You got me hooked in this vamp AU for HR I found in the wild via a tag search and i have thoughts so there just gonna go here so I dont have to refresh ao3 every few minutes with comments lol. I just be yapping at writers on here bc I feel weird leaving public essays on ao3 so apologies if this is an insane thing to receive. (If these are replied to publicly to readers brace for spoilers on “lean back just like that”. Hot ass title btw jfc)
Chapter 2 was wild. Fully engrossed me. I’m here to yap about the rest bc I’m binging it in one sitting currently. Your writing style is so fucking captivating. I love how you’re writing vampirism in your universe. It’s very unique and I am a big fan. Love how immediately Yuna was down for Shane having full on murked Ilya for a moment lmao. I have questionsss. Ilya is talking about his head being fucked up. Shane is all fucked up. This connection thing being talked about. I’m interested to see how this what sounds like a soulmate concept is executed. Are they both in utter agony being apart now that Shane’s fed from him.? Is that the “trigger” for the connection(see also; maybe a bond of sorts) I’m having a blast. OH SHIT okay so my thought about the vamp AU was wrong and I love it.!! Partway through 4. It didn’t even occur to me that Shane was isolated from the vampire community too.???? GENUIS. Oh thank the gods Shane is accepting that he’s gay. Very curious where this takes his friendship w rose now w the info she gave him about community. Also curious if this will cause a problem w him and his parents. Oh my I LOOOOVE Shane just using his words and being the one to fully communicate. I adored the entire phone call. The way he didn’t back down when Ilya didn’t reply. I loved that. Very excited to see Ilya show up and the convo they have. Spacing / formatting is perfectly fine on apple chrome browser btw.
Oh good im happy his parents understand the way he was raised wasn’t the best. That acknowledgement feels important for Shane.
LMAO Ilya-canon-fic-no-matter-the-universe-rabidly-jealous-about-Shane-interacting-with-rose-fucking-Landry will never not be hilarious.
"Oh, so you can bite and nibble and mark me up for years, but I cannot like it?" — audibly cackled so hard my spouse asked me what made me laugh.
Ugh yes mutual pain and suffering bc soulmate bond. My fav. *beautiful chefs kiss*.
Oh my gods. Now I need another fic of this specific vampire Shane when him and Ilya first get together and him being able to say stuff like “you know I can hear your heartbeat when you get nervous” bc that was the cutest lil chirp everrrrrrr AWWWW.
Omg I am praying that your beautiful brain does give us a scene of him and Ilya skating at his rink and Shane doesn’t hold back that would be incredible. Especially if it’s from Ilyas pov.
I’m obsessed with this characterization of Shane.???? Their dynamic is so fun here. "If we're not making any calls until tomorrow you are not saying anything else about this or I will fucking die from blue balls, Rozanov, I swear to god." — I about cried from laughter. I love your brain, the dialog you come up with is so good.
“Yours forever” as a summary.? Oh I know you’re about to rock my shiiiit let’s gooooo.
“I slept on it," he smiles faintly, "I want this, I want you." Ilya nods. "I want us," he stresses, "whatever that looks like." — UGHHHH MY HEARTTT.
OH HELL YEAH VAMP SHANE LETS GO MANHANDLE THAT MANNNNN. That was the hottest vamp x human smut I’ve read in a looong time. Love Ilya in a fit of utter bliss basically being like “you’re not allowed to panic am okay you just broke me w best orgasm of my life. Please hold I’ll return to my body in a sec” lmao.
Ugh family discussions between these characters always hits so hard.
Oh my god blood and cum are a food group. That’s hysterical. Obsessed with their dynamic as vamp Shane human Ilya. I so hope you write more or when I check your profile more exists. The way your write them is so fun. I’m sorry Shane running to Boston in 6 hours is insane. Love that for you. Lol mutual biting kink unlocked you get the vibes Ilya hell yeah welcome to the party. Every rose Landry text exchange has been so perfectly written 1000/10. Blood exchange like that is hot as fuck. New kink suspicion confirmed lmao.
OH THANK GOODNESS. so so so happy to hear your gonna continue this. This was such a fun read. Obviously seeing as I’ve written you an essay. I only ever do these if author notes give me the vibe that you’d enjoy this so fingers crossed I interpreted your notes correctly lol.
HELLOOOO YOU DEFINITELY INTERPRETED MY NOTES CORRECTLY this is by far like the most awesome sweetest thing someone has ever wrote to me as an author like oh my god 😭😭😭 i loved reading this so so much and im SO SO GLAD YOU LOVED THE FIC!!! my vamp fic is my pride and joy and im so so happy when other people can see everything i put into it YOURE LITERALLY THE SWEETEST PERSON EVER ILY