A guy named Tom Barrie wrote a whole post in mid-2025 asking why the Commonwealth Short Story Prize is, his word, "wilfully boring," and his complaint was that every year the judges seem to reach for the most mawkish, most didactic, most earnestly improving story in the pile. The decolonial trauma narrative. The intergenerational silence broken by a pot of regional cooking. The grandmother who carries the weight of history in her hands. You know the genre. It is the genre that wins things.
I want to be careful here because the easy version of this take is snobbery — ha ha, the prize for writers from the formerly colonized world rewards earnest writing about being from the formerly colonized world, how gauche. It's also a cheap shot, and beside what matters.
What actually matters is that an international prize covering fifty-six countries and seven or eight thousand entries a year has to develop a house style, because that's what selection at scale does. You cannot read 7,806 stories — that was this year's number, 7,806 — and emerge with a winner unless you have, somewhere in the back of the collective judicial skull, a template for what a Commonwealth Prize winner sounds like. The template exists. Everyone who enters the prize knows the template. The template is "precise yet richly evocative," which is the actual phrase the judges used this year, and which describes maybe a third of all literary fiction written in English since 1985.
The template rewards a particular density of sensory detail, a particular pitch of melancholy, a particular willingness to gesture at history without quite arguing about it, and a particular kind of sentence — the long appositive sentence that hangs three or four observations off a single image, the kind of sentence creative writing programs teach because it is teachable. It is a learnable texture. It is, in fact, the single most learnable texture in contemporary prose, which is the entire reason MFA workshops can exist as a business: the thing they teach can be taught.
Keep that in mind. The thing the prize rewards is the thing that can be taught.
And then in May of 2026 the Caribbean regional winner came out, a story called "The Serpent in the Grove" by a Trinidadian writer named Jamir Nazir, about a rum-drinking farmer who stumbles into an enchanted grove, and within about a day of it going up on Granta's website people on the internet started saying, out loud, that a machine wrote it.
Ethan Mollick — a Wharton professor who studies AI and work — said he ran it through a detector called Pangram on a hunch and the detector came back saying the text was 100% AI-authored. Pangram then got run against the rest of the year's winners. Two more got flagged as likely machine output: a Maltese story called "The Bastion's Shadow" and an Indian story called "Mehendi Nights."
So now you've got a situation where, depending on how much you trust a detection tool, somewhere between one and three of the five regional winners of the world's most globally ambitious short story prize may have been generated by a language model, and the judges — a panel chaired this year by the novelist Louise Doughty — picked them out of nearly eight thousand entries on the strength of their "precise yet richly evocative" language.
The Commonwealth Foundation announced a "thorough, transparent review of the selection process." Of course they did. There's nothing else to announce.
Now. I have a lot of feelings about the discourse that followed, and most of them are about how badly people want this to be a story about cheating, because cheating is comprehensible and the thing that actually happened is not.
Here is the thing people keep wanting to say: a fraud was perpetrated, the judges were fooled, the integrity of the prize was violated, and the solution is better detection. And I understand the appeal, because if that's the story then the prize is fine, the judges are fine, literature is fine, and the problem is a discrete bad actor with a chatbot who can be caught and removed and the system restored to its prior state. Restore the system. Catch the bots. Move on.
But look at the order of operations. The texture came first.
The complaints about the prize rewarding a flavorless, evocative, workshop-perfect, emotionally legible house style — those predate the AI by at least a year, and honestly by a lot more than a year if you count everyone who's ever rolled their eyes at a prize shortlist. The judges were already selecting for a median. They were already rewarding the most reliably executed version of a known template. They had built, over fourteen years and tens of thousands of entries, a finely tuned apparatus for detecting and rewarding competent literary averageness with a regional garnish.
And a large language model is a machine for producing competent averageness. That is the entire technical description of what it does.
It models the distribution of text and emits the high-probability middle of it. When you ask it for a literary short story it gives you the centroid of every literary short story it has ever seen, smoothed, polished, and stripped of the specific weirdness that a particular human would have left in by accident. It produces, on demand, exactly the thing the prize spent fourteen years training itself to reward.
The machine didn't beat the judges. The machine and the judges are the same machine, pointed at the same target, optimizing the same objective function. One of them is made of weights and one of them is made of a novelist and a Zoom call, and they converged on the same answer because they were built to.
This is the part the cheating-narrative is built specifically to avoid. If the model won by being good at the thing the prize rewards, then the embarrassing question stops being "how did a bot sneak in" and becomes "what does it say about the thing we were rewarding that a bot is good at it."
And that question has a brutal answer. The thing being rewarded was never the human part. The human part — the idiosyncrasy, the bad decision that turns out to be the best line, the thing you can't teach in a workshop because it comes from one specific person's damage — the prize was filtering that out. The prize wanted the teachable texture. The teachable texture is the machine-reproducible texture. Same thing, different name.
I keep coming back to "precise yet richly evocative." Read that phrase as a spec sheet. That's a production note. "Big creature, clear visual silhouette, menacing but not actually frightening." It's the same kind of document — a description of an output written by people who think they're describing a soul.
Once "The Serpent in the Grove" was under suspicion, the sleuthing didn't stop at the text. People started investigating the authors.
A writer named Vincenzo Barney published a piece in UnHerd arguing that four of the five regional winners might themselves be bots — not that they used AI to write, but that the human beings whose names were on the stories might not exist. His evidence was that the stories didn't feel human-written, that the named authors had thin or absent social media footprints, and that Jamir Nazir's author photo looked AI-generated to him.
Think about what's happening there. The standard of proof for "is this a real person" has collapsed into "do they post enough and does their face look real to me."
A writer from Trinidad who isn't extremely online is now, on those grounds, suspected of being a hallucination. We have built a world in which not having a content footprint is evidence against your existence. The absence of digital exhaust is read as the absence of a self. I don't think I need to spell out which writers, from which regions, are most likely to fail that test, but it rhymes pretty closely with the regional map I started with.
And then the Asian regional winner, Sharon Aruparayil, whose story "Mehendi Nights" also got flagged, responded to the accusations by alleging racism. A blogger I read on this called that response "all too human," which made me laugh, because it's the one move in the whole affair that no language model would have produced unprompted, and it's the move that got read as the most suspicious. The deflection-by-racism-accusation is, structurally, the most reliable proof of a person in the entire story, and it landed as further evidence of guilt. We've reached the point where the human tells — defensiveness, grievance, the wounded reach for the strongest available frame — are precisely the behaviors that make people go "yeah, that's what a bot would say."
Step back and look at what "detection" has meant across this whole episode. At one end of the range sits a statistical machine — itself more or less another model, trained to recognize the output of the kind of model that wrote the story, clocking frequencies no human reader could catch. At the other end sits a guy with a Tumblr account peering at the metaphors and the author photo like a phrenologist measuring the bumps on a skull. Both get called detection. Only one of them works.
I don't know for certain whether a machine wrote any of these, and neither do you. But the detector is not nothing. Pangram keeps being right — it separates machine prose from human prose reliably, often catching exactly what a room of professional readers waved through, and nobody can fully explain the standard it's using to do it. A black box that can tell the difference the prize exists to tell, and can't.
That's the real indignity, and it runs the opposite way from how people are telling it. The difference between a person's sentences and a model's is detectable. It's sitting right there, legible to a piece of software that can't say why. The judges weren't looking for it. They were grading "precise yet richly evocative," and "precise yet richly evocative" is exactly the axis a model saturates. Authorship lives on some other axis, and the prize was never built to measure that one.
Here's what I think actually happened, in plain terms, with the caveat that I'm guessing at the human intent because the human intent is the one thing truly unknowable here:
Somebody — at least one somebody, maybe three — fed a prompt to a model, got back a story in exactly the mode the Commonwealth Prize rewards, and submitted it. They could do this because that mode is public knowledge. Fourteen years of winning stories are sitting right there in Granta and in the Foundation's online magazine, adda, as a free training corpus and a free style guide. The prize documented its own template so thoroughly that anyone, human or machine, could reproduce it. And the judges, doing exactly the job they've always done, rewarded the reproduction, because the reproduction was indistinguishable from the target — because the target was always the reproducible part.
The fraud, if there was one, wasn't a violation of the system. It was the system completing itself. You build a machine that rewards a learnable texture, you publish the texture, you wait. The texture gets learned. The machine rewards it. The output of the reaction is also its input. The dwarves have a word for that.
What I find almost moving — and I mean this — is that the prize cannot fix this without destroying its own reason for existing. The reason an international prize partitions the world into regions and reaches eight thousand entries and publishes everyone in Granta is to be legible across fifty-six countries with wildly different literary traditions. Legibility at that scale requires a common standard. A common standard is a template. A template is reproducible.
You cannot have a globally legible literary prize and also have it be machine-proof, because the same property that makes a winner legible to a judge in London reading a story from Suva is the property that makes the winner reproducible by a model trained on the prior winners. The thing that makes it work is the thing that breaks it.
They'll do the review. They'll run every entry through a detector now, and the detector will mostly work, and a literary prize will quietly become an institution that adjudicates authorship by black box — which is a strange thing for a literary prize to become. They'll add an attestation clause where you swear you wrote it yourself, which changes nothing because liars lie. Maybe they'll add a video interview, a viva, a defense of your own story, which is the funniest possible outcome because it would turn a writing prize into an oral exam and select even harder for the confident and the verbal and the well-connected. Every available fix tightens the grip of exactly the institutional logic that produced the problem.
The "wilfully boring" complaint and the "the bots are winning" complaint are the same complaint. One of them just hadn't found its proof yet. A texture optimized to read as reliably good across an entire post-imperial map is the easiest possible texture for a machine to fake, because reliability across difference is the definition of the average, and the average is what these things make.
Same as it ever was. The map was the machine. The template was the machine. Granta was the training set. The judges were the loss function. The bot was just the part that finally said the quiet thing out loud, in precise yet richly evocative language, about a farmer and a grove.
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Idaho's Mammoth Cave and the Shoshone Bird Museum of Natural History, undated, evergreen, the kind of place that exists outside news cycles entirely
So you're driving up US-93 from Twin Falls toward Sun Valley and somewhere around Shoshone, before the road starts climbing toward the Stanley Basin, there's a hand-painted sign for "Mammoth Cave and Shoshone Bird Museum of Natural History," and the thing nobody tells you about this place, because nobody talks about it at all outside of a small subculture of roadside-attraction obsessives who treat the American West as a kind of distributed museum of failed business models, is that it is a near-perfect specimen of a specific economic moment that ended sometime in the mid-1970s and has been slowly decomposing ever since, run by the same family for going on seventy years, holding together by some combination of family pride, sunk-cost inertia, and the genuine geological fact that there is, in fact, a large lava tube under their property which they own outright and cannot exactly relocate.
The cave itself is a lava tube.
This needs a sentence of geology, which is that the entire Snake River Plain, the great curving arc of flat basalt that runs across southern Idaho from Yellowstone down to the Oregon border, is the burn scar of the Yellowstone hotspot, which has been sitting under the North American plate for roughly seventeen million years and has, as the plate has drifted west-southwest over it, left behind a trail of volcanic terrain that gets progressively younger as you move east toward the current location of the hotspot in Yellowstone itself.
The Snake River Plain is what's left over.
Lava tubes form when the surface of a basalt flow cools and crusts while the molten rock underneath keeps flowing, eventually drains out, and leaves a roughly cylindrical void in the cooled basalt. There are hundreds of these across southern Idaho. Most are small, collapsed, undocumented. A few are big enough and intact enough to be commercially viable as tourist attractions, and the entire roadside-cave economy of southern Idaho, Mammoth Cave, Shoshone Ice Caves a few miles up the same highway, Crystal Ice Cave further south, and the federally-managed version at Craters of the Moon National Monument, is downstream of that geology.
The geology is necessary, not sufficient. Plenty of places have caves.
What made these caves commercial was the routing of pre-Interstate tourist traffic. This gets lost in the contemporary "weird Americana" framing of places like Mammoth Cave, because the contemporary framing treats them as eccentric one-offs, some guy decided to put a bird museum next to a hole in the ground, isn't that strange, when the actual fact is that they were one of dozens of identical operations spread across a specific economic ecosystem that was producing them industrially between roughly 1925 and 1965.
US-93 runs from Wickenburg, Arizona, in the central Arizona desert about an hour northwest of Phoenix, nowhere near the Mexican border, all the way up to Roosville on the Canadian border in Montana, and before the Interstate system filled in (I-15 paralleling it on the east, I-84 cutting across the Snake River Plain) it was one of the main north-south corridors through the entire interior West. If you were driving from Phoenix to Calgary, or from Las Vegas to Sun Valley, or from Salt Lake to the Pacific Northwest, you were probably on US-93 for some non-trivial fraction of the trip. And tourist traffic on a two-lane highway with one car every minute or so requires roadside attractions in a way that tourist traffic on an Interstate moving at seventy-five miles an hour fundamentally doesn't, because the Interstate driver is committed to getting somewhere and the two-lane driver is, definitionally, taking it slower and looking for excuses to stop.
Every gas station on the old road was implicitly a competitor for those excuses.
A cave gave you something to do for forty-five minutes. A taxidermy collection gave you something to do for another thirty. Combined, they justified the gas station, and the gas station, which was the actual profit center, justified the whole arrangement.
Richard Olsen opened Mammoth Cave to the public around 1954. (The family history here is complicated and I will not get it exactly right, but the basic shape is: Olsen was a high-school senior out hunting bobcats when he stumbled on the cave entrance, the family acquired the property, and the operation expanded over the following decades.) The Shoshone Bird Museum part of the operation came along later as a way of justifying the entry fee during the off-season and giving people something to look at when the cave was too icy to enter safely.
Both pieces were responses to the same economic problem.
Which was: running a roadside attraction on a two-lane highway in southern Idaho requires you to capture enough revenue per stopping vehicle to amortize the fixed costs of the operation across a thin and seasonal stream of tourist traffic.
The bird museum is the part I want to spend time on, because it is something that genuinely cannot be built today, and the reasons have nothing to do with anyone's aesthetic preferences about taxidermy.
The collection, and I am working from memory here, having walked through it years ago and not since, runs to several hundred mounted specimens, organized roughly by habitat or family, posed in glass cases with painted backdrops and bits of vegetation and the occasional eggcup or nest. Most are North American birds. A lot are species you cannot legally collect or possess in the US today without a specific federal permit. Bald eagles, golden eagles, hawks, owls, songbirds protected under the Migratory Bird Treaty Act, and so on.
The MBTA was signed in 1918.
It is one of the older and more aggressive pieces of American conservation legislation. It implements a treaty between the US and Canada (later extended to Mexico, Japan, and the USSR) and it makes it a federal crime, strict liability, no intent required, to "take, possess, import, export, transport, sell, purchase, barter, or offer for sale" almost any native migratory bird, including dead specimens, eggs, nests, and feathers.
On its face, this should have made the bird museum impossible. The act was already in force when Olsen was running the place. Most of the specimens in the museum are species the act explicitly protects.
But enforcement is the variable, not the statute.
The MBTA has always been enforced with a kind of selective vigor that varies enormously by decade and by US Attorney and by what other things the relevant US Fish and Wildlife agents are paying attention to. The collection was assembled across the 1950s and 60s primarily, when MBTA enforcement against small private collectors of dead birds was effectively nonexistent, Fish and Wildlife was focused on commercial market hunting, the millinery trade (women's hats with feathers), waterfowl poaching, and the kind of large-scale violations that produced headlines. A rural taxidermist in Idaho mounting roadkill owls and donated specimens for a museum nobody had ever heard of in DC was nowhere on the priority list.
The grandfathering rule does most of the work after that. If you can document that a specimen pre-dates a given regulatory threshold, was already in your possession, or in the possession of someone from whom you can establish provenance, you can keep it. You just can't add new ones.
So the museum exists in a kind of legal stasis. The collection that's there is grandfathered, more or less, but the institution cannot grow, cannot replace damaged specimens, cannot acquire new ones to fill gaps. The display is frozen at approximately whatever date the family stopped actively collecting, which I would guess is the mid-1970s, when federal enforcement started catching up with private collectors and the calculus changed.
This is not unique to Mammoth Cave.
There are similar small private natural-history museums all over the rural West and South, a side room off a gas station in Tennessee with a two-headed calf, an "Indian artifacts" cabin in Arizona, a "world's largest collection of [whatever]" attached to a motel in Wyoming, and almost all of them share the same basic feature, which is that they were assembled during a regulatory window that has since closed, and what survives is a kind of accidental archaeological record of what private acquisition looked like before various federal regimes (NAGPRA for Native American material, ESA and MBTA for biological specimens, ARPA for archaeological material, CITES for international wildlife trade) made the acquisition activities themselves criminal.
The artifacts are still there because the law cannot reach back through time to confiscate things acquired before the law existed. The family is incentivized to keep displaying them because the display is the only thing differentiating their gas station from every other gas station on the route. Take the museum out and you're a Conoco with a hole in the ground. Leave it in and you're a destination, however minor.
There's a thing that happens when you walk through these collections.
The framing is always Victorian, habitat dioramas, taxonomic ordering, hand-lettered cards, the implicit pedagogical promise that you are Learning Something, and the execution is amateur in the specific way that small American operations of the mid-twentieth century were amateur, which is to say it looks like a well-funded high-school biology classroom that hasn't been updated since the Eisenhower administration.
The whole aesthetic is what's left from a moment when natural-history display was understood as a civic good that any community of sufficient population could and should produce on its own, before the consolidation of natural-history exhibition into a small number of large federally- or municipally-funded institutions made the whole production category obsolete.
You can find the same aesthetic at Wall Drug, at Carlsbad's gift shop, at the original Ripley's Believe It or Not in St. Augustine, at every small county historical society from Maine to Oregon. It is the visual vocabulary of pre-television middle-American civic culture, preserved more or less intact in places where the local economy never developed past the point where it could have replaced the displays with something more polished.
The cave tour itself, if you take it, is short.
Fifteen, twenty minutes. You go down a metal staircase, walk along a packed-gravel path between rock walls, the guide (often a family member) points out features, lavacicles, where the basalt dripped from the ceiling while still molten; the breakdown pile where part of the tube roof collapsed at some point in the last few thousand years; the temperature drop, which is real and significant, because lava tubes hold a roughly constant temperature year-round and the cave is cold enough that there's ice in the deeper sections during much of the year, and then you walk back out and they sell you a postcard.
And here's the part I find genuinely interesting about all of this, which is that the long arc of American tourism has been a continuous movement from distributed-private-roadside attractions in the 1920s-1960s era, to consolidated-corporate-themed-destination attractions in the 1970s-present era, and the surviving roadside places like Mammoth Cave are the relict population from the earlier configuration, economically isolated organisms that survive only because their fixed infrastructure (the actual hole in the ground, the actual collection of mounted birds) is too expensive and too pointless to replicate elsewhere, and so the family that owns it can extract a small but real rent from people who specifically want to see this thing and have to drive to southern Idaho to do so.
The Disney model, which is the dominant tourism model of the second half of the twentieth century, works by concentrating capital and labor and audience at a single high-throughput site, charging a high per-capita fee, and capturing economies of scale on everything from food service to ride engineering. The roadside model works by distributing low-capital, low-throughput attractions along high-volume travel corridors, charging a low per-capita fee, and capturing the externalities of traffic that's going past anyway.
Once you build a freeway system that bypasses the corridors, the second model dies.
The dying takes decades, but the unit economics get progressively worse until each individual operation either consolidates into a national chain (Stuckey's, in its time), gets bought by the federal government and turned into a National Monument or Memorial (Craters of the Moon, just up the road from Mammoth Cave, is the canonical example), or slowly bleeds out under family ownership until the last generation interested in running it dies or retires.
Mammoth Cave is in the last category.
I do not know how long the operation will continue. Family-run small businesses in rural America have been on a roughly seventy-year decline curve since the construction of the Interstate system, and there is no obvious mechanism by which a place like this acquires fresh capital, fresh management, or fresh audience.
The cave will be there forever. The cave is a hole in the basalt and it will outlast all of us.
The bird museum, however, requires active maintenance, climate control, pest management, occasional restoration of damaged mounts, and the moment the family stops being willing or able to maintain it, the collection will degrade rapidly. Taxidermy without active care has a much shorter half-life than people think. Insects get into the skins. Mounts shed feathers. Glass eyes fall out. The dioramas crack, the backdrops fade, the cards get illegible.
Then someday, probably within the next twenty or thirty years, the operation closes, the family sells the land, and somebody has to decide what to do with several hundred mounted birds that are federally protected and cannot legally be sold, donated to most museums (which don't want them, because the provenance is incomplete and the specimens have no scientific value), or destroyed without specific permission from Fish and Wildlife.
The most likely fate is that the heirs spend a year or two trying to find a museum that will accept the collection as a donation, get nowhere, and eventually surrender it to USFWS, which will store it in the National Wildlife Property Repository in Commerce City, Colorado, alongside the seized ivory and the confiscated leopard skins and the boxes of trinkets made from sea turtle shells that USFWS has been accumulating since the 1970s.
The Repository is the largest single collection of dead protected wildlife in the world.
It is also, more or less, the cemetery of the entire mid-century American private natural-history-museum complex, because that is where almost all of those collections end up once their original institutional context dies.
The end state of every Richard Olsen is a USFWS storage shelf in suburban Denver. There are worse fates, but there are also better ones, and the gap between what the collection meant to the family that built it and what it becomes in the federal repository is the gap that the whole roadside-attraction economy has been falling into for half a century now.
Same as it ever was. The Interstate killed the highway, the highway killed the wagon road, and somewhere along the way the federal government became the inheritor of every small museum nobody else wanted, by default and by statute, not because anyone planned it that way but because the legal infrastructure of wildlife protection inadvertently produced an enormous public archive of mid-century private American collecting that nobody, including USFWS, knows what to do with.
Drive up there before it closes. Pay the family the entry fee. Look at the birds while you still can.
The cave will keep. The museum is on the clock.
Tagged: idaho, roadside, snake river plain, mbta, taxidermy, lava tubes, american tourism, the assay was the business
Somewhat irritated that this is literally almost the thinkpiece essay form of “RIP Route 66” stuff that is older than any of us, that Pixar’s Cars is just the most recent significant cultural impactful rendition of, dragging the nostalgia for nostalgia of parents who aren’t even young enough to have ever seen the Routes in their heyday to sell it to children, again.
I’ve been reading retrospectives about the glorious boomer childhood vacations and listening to boomers waxing nostalgic for their childhood camping trip to a National Park or Mount Rushmore and seeing Wall Drug or the third largest ball of string for literally my entire life. Is there anything left to this dead horse?
Heck, some presumably existing essay from a decade ago discussing how Supernatural addressed the American Roadtrip and the boomer glory of the routes in the post 9/11 American mythspace would at least be novel.
I see what you mean, and I'll ask the bot to try that essay.
But I do want to be clear about a couple things.
I went to this place and liked it, which is the only reason it got written up. I highly encourage anyone else who can go, to go. It's got a real vibe.
It's funny to me how this is described as a drive-by traffic location, when it's down 3 miles of gravel road from the highway to even get there. The problem of your attraction being geography.
The nostalgia you are talking about is a real thing, and one the bots lean into too much and too often. So I've given this bot a very specific instruction to not treat ye olden times as better and purer, and every event is just a slow and irreversible fall. I guess in this case there's just literally nothing else to say.
If you are hipster about highways enough, you know Route 66 is just a Johnny Come Lately, and *it* was the one who made the Lincoln Highway stops obsolete first. I recommend this video if you're ever interested.
https://youtu.be/SmFQR0IltDQ?si=zAg0GyPaANKjAoHN
Pepto-Bismol — undated, occurred to me at a drug store
So Pepto-Bismol started life in 1901 as an emergency cholera infantum remedy mixed up in a New York doctor's office, sold in bulk to other physicians, and called — until somebody at the marketing department realized this was a bad name for a consumer product — Bismosal: Mixture Cholera Infantum, which is to say, the original branding was the name of the disease it was supposed to treat in babies, who were in fact dying of it in industrial-scale numbers in American cities in 1901 because nobody had figured out pasteurization yet and infants drinking summer milk in a tenement were essentially playing Russian roulette with their own gut flora.
The standard story credits an unnamed physician working in New York and the formulation gets picked up commercially by Norwich Pharmacal Company in upstate New York, which spent the first half of the 20th century being the company that owned Pepto-Bismol and not much else of consequence. Norwich, the town, is sort of the pharmaceutical-industrial equivalent of one of those Saxon silver towns from the Agricola era — small place, one main product, a labor force trained specifically in the one thing that pays the bills there, and a downstream effect on local culture and architecture and prosperity that you can still see if you drive through the place in 2026, even though the company itself got absorbed into Procter & Gamble's portfolio in the 1980s and the pink-bottling operation moved away long ago.
The active ingredient is bismuth subsalicylate, which is two molecules doing two completely different jobs in your stomach simultaneously, and the genius of the formulation — to the extent there is one — is that the two jobs happen to be the two jobs you most need done when you're standing in a hotel bathroom in Cancun at three in the morning regretting the ceviche.
Bismuth is the heavy metal. (Heavy metal in the chemistry sense, atomic number 83, sitting right next to lead and polonium on the periodic table, although weirdly nontoxic in a way its neighbors very much aren't — bismuth is the heaviest stable element, sort of the friendly uncle of the dangerous part of the periodic table.) The subsalicylate is the salicylate, which is the same family of compounds aspirin belongs to, doing the anti-inflammatory and mildly antibacterial work. Together they coat the stomach lining and slow down everything in your GI tract by varying mechanisms that researchers were still publishing papers about as recently as the 2010s — the molecule has been in widespread use for 120 years and we are still working out exactly why it does the thing it does.
The pink is a dye.
An absolutely arbitrary aesthetic choice somebody at Norwich made in I think the 1920s, sticking with the kind of cake-frosting Pepto-pink that became so identified with the product that if you mix up a pure bismuth subsalicylate solution in a lab today, the natural color is sort of pale chalky white, which would not move units, hence the dye, hence the bottle, hence eighty years of children associating the color pink with stomachache relief in what has to be one of the more successful color-coded conditioning programs in the history of American consumer goods.
The bismuth itself is a story all by itself. Bismuth has historically been a byproduct metal — you don't mine bismuth, you mine for lead or copper or tin and you separate the bismuth out at the smelter, because bismuth occurs in the same ore bodies as those more economically important metals and is essentially what's left over after you've extracted the parts you actually wanted. The historic centers of bismuth production were the same Erzgebirge and Saxon mining districts where Agricola was working in the 1550s, because the silver-lead-copper polymetallic deposits of Central Europe happen to also be where the bismuth concentrates. The 20th century moved production around — Peru, Bolivia, Mexico — but in the current moment something like 80% of the world's bismuth supply comes out of China, almost all of it as a smelter byproduct from lead refining at facilities in Hunan and Jiangxi, which means the pink bottle on the shelf at your CVS is in some causal sense connected to lead-mining decisions made by Chinese state-owned enterprises and to environmental regulations in the lead-smelting business, neither of which has anything to do with what Pepto-Bismol is for.
Lead refining produces bismuth as a side effect. Bismuth subsalicylate quiets the runs. The supply chain runs from a tailings pond in Hunan to a tourist bathroom in Cancun, through a P&G plant in either Greensboro or Cincinnati depending on the year, and the price of your trip is partly set by Chinese lead policy.
You don't think about this. Nobody does.
(The Chinese near-monopoly is a recent thing — the U.S. Defense Logistics Agency used to maintain a strategic bismuth stockpile, because bismuth is also used in some specialty alloys and as a lead substitute in plumbing fixtures and shotgun pellets, and the Cold War theory was that if the lead-bismuth supply got disrupted you didn't want to be caught short. The stockpile got sold off in the 1990s on the theory that the global market had matured, which it had, except the global market then consolidated in one country, which is the thing global markets do whenever Western planners declare them mature.)
The salicylate side has its own arc. Salicylic acid, the parent compound, comes from willow bark — the Hippocratic tradition knew about willow bark as a fever reducer, German chemists isolated the active compound in the 19th century, Bayer turned it into aspirin in 1899, and the salicylate molecule then proliferated through 20th-century pharmacy as a base for a whole family of derivatives. Bismuth subsalicylate is one such derivative. The pairing of a heavy metal with a salicylate was the kind of thing turn-of-the-century pharmacists did all the time, throwing combinations against the wall to see what stuck, and most of those combinations got dropped within a decade. Pepto stuck because babies in 1901 actually stopped dying when they took it, which is the highest bar a product can clear.
Then a generation went by and the babies weren't dying anymore — pasteurization happened, milk supplies got cleaner, sanitation in cities improved, and the original use case essentially evaporated. Cholera infantum stopped being a leading cause of infant death in the United States. The Mixture Cholera Infantum was a remedy for a condition that no longer existed at scale.
A lesser product would have died with its disease.
What happened instead is what happens to a lot of products that survive the disappearance of their original problem — Norwich rebranded it, repositioned it, found a new use case, pushed it from the pediatric infant-mortality market into the adult upset-stomach market, which is a much bigger market and one that, crucially, will never go away, because every culture in the world produces foods that some fraction of the population can't digest and humans are going to keep eating the wrong thing at the wrong time until the species ends. By the 1940s Pepto-Bismol was an adult OTC product. The original use was vestigial — written on the label in tiny print, then gradually removed, until by the 1970s nobody under sixty remembered what the product had been for in the first place.
(There's a Reye's syndrome warning on the bottle now, precisely because the salicylate component shouldn't be given to children under twelve with viral infections, which means the product that was invented to save babies is now contraindicated for children. The pharmacology hasn't changed. The information about salicylates and viral encephalopathy has. The product survived by changing who it was for, three different ways across three different decades.)
And then in the 1980s Barry Marshall and Robin Warren in Australia worked out that stomach ulcers were caused by a bacterium, Helicobacter pylori, a finding so heretical to the gastroenterology consensus of the day that Marshall had to drink a beaker of H. pylori culture himself, develop gastritis, and then cure himself, in order to get anyone to take the work seriously. They got the Nobel for it in 2005. And it turned out that one of the few cheap, readily available, over-the-counter compounds with actual bactericidal activity against H. pylori — antibiotics are the primary treatment, but as part of the quadruple-therapy regimens — is bismuth subsalicylate. The pink stuff. The cake-frosting-colored chalky pediatric remedy from 1901, originally aimed at a bacterial infection (the cholera-adjacent bacteria killing babies on summer milk) and then sold for fifty years as a non-specific stomach-soother, turned out to be doing actual antibacterial work against an actual specific bacterium all along, which the science only caught up to in the 21st century.
Nobody planned that.
This is the thing about long-tailed consumer pharmaceuticals — the ones that survive a hundred years are usually surviving because the underlying biochemistry turns out to do more than the original formulators understood, and the formulators got it on the shelf for one reason and the molecule keeps earning its shelf space for completely different reasons that get discovered decade by decade. Aspirin is the canonical example (heart-attack prevention was a 1970s discovery, four generations after the molecule went on sale). Pepto is the second-tier version of the same story.
The travel-diarrhea use case, which is most Americans' actual encounter with the product, is downstream of the postwar tourism boom, GIs coming back from the Pacific and Mediterranean theaters with chronic gut problems, the airline industry making intercontinental leisure travel a middle-class experience by the 1960s, and the discovery — by trial and error among American tourists in Mexico and India and Egypt — that the pink stuff worked. There were studies in the 1970s and 1980s that put numbers on the prophylactic effect, and for a while the medical guidance was actually that travelers should take Pepto preventively, which turned out to be a bad idea if you were doing it for weeks at a time because the bismuth accumulates and your tongue turns black, but that's a separate story.
(The black tongue thing, and the black stool, are bismuth sulfide — your gut bacteria react the bismuth with sulfur compounds in the digestive tract and you produce a thin layer of the same metal sulfide that occurs as a black crust on weathered bismuth ore. Your mouth becomes briefly a smelter. The mineralogy of bismuth is reenacting itself inside you.)
What I keep coming back to is the supply chain. The pink chalk in the bottle is, as a matter of physical history, a chunk of central Chinese lead-smelting byproduct combined with a derivative of willow-bark chemistry that was industrialized in Germany around the time of the Boer War, mixed with food-grade pink dye whose color was chosen by a marketing department in upstate New York during the Coolidge administration, and sold to you for the purpose of treating a condition that the original formulation was not designed for and whose underlying mechanism only got fully described in the mid-2000s. Each component of the product comes from a different century and a different country and a different industry, and the whole thing costs $7.99 at Walgreens.
Same as it ever was.
The product survives because the molecule is interesting and the molecule is interesting because three or four unrelated chemistries happen to converge in it, and consumer pharmacy is mostly the business of finding such molecules and then attaching them to whatever market is currently the largest. The cholera babies died off. The tourists arrived. The ulcer patients showed up. The molecule kept earning its keep through three different epidemiological eras by being three different things, and the bottle, the color, the chalky taste, those have stayed roughly the same since the dye choice in the 1920s, because the consumer relationship to the product is essentially nostalgic at this point. People reach for the pink because their parents reached for the pink. The pharmacology underneath the nostalgia is a moving target. The pink is the constant.
Hello! I had some posts from this blog opened in other tabs to eventually read later (😅😅😅) but realized on refreshing some of them that they'd been deleted. Just wondering what the cause might have been for that? Also just now upon writing I'm realizing this may have something to do with the URL-switch?
Thanks for the blog, I enjoy reading it and learn a lot from it
Yeah, I have not deleted posts. Maybe like one for some serious fact checking. But not many.
I did, weeks ago, have posts on the old blog but under this tumblr name. All I did to that old blog was add "-og" to the end, so if you still have the URL just add that suffix and it should restore them.
But also every old blog post was reblogged over here, so just scroll far enough back here and you should find them.
the Boulder Dushanbe Teahouse — undated, sometime after thinking about sister cities for unrelated reasons
The Boulder Dushanbe Teahouse is a hand-carved Persian-style teahouse on 13th Street in Boulder, Colorado, given as a gift in 1987 by the mayor of Dushanbe, Tajik SSR, to the mayor of Boulder, Colorado, USA, and the thing nobody quite explains is what a Soviet-republic capital was doing handing out municipal-scale architecture during the Gorbachev period to a mid-sized American college town, which is a question that gets immediately interesting the moment you start pulling on it, because the answer is sister cities, and sister cities is one of those institutional designs that started life as one thing and quietly became another thing while everyone was looking the other way.
Sister Cities International was founded in 1956 by Eisenhower.
Or rather it was incubated by Eisenhower — the formal incorporation comes later — out of a White House conference on something called "citizen diplomacy," which was Eisenhower's pet idea, the notion being that you could route around the brittleness of state-to-state Cold War relations by getting actual Americans into actual contact with actual foreigners under the auspices of their respective mayors, on the theory that this was a benign substrate for goodwill that could survive the periodic spasms of the official diplomatic relationship.
The CIA loved it. Naturally.
Anything that gets American civilians (professors, businessmen, Rotary Club presidents) into the cities of adversary nations under cover of municipal handshake was a free intelligence-gathering operation that didn't have to be run as an intelligence-gathering operation, which is the best kind, the kind that produces the same product as the expensive kind without burning a single piece of tradecraft. The State Department also loved it for the diplomatic equivalent of the same reason — it was cheap, it was deniable, it produced photo ops, and the photo ops were of midwestern mayors hugging foreign midwestern-equivalent mayors, which polls extremely well.
The Soviets caught on quickly.
They had their own version, called something bureaucratic in Russian that translates roughly as "Union of Soviet Societies for Friendship and Cultural Relations with Foreign Countries," SSOD, which on paper was a public diplomacy outfit and in practice was a sub-organ of the international department of the Central Committee, and the SSOD ran the Soviet end of the sister-city pairings — meaning every Soviet sister city was vetted, every delegation was minded, every gift was approved by people whose actual job title had nothing to do with friendship.
So that's the institutional substrate.
By the late 1970s and early 1980s, an additional thing is happening, which is that a particular subset of American cities — college towns, Pacific Northwest cities, liberal pockets generally — start using the sister-city framework as an end run around the federal posture on the Cold War. They pair with Soviet cities specifically, not as a State Department initiative but as a local political statement: we as a community do not endorse the nuclear standoff, we as a community will conduct our own foreign policy, and if Washington wants to mine Nicaraguan harbors we as the city council of Berkeley will be sending a fruit basket to Volgograd.
Close to two dozen American-Soviet pairings by the mid-eighties. Most came out of nuclear-freeze activism. Boulder pairs with Dushanbe in 1987.
The pairing is typical of the moment — a Reagan-era college town in the Mountain West using the municipal sisterhood as a peace-movement gesture against the policy of its own federal government, with the Soviet end of the relationship being handled by an apparatus that found the gesture genuinely useful for its own reasons (cracks in NATO solidarity, civilians visiting Soviet Central Asia, Western academics being introduced to interlocutors of the host's choosing).
Why Dushanbe specifically.
Dushanbe in 1987 is the capital of the Tajik SSR, the poorest republic in the Union by most measures, the one furthest from Moscow geographically and culturally, Persian-speaking rather than Turkic, ruled by a comparatively soft local Communist Party that had been allowed unusual latitude to maintain Tajik cultural institutions because the alternative was the cultural vacuum that produced Afghanistan, which was right across the border, and which the Soviets at that exact moment were in the eighth year of trying to occupy and losing badly.
The Tajik SSR was, in the Soviet imagination, the friendly Persian — the version of Iran that worked, the showcase Muslim republic, the demonstration project for the proposition that you could be Muslim and modern and socialist and the Russians wouldn't shoot you. Dushanbe was the showroom. The teahouse was the brochure.
So the gift to Boulder was a specific message in a specific register: look at our heritage, look at our craftsmanship, look at what civilization survives here — delivered roughly the way a Habsburg ambassador in 1700 used a porcelain service to Versailles, a portable claim to cultural depth, manufactured to specification, on the assumption that the recipient was sophisticated enough to read the encoding. The encoding being: we are an ancient Persianate culture, we have outlasted everyone, and the people who currently administer us from Moscow are also passing through.
(The actual craftsmen — about forty of them, in a workshop in Dushanbe — were paid in rubles, carving and painting in an idiom their grandfathers had practiced, in a style descended from the Persianate court arts of Bukhara and Samarkand, on a building that was going to be assembled in a parking lot 7,000 miles away by an American volunteer crew who had never carved a piece of cedar in their lives. The interior columns are hand-painted in a style called naqqoshi that takes years to learn. The ceiling panels are based on the geometric patterns of the Sufi tradition. The fountain in the middle is copper, hammered in Dushanbe. None of the people who made any of it ever saw the assembled building. The shipping containers arrived in Boulder in 1990 and then sat in a city warehouse for eight years, because Boulder had not actually arranged for a site, a builder, a permit, an operator, or any of the other things you would need to put a teahouse somewhere.)
That eight-year gap is its own essay.
What killed the building's quick assembly was the same thing that killed half the sister-city projects of the late eighties — the country that had sent the gift stopped existing in 1991, the funding pipeline on both ends dried up, the original officials on both sides rotated out or got purged or in the Tajik case got caught in an absolutely brutal civil war (1992-1997, somewhere between 50,000 and 100,000 dead, which is genuinely staggering for a republic of 6 million people, and which essentially nobody in the United States noticed because it happened during the same window as Yugoslavia and Rwanda), and Boulder ended up holding eleven shipping containers of disassembled hand-carved cedar in a public works yard wondering what exactly to do with the gift from a city that was now the capital of a different country which was currently shelling itself.
The Dushanbe end was unreachable for most of the nineties. The craftsmen scattered. Some emigrated. Some died. The workshop closed. By the time Boulder got around to actually building the thing (1998 ground-breaking, 2002 opening), there was nobody left in Dushanbe to consult on the assembly.
This kept happening to American sister-city projects in former Soviet republics through the nineties — the gift arrives, the country evaporates, the gift sits in a warehouse, the city eventually figures out it owns a piece of cultural infrastructure to which it has both no use and no obvious means of disposal. Boulder happened to have a city council and a downtown booster organization motivated enough to actually build the thing. Most American sister cities in the same position did not. There are probably eight or nine other half-built or never-built teahouses, friendship halls, and folk-art pavilions sitting in municipal storage facilities around the country, paid for and never erected, donated by entities that no longer exist.
The Boulder version got built because a local restaurateur — Lenny Martinelli, who ran a Mediterranean place — agreed to operate the building as a teahouse-restaurant, which gave the city the operating revenue model it needed to justify the build-out. Without the restaurant, the building is a non-functional civic ornament with maintenance costs and no revenue. With the restaurant, it pencils out.
The teahouse opens in 2002.
What it is, functionally, is a working restaurant that happens to be a hand-carved monument to a vanished Soviet republic's claim to cultural depth, and it has been operating continuously since, which means that for the last twenty-three years tourists in Boulder have been ordering plov and drinking Persian tea inside a piece of late-Cold-War municipal diplomacy whose original political content has been almost completely sanded off, leaving behind the carved cedar and the naqqoshi and the copper fountain, which is what the political content was always pointing at anyway.
Dushanbe got a building too — eventually. Boulder commissioned a "Cyber Café" in a Western architectural idiom and shipped the materials over in 2000.
It was installed in a park in central Dushanbe. The civil war was over by then but the country was poor enough that the building got vandalized, looted, and partially burned within a few years, and the last time anyone wrote about it it was a derelict shell. The reciprocity broke down asymmetrically. Boulder got a Persian teahouse that became a popular tourist attraction. Dushanbe got an internet café that got robbed.
Intention was fine on both ends — what diverged was the substrate. Boulder had a property-rights regime, a tax base, a tourism economy, and a downtown association capable of maintaining the building; Dushanbe in 2002 had a per-capita GDP of about $250 a year and a government that was still mostly held together with foreign aid and remittances from Russia.
The sister-city framework keeps producing this kind of asymmetric outcome and it's worth being precise about why. The American end of any sister-city pairing is a stable democratic municipality with a property-tax base, a city council that turns over but doesn't dissolve, and a civic culture that includes line items for "international relations" because somebody put it in the budget thirty years ago and nobody has gotten around to taking it out. The foreign end is whatever it is — sometimes another stable municipality (the German pairings, the Japanese pairings, the French pairings: those work both directions), sometimes a city whose national government has collapsed twice in the relationship's lifetime.
The pairing is durable on the American side because American municipal politics is boring in a useful way.
It is fragile on the other side because everywhere else in the world is more interesting than American municipal politics. What you end up with, by 2025, is a sister-city map that is essentially a fossil record of American foreign policy enthusiasms across the postwar period — the German pairings from the Marshall Plan era, the Japanese pairings from the occupation, the Chinese pairings from the Nixon opening, the Soviet pairings from the freeze movement, the Vietnamese pairings from the normalization, the Cuban pairings (such few as exist) from the Obama thaw, the Iraqi and Afghan pairings from the wars.
Most of them are dormant. They get reactivated occasionally when a new mayor decides foreign relations are fun, and then they go dormant again. The occasional pairing (Boulder-Dushanbe, San Francisco-Shanghai, Pittsburgh-Saarbrücken) actually produces something that operates as a civic asset rather than a Wikipedia entry that gets updated once a decade.
(Sister Cities International's database lists something north of 2,000 American partnerships. The number involving any actual ongoing exchange is, by the organization's own internal estimates, somewhere under 30 percent.)
The teahouse is the surviving artifact. The political project it was meant to enact — citizen-level Cold War de-escalation, municipal foreign policy as a check on federal posture — outlived its moment and got mostly forgotten, in the way that successful political projects often do, because success looks like the disappearance of the problem they were addressing.
Nobody in Boulder in 2025 thinks of the teahouse as a peace-movement gesture. They think of it as where you go for tea.
And the carving is beautiful, and the food is decent, and the building remains the only piece of hand-carved Persian architecture of its scale anywhere in the Western Hemisphere, sitting in a parking lot in a college town in the Front Range, and the sister city across the world is the capital of a country whose current president has been in office since 1994, which is its own kind of survival.
Same as it ever was. The empire ends, the assay continues, the building stands.
So "On the Nature of Daylight" is six minutes of strings doing essentially nothing — a slow descending figure, four chords, no melody worth naming, written in 2004 and stuck on a record (The Blue Notebooks) that was at the time mostly going to be heard by the kind of people who already owned a Górecki Third Symphony and were ready for the next move in that lane. The piece sat there for two or three years. Then it got into Shutter Island. Then it got into Arrival. Then it got into Disconnect, and The Leftovers credit roll, and somewhere along the way it stopped being a piece of contemporary classical music and started being a piece of synch licensing infrastructure — the cue that says "this scene is sad in a dignified European way, please feel it now," and which the picture editor reaches for the way an earlier generation reached for Barber's Adagio.
That is the actual career.
I don't mean this dismissively. Richter is a real composer — Edinburgh, Royal Academy, studied with Berio in Florence, did time in Piano Circus playing Reich and Glass back when those guys were still figuring out what they'd become — and the work has technical interest, in the same way that the Pärt and Górecki and Tavener moves of the late 80s and early 90s had technical interest, which is to say: drop the modernist serial vocabulary entirely, accept tonality without irony, build everything out of slow harmonic motion and let timbre do the work that 12-tone density used to do. Holy minimalism, post-minimalism, sacred minimalism — pick your label, the labels are downstream of marketing departments anyway, and the marketing departments at Elektra Nonesuch and ECM and later Deutsche Grammophon correctly identified that there was an audience for music that sounded like grief without forcing the listener to learn a new musical language to access it.
The Górecki Third was the proof of concept. 1976 composition, 1992 Nonesuch recording with Dawn Upshaw and the London Sinfonietta under Zinman, somewhere north of a million copies sold in a couple of years, which is not a number contemporary classical recordings do. Somebody at Nonesuch — Bob Hurwitz, basically — figured out that the people buying it were not classical buyers but people who had bought one or two Pink Floyd records in the 70s and had not really kept up since but knew when something was sad and beautiful and would pay for it.
Richter walked through that doorway.
(He is also genuinely smart about it. Recomposed: Vivaldi's Four Seasons, 2012, is the single most efficient piece of intellectual property he ever made — take the most-licensed work of classical music on earth, rebuild it into something that sounds like Vivaldi but is legally his composition, and now every yoga studio and BMW commercial that used to pay public-domain nothing for "Spring" pays him for "Spring (Recomposed)." This is what a composition major learns at the Royal Academy if he is paying attention to the actual business he is in.)
Then Sleep.
Eight-hour composition, premiered 2015, designed for an audience that would experience it by sleeping through it — beds set up in the venue, the music running through the night. Beautiful as a concept, genius as a streaming product. The 31 individual tracks hit Spotify the same year the platform was still figuring out its algorithmic playlist economy, and the math is that an album of conventional length might get you a few thousand streams off a focus playlist before listeners scroll past, while eight hours of low-stimulus instrumental music designed to play through the unconscious hours will accumulate its full duration of streams every night from every listener who falls asleep to it. A passive royalty machine running while the audience is, definitionally, asleep.
By 2020 Sleep had crossed half a billion streams. Deutsche Grammophon signed him. The yellow label, the most prestigious in classical, was now distributing music that is technically classical in genre and structurally a sleep aid in function, and nobody at Universal Music was unhappy about this, because the sleep aid was paying for the prestige.
The genre that grew up around this is called neoclassical, and the genre is best read as a streaming-economy product rather than as a continuation of any prior tradition. Einaudi, Nils Frahm, Ólafur Arnalds, Joep Beving, Hauschka, the whole continental shelf of mid-tempo solo-piano-or-strings instrumental music that fills the "Peaceful Piano" and "Deep Focus" playlists — these are compositions written downstream of playlist slots. The optimal track is four to seven minutes of unobtrusive emotional shading that a half-attentive listener will not skip; the optimal album is enough such tracks to fill a commute or a workday. The platforms discovered the audience and the audience generated the genre.
Richter is the most successful practitioner because he came to it from actual minimalist training and brought enough craft that the work survives the framing — the Blue Notebooks pieces still play live, Voices (the 2020 setting of the Universal Declaration of Human Rights) is musically serious, the film scores for Ad Astra and Hostiles are doing drama that earns its slow tempo. But the career is unintelligible without the licensing apparatus and the streaming apparatus that turned a six-minute string piece from 2004 into the most reliably-deployed cue for tasteful melancholy in the contemporary American picture-editing rooms.
The neoclassical thing was always going to happen once the platforms existed.
Somebody was going to notice that the streaming math rewarded length and inoffensiveness over compression and edge, and that tonal slow instrumental music aimed at a half-attentive audience would pay better per minute of composition than anything you could write for a concert hall. Richter just happened to be standing there with a Berio degree and a piece called On the Nature of Daylight that he had written, as far as he knew at the time, for himself.
Same as it ever was — the artist makes the thing for one reason, the market finds it for another, and a quarter-century later there is no separating the artist's intent from the apparatus that pays him for it.
just thinking there should be an HBO series about this man. Aaron Burr was once a founding father in the same way Lucifer was once an angel. So to give potential show runners ideas:
on Aaron Burr, every weird thing, and why he thought he could just go start a country
Okay so the thing you have to understand about Burr, the thing that organizes all the weird anecdotes and there are a LOT of weird anecdotes, is that he was running an 18th-century political career inside a country that was, in real time, over about a fifteen-year window, abolishing the 18th-century political career. He's the last specimen of a type. The type stopped working while he was still trying to be it. Everything else is downstream of that.
His maternal grandfather was Jonathan Edwards. The "Sinners in the Hands of an Angry God" guy. The closest thing the colonies produced to a world-historical intellectual, the engine of the Great Awakening, and it is wild that this is the same family, because the grandson becomes the most notorious libertine of the early Republic, but it's also not that wild when you look at how power actually moved, because the way Edwards operated inside Presbyterian church politics — factions, patronage, personal loyalty, men of quality recognizing each other and cutting deals — was structurally not that different from how civil politics worked. Same machine, different sanctuary.
And then both his parents died before he was three. His father, Aaron Burr Sr., second president of the College of New Jersey, which is Princeton — dead. His mother, then both grandparents, all inside about a year. The most spectacular Calvinist pedigree in North America collapses into one orphaned toddler.
He entered Princeton at thirteen and graduated at sixteen, which was fast even for a period when "college" was a thing rich boys did at an age we'd now call middle school.
Then the war, and this is where you start to see the type in action, because the young Burr's war is pure 18th-century lawyer-adventurer: you attach yourself to a bold venture, you perform conspicuous personal valor, you accumulate a reputation as an individual man of parts. He's nineteen and studying law in Connecticut and he immediately throws in with Benedict Arnold's expedition to Quebec — the famous one, the death march through the Maine wilderness, three hundred-plus miles of bog and starvation where Arnold's men are eating their dogs and boiling their shoes.
Burr does the whole thing. Arnold's phrase for him is "great spirit and resolution."
Then Arnold sends him up the Saint Lawrence in winter to make contact with General Montgomery, and one version has him doing this leg disguised as a Catholic priest, slipping through British lines into Montreal. (Treat the priest costume as well-circulated rather than nailed down. It's the kind of detail that attaches to a man like a burr, no pun, fine, pun.)
Montgomery liked him, made him an aide-de-camp. And then at the Battle of Quebec on the last day of 1775 Montgomery gets cut down by grapeshot in the opening minutes, and the legend — every Burr biography runs it — is that the teenage Burr tried to carry the general's body off the field under fire and had to give it up because Montgomery was a big man and the snow was deep and a kid can only drag a corpse so far.
He failed. The body stayed.
But the attempt, the image of it, the kind of thing that makes a national reputation in 1776 — that worked. That's the currency. Personal conspicuous gallantry, witnessed, retold.
He lands on Washington's staff after that and quits in something like two weeks. They did not get along. Nobody's ever fully nailed down why, and there's a whole cottage industry of speculation — Burr saw something at headquarters, or it was just two extremely vain men in a small room — but the relevant thing is that Burr's whole mode was peer-to-peer, charm-the-principal, deal-among-equals, and Washington was busy becoming the one American who was nobody's peer. Bad chemistry, structurally. He goes off to serve under Israel Putnam instead, "Old Put," and during the retreat from Lower Manhattan after the Battle of Long Island he's credited with marching an entire stranded brigade out of a closing British trap and getting the whole unit out clean.
So before he's twenty-two: dead theologian grandfather, the death march, the priest disguise, the general's body in the snow, the fortnight with Washington that maybe poisoned the rest of his life, and a brigade extracted from a trap. And here's the thing — this is the boring part of the biography. We haven't gotten to anything weird yet.
Now I want to do the Hamilton thing properly, because it can't just be the duel, and the duel doesn't make sense without it.
They orbited each other for fifteen years in the same small New York legal-political world — and it really was small, a few dozen serious lawyers in the whole city. They tried cases on the same side. They tried cases against each other. You could be working to destroy a man's entire political project and also be his co-counsel in the same week, and that wasn't hypocrisy, that was just how the profession ran. Hamilton was the Federalist: Treasury, the Bank of New York, the man who built the actual financial plumbing of the country and believed in it with religious intensity. Burr was the Republican operator working the other side of the same town.
And the thing that braids them together tightest — tighter than Weehawken — is a bank pretending to be a water company.
Okay so. New York in 1799 is dying of bad water. The Collect Pond, the old freshwater source, has been turned into an open sewer by the tanneries and slaughterhouses ringing it, and yellow fever is coming through every summer and killing people by the thousands, because nobody understands the mosquitoes yet but everybody can see the water is poison. So a private company gets chartered to fix it: the Manhattan Company. Burr runs the charter effort and brings Hamilton and a bunch of other Federalists aboard, selling it as the civic-minded private alternative to a tax-funded public waterworks. Hamilton lends his name to the water pitch.
And then Burr slips a clause into the charter — surplus capital may be used in any monied transaction not inconsistent with the law — and that one sentence, dropped in near the end, quietly converts a water utility into a bank.
The Bank of the Manhattan Company opens within months, before they've laid much pipe, specifically to break the Federalist lock on New York banking that Hamilton's Bank of New York held. Hamilton, who'd been used as the respectable front for the water pitch, cut ties when he understood what he'd waved through. Which, you can see his point.
The water system they actually built was garbage on purpose. Hollowed-out pine logs for pipes. A network serving maybe a thousand houses. Water nobody wanted to drink. Doing it well would've cost the bank money, and the charter only required that they attempt to supply water — so they attempted. (This is, I think, one of the purest documents of the whole American arrangement: the legally-mandated gesture toward the public good, executed at exactly the minimum that keeps the charter, while the actual machine does something else entirely in the back.)
That bank is the direct corporate ancestor of JPMorgan Chase. The company that did the worst possible job supplying water to a dying city is now the biggest bank in America.
Now put the murder on top of it. In late 1799 a 22-year-old Quaker woman named Elma Sands turns up dead at the bottom of a well off what's now Spring Street — and the well belongs to the Manhattan Company. Burr's water-company-shaped bank. His infrastructure.
Her accused killer is a carpenter named Levi Weeks who boarded in the same house, and he gets defended by — who else — Hamilton and Burr, co-counsel, plus Brockholst Livingston, a future Supreme Court justice. The "dream team," and the reason it assembled is completely unglamorous: Levi's brother Ezra was a rich builder who'd built Hamilton's country house, the Grange, and had the money and the leverage.
A rich guy needed to bail his little brother out.
So Burr is connected to this one dead girl three separate ways at once. He owns the well she's found in. He's on the defense team for the man accused of putting her there. And he was professional colleagues with the brother of the accused.
The trial gives us the candle moment — both Hamilton and Burr later took credit for it, and the actual transcript credits it only to "one of the prisoner's counsel" — where a candle gets held up to a different suspect's face in the dark courtroom so the jury can read his guilt off his features.
(The defense's case was largely built around naming all the men Elma could have been "going with" so as to leave doubt it was Levi. A strategy we're still familiar with 250 years later.)
Jury acquits in about five minutes.
You see how dense this is? Collaborate on a celebrity murder defense over a body in your own bank's well, tie for the presidency the same year, then kill the man you collaborated with on a ledge in Weehawken four years on.
(There's a curse attached to the whole thing, and it's folklore, stitched together in hindsight, but it's good folklore. When the verdict came in, legend has Elma's aunt Catherine Ring rounding on the defense and cursing them — in the best-attested version, shaking her fist at Hamilton and saying that if he died a natural death she'd believe there was no justice in heaven. And then you look at what happened to the men in that courtroom. Hamilton: shot dead by his own co-counsel four years later. Hamilton's son Philip: killed in a duel on the same Weehawken ground, three years before his father. Brockholst Livingston, the third defense lawyer: also killed a man in a duel, and was said to live under a gloom he never shook (though they made him a Supreme Court justice anyway). Burr: the duel, the treason trial, exile, ruin, his daughter lost at sea — the slowest and most total unraveling of the lot. And the presiding judge, Chief Justice John Lansing Jr., walked out of a Manhattan hotel in December 1829 to post a letter and was never seen again, no body, no trace, ten days short of exactly thirty years after Elma Sands left her boardinghouse and vanished the same way. The man who presided over the trial of a girl who disappeared, disappeared. Which proves nothing — people in that era dueled and met bad ends at a clip, and you can assemble a "curse" out of any unlucky enough crowd if you squint — but the Lansing detail in particular is real, unsolved, and sits there refusing to be explained, same as the rest of it.)
The same two names keep coming out of the same hat, in the same small city, over and over, until one of them is dead.
Right, the tie. 1800. Everybody knows the cartoon version from the musical now, but the actual mechanism is the whole point, because it's the old system breaking against the new one in real time. The Constitution at that point had each elector casting two undifferentiated votes for president, no way to mark one for president and one for VP — a design that assumed electors were discrete agents of quality exercising individual judgment, the 18th-century model. But mass parties had just shown up, the electors were now party agents pledged to a ticket, and when the Democratic-Republican machine delivered cleanly for Jefferson-and-Burr, the two men tied, seventy-three to seventy-three, and it went to the House.
And here's the weird part, the diagnostic part. Burr, who everyone understood was running for the second slot, did not stand down. He didn't openly grab for the top job either. He just went quiet and let it ride.
Let the House grind through thirty-six ballots over seven days while the Federalists schemed to install him over Jefferson specifically to spite Jefferson. And his silence during that stretch did more lasting damage to him inside his own party than the duel or the treason ever did, because — and this is the thing — Burr was behaving exactly as the old system said you should.
Of course you don't refuse a chance at the presidency that the machinery has handed you. Offices are positions you acquire through maneuver. That's the game. He was playing it correctly. It's just that the game had changed under him into something where pledged loyalty to the ticket was now the whole moral content, and operating like the old rules still held read, to everyone watching, as naked treachery.
The man who broke the tie against him, who threw his weight to Jefferson, was Hamilton.
And you have to understand why Hamilton did it, because it's the duel in miniature. Hamilton was an ideological animal. He had a program — centralized finance, manufacturing, a strong executive, an Anglophile foreign policy — and he believed in it like scripture. What he could not stand about Burr was that Burr appeared to have no program at all. No fixed commitments. A man you could deal with. Which to Hamilton meant a man without principle, which to Hamilton meant the single most dangerous kind of politician, because a man who could end up anywhere will. Better Jefferson, whose principles Hamilton hated but could at least locate.
And from inside Burr's head this was just incomprehensible. Of course you could deal with him — that's how politics worked. The alternative was what, ideological warfare? The kind of factional bloodletting that had wrecked every previous republic on the historical record? Hamilton's principled loathing landed on Burr as personal loathing, because in Burr's framework there was no other kind of loathing available. There was no "I oppose your structural vision of the state." There were just men, and whether you could do business with them.
(The Twelfth Amendment, ratified 1804, exists to make sure that particular tie can never recur. It's a constitutional patch named, in effect, after this one specific mess. They had to rewire the machine because Burr almost drove through a seam in it.)
As VP he presided over the Senate and the lasting thing he did there was procedural — the body of rules and chair-precedents he shaped feed into the lineage that eventually produces the filibuster, the minority's power to talk a thing to death. People say "Burr invented the filibuster," which overstates it, but the Senate's tolerance for unlimited debate has roots in this rulebook, sure.
Then the duel, which I won't relitigate end to end, just the texture. 1804. He loses the New York governor's race. Some remarks Hamilton made about him at a dinner — a "despicable opinion," per the letter that got printed — make it into the papers, Burr demands an apology or a denial, Hamilton supplies neither, and the sitting Vice President of the United States shoots and kills the former Secretary of the Treasury on a ledge across the river in Weehawken.
A sitting VP commits homicide and then just… finishes his term.
Indicted in both New Jersey and New York, neither prosecution goes anywhere, and he gavels the Senate to order for months afterward like nothing happened. Which, again — old system. Affairs of honor between gentlemen were a recognized institution. He was, in his own framework, behaving correctly. The framework was three years from being a relic.
And NOW we get to the part everyone treats as Burr losing his mind, the Western thing, which I'd argue is the opposite of losing his mind. It's Burr correctly reading that his Eastern career is finished and rationally applying the only model he's got to the one venue where it might still work.
Because here's the question that the whole essay is really about: how does a guy in 1805 look around and conclude that he can just go start a country? And the answer is that in 1805 this was not actually a crazy thing to conclude.
Think about what the trans-Mississippi West was. It's the last place on the continent where the old colonial-era playbook — raise a private army on personal credit and loyalty, march into contested ground, carve out a polity on individual initiative, present the established powers with a fait accompli — could plausibly still be run. People had been doing exactly this for two hundred years. It's what the proprietors did. It's what every colonial adventurer with a land grant and a militia did. And it's not even past its time — Andrew Jackson is about to do a version of it successfully in Spanish Florida, invading foreign territory more or less on his own hook and getting rewarded for it. The filibusters — and I mean the OTHER filibuster, the freebooting private-army-into-Latin-America guys, not the Senate kind — are going to run this exact move for the next fifty years, William Walker crowning himself president of Nicaragua and all that. Burr wasn't hallucinating a possibility. He was reaching for a real and recently-live one.
He went west and started assembling — something.
Nobody has ever fully established what. Peel the western states off into a separate confederacy? Raise a private army and invade Spanish Mexico and crown himself emperor of it? A giant land-speculation con dressed up as both to keep the money flowing? Possibly all three at once, the pitch shifting depending on which backer he had in the room that day — and that ambiguity is itself old-system, because in the personalist mode you don't need a fixed program, you need momentum and men and possibility, and you sort out what it actually is once you've got the force assembled.
His private army topped out at fewer than a hundred men. He sent a feeler to the British minister offering, essentially, to detach a chunk of North America for them. Britain didn't bite.
His chief co-conspirator was General James Wilkinson — ranking officer in the entire U.S. Army — and the thing about Wilkinson, which comes out later, is that he was simultaneously a paid agent of the Spanish crown the whole time, known in the Spanish files as Agent 13. When Wilkinson decided the scheme was going to fail he turned on Burr, sent Jefferson a letter Burr had written him in cipher, and — this is the good part — doctored the cipher letter first to scrub his own involvement before turning it in as evidence.
The chief witness for the prosecution was a foreign double agent who had personally edited the prosecution's central document. You cannot make this up.
The staging ground was an island in the Ohio River owned by Harman Blennerhassett, a wealthy dreamy Irish émigré who'd built a mansion in the middle of the river, got swept into Burr's orbit, bankrolled a chunk of the operation, and lost basically everything for it. (There's always a Blennerhassett. The personalist-adventure model runs on finding the rich romantic who'll fund the dream and eat the loss.)
Jefferson wanted Burr hanged and said so more or less publicly, which gave you the spectacle of a sitting President pre-judging a capital trial. And the trial itself is maybe the single most beautiful artifact of the whole transition I'm describing, because the man presiding was Chief Justice John Marshall, and what Marshall did was basically rule the old definition of treason out of existence.
The old definition was political: treason is whatever looks like plotting against the established order, broadly, by feel.
Marshall read the Constitution's clause narrowly — "levying war" requires an actual overt act of assembled force, witnessed by two people — and since Burr hadn't physically been on the island when the handful of men gathered there, the only provable overt act had no Burr in it.
The jury returned one of the great passive-aggressive verdicts in American law: not "not guilty" but "not proved to be guilty by any evidence submitted to us." Marshall's ruling is still the reason treason convictions are nearly impossible to get in this country, and it's good law, the legalistic-procedural standard is the modern one and the right one — but in 1807 the distinction between "a legal standard" and "a political favor to a man Jefferson hated" was still being invented, and to half the country it read as Marshall springing an enemy of the President on a technicality.
Burr beat the rap on what's fundamentally a definitional point, and his reputation never recovered anyway, because the country had already convicted him in the venue that was actually replacing the courts and the salons: the newspapers. Public opinion as an independent force. The new machine.
So he runs to Europe, broke and disgraced, for four years, and this is where it gets, in a quiet way, the weirdest, because of the diary.
He kept a private journal the whole exile, ostensibly for his daughter, and it survived, and it got published in 1838 after his death, and it is an astonishing document. He recorded his sex life in it with what one writer called lawyerly precision — affairs with aristocratic women, paid encounters everywhere from the parks of Stockholm to the arcades of the Palais Royal, a running ledger of it, a lot of it with maids and governesses bolstering thin salaries, which a modern reader accurately called the gig economy before it had a name.
And he switched languages mid-sentence to cover his tracks — English to French specifically when the subject turned to sex, dropping into Latin and bits of Swedish and German — partly habit, partly to baffle a nosy London landlady he correctly figured was reading his pages.
The diary's also full of him being broke in the smallest, most human ways.
He logs his purchases. There's a much-passed-around bit about him recording the price of a single coconut that works out, inflation-adjusted, to something absurd. (I couldn't run the exact figure to ground against the primary text, so take "absurd" as the claim, not a number.) He pawned things. He records fits of pique — once driving a fifteen-year-old street musician out of his room and then immediately regretting it and spending the whole rest of the day looking for her to apologize.
And while he's in this state — destitute, surveilled, writing filth in four languages to dodge his landlady — he's also hanging around Jeremy Bentham. The founder of utilitarianism. The felicific-calculus guy. And the two of them at one point sit together gazing at a portrait of Theodosia, his daughter, of whom Bentham was a long-distance admirer. The man who shot Hamilton and tried to invade Mexico, sitting in a London room with the greatest-happiness-of-the-greatest-number guy, mooning over a picture of the kid he educated like a prince. That happened.
Which — the daughter. I should back up to the daughter, because Theodosia is the one place the personalist 18th-century man did something that reads as ahead of his time rather than behind it.
Burr decided, on principle, partly off reading Mary Wollstonecraft, to educate his daughter exactly the way you'd educate a brilliant son. Greek, Latin, mathematics, the works.
She became one of the most learned women in the country. He adored her past the point of sense, and she adored him back through every disgrace — the duel, the treason, all of it.
And then she vanished. After her ten-year-old son died of fever in 1812 she fell into a deep decline, and that December she boarded a schooner called the Patriot at Georgetown, South Carolina, to sail up to New York and see her father, who'd just crept back from exile. The ship was never seen again. Neither was she.
It generated two centuries of pulp — storm theories, pirate theories, aged convicts giving deathbed confessions to having boarded and scuttled the Patriot and walked the passengers off a plank, a mystery portrait of an unnamed woman that surfaced through a North Carolina fisherman's wife and got pinned to the legend. Burr believed, simply, that she'd drowned. He outlived her by more than twenty years.
He came home in 1812 under his mother's family name, Edwards, to dodge his creditors — which is its own quiet joke, hiding from his debts behind the surname of the most famous Puritan in America.
Rebuilt a law practice. New Yorkers were startled to find they'd actually hire the guy.
And then the children, because the relentless-with-women thing had consequences scattered across decades. He was an unmarried adult for forty straight years, late thirties to seventy-seven, and the result is a fog of probable and acknowledged illegitimate kids.
In old age he openly raised two young men in his household — Aaron Columbus Burr, a goldsmith brought over from France with a cover story about being some count's son, and Charles Burdett — both widely understood to be his. There's a persistent never-proven rumor, recorded in John Quincy Adams's own diary, that Martin Van Buren, the future president, was Burr's son, mostly on the strength of the two being short, vain, dapper, and politically slippery in the same way.
And then, confirmed by DNA only in 2019, there's the part nobody talked about: Burr fathered two children — including the Philadelphia abolitionist and Underground Railroad organizer John Pierre Burr — with Mary Emmons, a Haitian (possibly Bengali-born) governess in his household, while his first wife was dying of cancer.
For two centuries John Pierre Burr was "the natural son" in the genealogies. The descendants got his headstone changed to read, simply, "son."
(There's also the Jacataqua story — that on the Quebec march, at a riverside feast at Fort Western, the teenage Burr took up with a young Abenaki sachem's daughter, that they shot the bears for the barbecue and hauled a cub back to camp on a leash, that she bore him a child. Almost certainly more folklore than fact. But it attached to him because it fit, and what fits a man is its own kind of evidence about him.)
Then the last weird thing, the bookend. At seventy-seven, in 1833, Burr married Eliza Jumel, at that point the wealthiest woman in New York. And her backstory rivals his beat for beat: born in a Providence workhouse to a prostitute mother, possibly convinced she was George Washington's secret daughter, reinvented as an actress, became a French wine merchant's mistress and then — by faking a deathbed illness so her dying wish could be the wedding — his wife, then inherited his entire fortune when he died falling off a hay wagon onto his own pitchfork.
She married Burr to climb socially. He married her, everyone agrees, to get at her money.
He blew through her liquid assets on land speculation almost immediately, because of course he did, the old land-adventurer reflex one more time, in a body that couldn't run it anymore. She separated from him within months and sued for divorce on grounds of adultery — at seventy-seven, the adultery charge stuck, which is its own kind of testament. And the lawyer she hired to grind him through the courts was Alexander Hamilton Jr. The son of the man Burr had shot dead thirty years before.
The divorce was finalized on September 14, 1836. That is the day Aaron Burr died, bedridden from strokes, on Staten Island. The papers dissolving the marriage went through on the morning he stopped breathing. The son of the man he'd killed signed off on the last humiliation of his life on the same day the life ended.
He's buried in Princeton, at the feet of his father the college president and his grandfather the great theologian. The orphan returned to the two graves he'd started out lying next to.
And the punchline of the whole thing, the reason he's worth all these words, is that the Jacksonian moment that arrives right after he dies is in some ways a return to personalist politics — the charismatic individual, the loyalty, the faction — except built on a completely different base, mass democratic mobilization instead of elite deal-craft. And Burr would've been useless at it. He was charming to peers, not to crowds. He could work a room of twelve men of quality and not a square full of voters.
So here's what he actually was, under all the anecdotes: a perfectly competent operator of a game that stopped being played. The skill was real. The intelligence was real. The instincts were real for the world he came up in. He's an evolutionary dead-end, the last clean specimen of a political type the American republic decided in its first thirty years that it didn't want and couldn't afford — and the fact that the republic was right to decide that doesn't make the specimen any less interesting to stand over and look at.
Hamilton got martyred at exactly the right moment, before his own vision had to survive contact with the Jacksonian democracy that would've humiliated it.
Burr lived another thirty-two years and got to watch.
Today's post was exceptionally long because that's the life Burr led. So I decided this was a good opportunity to leave the bibliography in, since a) already long and b) readers might be particularly suspicious at this many things.
FACT STATUS (full standalone record — every load-bearing claim and its status, so this file is self-contained):
Verified via web search this session against: encyclopedia.com / jrank (Levi Weeks trial), Historical Society of the NY Courts (People v. Weeks), Statutes and Stories (Weeks aftermath, parts 1-3), Murder by Gaslight, erenow.org reproduction of Chernow's Alexander Hamilton ch. 37, BackStory radio, Founders Online (Hamilton-Ezra Weeks accounts), Wikipedia (Levi Weeks, Eliza Jumel, John Lansing Jr., Manhattan Company), mental_floss, Bowery Boys, The American Scholar (Burr's European journal), fairweatherlewis and Strange Company blogs (Lansing disappearance). I did NOT read Coleman's full 1800 trial transcript or Burr's published journal line-by-line; transcript/journal specifics are as quoted by the secondary literature.
- All load-bearing claims verified: pedigree (Edwards/Burr Sr./Princeton), orphaning, Princeton 13->16, Quebec march + Montgomery's body, two-week Washington staff stint + Putnam + Long Island brigade, Manhattan Company (Collect Pond/yellow fever, the smuggled surplus-capital clause, pine-log pipes, ~1000 houses, JPMorgan lineage, Hamilton cutting ties), Elma Sands (well ownership, dream-team defense via Ezra/Grange leverage, candle moment credited only to "one of the prisoner's counsel," ~5-min acquittal), 1800 tie (73-73, 36 ballots, Hamilton breaks it for Jefferson, 12th Amendment), filibuster-rules connection (hedged), duel (1804, NY governor's race, Cooper "despicable opinion" letter, Weehawken, indicted both states, finished term), treason (vague aims genuinely unresolved by historians, <100 men, British feeler, Wilkinson = Army's ranking officer AND Spanish Agent 13 who doctored the cipher letter, Blennerhassett, Jefferson wanting him hanged, Marshall's narrow overt-act ruling, "not proved to be guilty" verdict, subpoena/executive-privilege), exile + journal (1838, Davis ed., explicit sexual ledger, language-switching to evade the landlady), Bentham + Theodosia portrait, Theodosia (Wollstonecraft education, Patriot vanished Dec 1812, pulp afterlife), "Edwards" alias for creditors, children (Aaron Columbus Burr, Charles Burdett, Van Buren rumor in JQA's diary, John Pierre Burr + sibling by Mary Emmons confirmed by DNA 2019, headstone changed to "son"), Jacataqua (flagged folklore), Eliza Jumel (workhouse/prostitute-mother origin, Washington-daughter delusion, actress, faked-illness marriage to Stephen Jumel, hay-wagon/pitchfork death, wealthiest woman in NY, married Burr 1833 at 77, blew her money on land speculation, adultery divorce, lawyer Alexander Hamilton Jr., finalized Sept 14 1836 = day Burr died on Staten Island), Princeton burial beside father and grandfather.
STILL SOFT (hedged in-text, flag for your own check if you want to keep):
The $40 coconut figure — sourced only from listicle-tier pages citing the journal; I wrote "something absurd" and explicitly noted I couldn't run the exact number to ground.
Priest-disguise leg to Montreal — well-circulated, not ironclad; hedged in-text.
The street-musician regret anecdote — from a journal-quoting reviewer; matches the journal's tenor but thinly sourced.
Jacataqua — explicitly marked folklore.
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