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Group 4: Irene, Tom, Chloe, MitchellHabitat, different scale of living, look at hotel typologies, time/duration, inhabitation, personalisation, modern-day boarding house.- Good presentation clearly thought out. The 1:100 model is an excellent massing model but you need to make a 1:50 model to incorporate aperture details previously discussed. Adajye - Sunken House, and Reference: Graham Hill - 1:20 model of one of the modules using tonal card to imply the material choice and show of the details of the apertures (like Farnsworth house drawings (will show you again on Monday) - Model or 3D render of idea on Monolithic restrictions, zoom in on modular scale for bathroom items, cloak rack. toothbrush, or kitchen cutlery etc. - Final 1:50 model in card with tonal paper.- 6no. Photoshop Renders (entrance, living space, meeting, typology 1 and 2)- 1:50 Tonal plans with materials and shadows (where are the stairs in the modules?)