looking back through, bc i gotta check in ofc, for polls, got reminded of the gag idea - deffo a penis gag? if you like. I think it would be fun for dick to have had some Toys with him when he found tim, consensual, but then him repurposing them. So no explicitly bdsm-y toys yet but some to start 'training'
if you want something improvised, dicks underwear and tape, or his bo staff (extended so he ties it to tims head, and end of the bo staff elsewhere, which keeps his head in a fixed position. or compressed which makes it super thick 'training so you don't bite')
eventual penis gag w feeding tube (that he has to suck on) that sometimes gives food, sometimes aphrodisiac?
i enjoy the idea that he's pretty tight to start off, and the mean bats think it's fun to make it painful so they don't want him to strech - maybe the nice bat spins it as how this is him avoiding damage to tim's body
very into the idea of them all ignoring lube unless it's cum. every time nice bat want to fuck him they gotta cum inside first for lube. motivation for tim. (synthetic endurance/increased cum used somehow?) sets up for tim begging them to let him make them cum
then you can do a scene of nice bat getting blown so they're almost there.... then moving to pussy, just the tip inside, cumming, then fucking properly. other times nice bat offering to go before others so there's more 'lube'
mean bats making it hurt. ohhh they could use something to tighten (drug maybe) so he has to beg them to have something inside so it's less painful next time. using having nothing as punishment, training him into being plugged=being safe/empty=painful. nice bat can swoop in and 'help' by cockwarming maybe.
Sorry for getting too specific. this was meant to be a 'your fic is so cool!' message, will be interested to see what's not a shared interest and what isn't lmao. l hope you have not been too busy, take care of yourself! & don't push yourself too hard for this fic.
gonna preface this by saying im not gonna touch on every single thing here in my response cause i would end up typing forever (i love to ramble and you gave me a lot to work with <3) but most if not all of this will end up in polls (or just included cause i can) as we keep going <333
i had meant to start writing ch 3 already this week and just had too much going on to manage it, but thank goodness i didnt cause i am. so so sososoo enamored by the idea of using tims bo staff oh my god??? like i might just throw my original improvised gag idea out the window to make that work cause its so fun i love it
also no need to apologize <333 i appreciate you sharing your ideas and that you like it so far! i feel like my life is gonna be kind of nonstop the next few months because of work/social plans/personal projects/hobbies/blah blah blah lol, but writing this definitely still fits into the personal project and hobbies categories so i will do my best with continuing to work on it (even if its not going to be the #1 priority, i really dont want it to fall to the wayside either) but i really appreciate the thoughtfulness <33 i will do my best not to push myself too far and rest when i need to