I'm just quickly going to post about Smiles since he's the only character I've posted that is fully developed enough to be bragging about, haha. (I'm joking by the way, about the bragging thing, he really is developed enough to be considered done.)
Name: Smiles, why? Smiles is an affectionate name that was given to him while he was still in the process of being made. Scientists that were still working on him noticed that he would slightly smile when they gave him praises, so in turn they started calling him Smiles.
Age: He was intended to be a young adult around the age of 25.
Personality: Before the incident, smiles was very loyal and tried his best in all the exams that was given to him. After the incident he became cruel, and territorial of the old lab he was made in. Any one who comes in never comes out, and if they do, they have missing limbs. On the up side, he still remained loyal enough to not venture out and eat anyone, this was the number one rule that they gave: 'Do not attack anyone unless they hurt you' and by going into his lab, you are hurting him. (His personality is still evolving because as the story progresses so does he, he won't remain so evil for long, he still will be evil to an extent though.)
Faults: Smiles was intended to be the perfect image of a human, however, following his deformation, he became unable to be human like everyone else. That's why his just a black blob, he's not toxic though. Smiles also isn't able to take on forms for a long time, this puts him at a disadvantage at times when he's trying to catch a prey that has wondered in his lab. He also has his discoloration which doesn't really take as much because most of the people (or should I say teens and young adults) come in during the night. However those smart enough that go during the day can plainly see that his skin, hair, and clothes are discoloring into black. One important thing that actually hurts him (and takes away the faults) is when he starts to form himself into something. His 'body' starts building upward and forming him into what he wants, since he was intended to be a human he still has organs and such, so because of his nerve system that was kept intact during the incident he feels the stinging pain. So normally, unless he really has to, he doesn't change and just lures his prey into an enclosed area.
Back Story (What everyone was waiting for): Smiles, as said before was created to be a model human. By that I mean, he was supposed to be the first ever 'superhero', he was the first in a thousand that didn't melt, explode, or go wild. His tag name was SH1007 (The name actually means something, pretty easy to decode if anyone wants to give it a shot, but you have to keep reading to find the rest of the clues) before it was changed to Smiles. He was first formed to be a teen, but later scientists thought it would be more sensible to advance him into his adult stages. So, after a 3 years helping him enter his adult stage, they got to work on making him an actual superhero. Tests were kept safe and everything for them was made safe seeing as they didn't want him to be triggered. At first, Smiles didn't know what they asked for, but over time he came to learn how to read faces and gestures that they did. Everything was alright and going smoothly until they hit the 7th year mark. It was a bright day, not gloomy at all, there was absolutely no foreshadowing of what was to happen. It was early in the morning and a scientist, one that was greedy and too prideful, had sneaked in to the laboratory while it was still closed hoping to be able to be what Smiles was still aiming for. He had waited years for it, until they finally perfected the pill that was going to make a Smiles an advanced race and brethren of humans. The scientist wasn't alone though, he knew Smiles was in the lab and was most likely wandering around. To make an already long back story short, the scientist was rejected by the pill and was transformed into black liquid, however, he had shoved several pills down Smiles's throat in an attempt to kill him off. When the other scientists came in that morning they saw the disaster that the man had made. They went in search of Smiles and hoped he was alright When they did find him they misunderstood and thought Smiles had murdered the man. Who wouldn't though? Smiles was deforming and looked hideous, anyone would think he was the cause of it. They ran from him when they found him and locked the lab up and never came back. It was all over the news every where. Years passed and those scientists have passed away with the regret that Smiles was never perfected.
Erugh! There, that's Smiles, the poor misunderstood evil blob. To be honest, I feel really bad making him evil, but people get upset when they are misjudged, so that's what I kept in mind while making Smiles. I'm thinking he would be pretty pissed if he was considered a monster and locked up for god knows how many years. Also, I want to explain why reinforcement never transferred him into one of their labs or prisons Well, think of it this way, people around the world knew he was going to be advanced and stronger than any of them. So of course they don't want to take the risk of him escaping or killing them while they transfer him, so they made sure to lock him up securely in the lab that he was made in. Then why are people going in the lab now? This whole event took place years and years back, so people would forget after a while and the walls that kept people out would start crumbling. And you know, most people would take it as a silly story and go in anyways.
Any improvement that you guys really want to add, just tell me because I'm open on ideas no matter what. Plus he still growing because you know, characters grow with the story. I might also post more characters as time passes so ideas of any kind are welcomed.
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