Writer improvement center

I have some writing that I want to get out there, and I wish to improve other peoples writing by posting real world stuff that might help. Also help by being an editor. View my works and tell me what you think. I'm Eighteen years old and I only want to write, be it in a creating, reviewing, reading, or marketing capacity. I by no means think I know everything about this field and want only to expand: both my skill and my notoriety.

[bookriot]

Politicians can keep passing laws that hurt women, that hurt people of color, that hurt poor people, and say that they’re necessary to protect our freedoms. But we’re not idiots. We know who they’re protecting. School boards can keep banning books that are about LGBTQ people, that are about people of color, that are about real-life hurt and oppression, and say that it’s because of a few naughty words. But kids aren’t idiots. They know what you’re actually censoring.

from Dear School Boards of America: Have A Backbone. Also, Read Books by Jill G. (via bookriot)

[hanklerfishcomic]

[zeldatheblogger]

IS THIS REALLY A THING?

WHO DREW THIS?

HAVE THEY SEEN THIS?

WHAT????

[hanklerfishcomic]

To answer your questions: 

1. Apparently it is. 

2. I drew it! 

3. Hank has. He reblogged it. 

4. I know. 

[art-of-swords-deactivated201705]

Knives and daggers held point up and point down

Source: YouTube

[snsf-espiringwriter]

Knight o' bronze eat your heart out.

[rufiozuko]

So this epic #Avatar family portrait happened today at #NewConPDX!

[gemstonewriter803]

I’m juat impressed someone did melon lord.

[edwardspoonhands]

This may be the best comment I’ve ever seen on a Vlogbrothers video. A response to my assertion that the alphabet is arbitrarily ordered. 

[yeahwrite]

Wait did I write this? It sounds like something I would write.

[timeladykorra-blog]

Can anyone defeat Kuvira’s highscore?

[stormethecat]

Mythical creatures: The most complicated diagram on fictional animals you’ll ever need!

[joshgammon-deactivated20120101]

[dharmastation]

cuteenoughtoshootyoudown:

148km:

cloysterbell:

the-lone-midget:

 #NEVILLE LONGBOTTOM USES NAGINI’S BLOOD AS SOY SAUCE

 #the core of neville longbottom’s wand is the tears of his enemies and a dragon heartstring he ripped out with his bare hands

#neville longbottom calls himself harry potter on the knight bus to avoid attention

#NEVILLE COULD’VE DONE IT IN FOUR

#neville eats snakes for breakfast

[quenchiestcactusjuice]

#Chuck Norris’ patronous is Neville Longbottom

[its-a-writer-thing]

Writing query letters can be daunting. You have to pitch your book to an agent in 1-2 paragraphs, (not including your hook and bio, for crying out loud), but how do you make it memorable? Let’s take a look.

[krxs10]

I love how a middle aged white man was seen placing the bomb that exploded next to the NAACP Chapter and no one is even talking about it.

All this just happens to come about right after the NAACP called to investigate the Darren Wilson grand jurors and not a single news station wants to report it? please. 

#StayWoke

[snsf-espiringwriter]

Everyone finds it odd that I'm a creative writing major and I hate essays. Essays are not creative writing, I find them way to structured and narrow to be fun to write. They're just a big ball of stress Professors roll into my life.

[medblrreblogs]

[snsf-espiringwriter]

I was reading Dracula the other day and I got to a part where they have to do a blood transfusion and I was freaking out because I thought she was going to die. Guess she's an AB+ because three people gave her blood and she had no problems.

[harrypotterhousequotes]

[gemstonewriter803]

I really like these books

[snsf-espiringwriter]

me too

[snsf-espiringwriter]

So I do some beta work on the internet: mostly fanfics and some original works. The woman I've been working with for over six months finally posted a chapter, and I've been super excited and happy and terrified all at the same time. I keep on going to check the comments and 80% of them are glowing reviews, and then there are FLAMES! Good Marshmallows, I want to punch these people in the face. It's not even constructive flames, that I could handle, but no all of them are like 'I don't like this' 'why would someone write something like this?' 'I'm not smart enough to read the summary to know if I'll like this or not so I'm just going to flame!!!!!' (that last one wasn't real, but it might as well be). I want to respond to these people, but I don't think it's my place. Any thoughts?

[the-wordhammer]

As a general rule, only very young children don’t lie. And that’s because they don’t think about it.

From there on out, it’s pretty much a general thing. You lie. It’s not a problem. It’s a very rare thing that someone doesn’t lie.

Not all lies are bad things, and there...

[gemstonewriter803]

Really, really, really, looking forward to Big Hero six!!!!! I want it to be out so bad! I’m making a prediction on the theme before it comes out, and I have a bet on this so I need this official.

The Teenage boy main character wants to change the world, like his brother was trying to do before...

[gemstonewriter803]

I don’t feel comfortable making a full review on this movie because I’ve only seen it once and I’m a) too moral to download it illegally and b)too poor to go see every movie more than once in a theater. I’m still going to voice my thoughts on it. Spoilers, if you care.

The plot I personally...