SweePix

| 18+ | she/her | solo dev | Currently working on Mind the Gap!! https://sweepix.itch.io/

[sweepix]

"Mind the Gap" chapter 3 is out on Itch.io!!!

Mind the Gap by SweePix

A psychological thriller visual novel set on a train that never stops.

(Small trailer!)

You wake up in a train compartment you don’t remember boarding. The air feels too heavy, the silence too deliberate. Outside your door you hear voices, footsteps, strangers who look just as lost as you. "Mind the Gap" is a psychological thriller visual novel about trust, fear, and the way people change when they’re trapped together.

Go play it right now on PC or Android for free!♡

[yuvmeve]

Happy chapter three of Mind The Gap release day!

I was a little too excited for the games chapter to release and wanted to do a little something for when the next chapter released hehe.

Check out Mind The Gap chapter three, SweePix put lots of work into it! This chapter is so far my favorite, and of course I got more Vir content which is always a win for me. Thanks SweePix!

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INSNAAANNEE!!!🔥🔥🎀 Wow, just wow. This is so, so peak — I'm speechless, truly.... even made me tear up a bit. Thank you 🥹

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Oi oi sweepy, Naomi like Kuromi🐻

I made a slight mistake with the colors, but it's okay? eheh..

Nooo, it's freaking gorgeous!!! I like everything— the colors, the art style itself!..🤩 So pretty^^

[lun4-st4rr]

Naomi asks for a hug :3

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Awwwhhh noooo, she's so precious and silly here!😭

Actually, your art style is pretty much how I imagine Naomi's art style would be!

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I love Verity so much 😭😭 I want to protect her from all the evil in the world.

Soooo cute!!! It's nice to see Verity picking up more fans after Chapter 3💛

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Just played the new chapter and I'm lost for words- I can’t describe how amazing and shocking it was- I mean I did expect someone to die! BUT I didn’t expect heads to be blowing off completely! The build up, tension, the heavy emotions everywhere, the food, the expressions! And the voice acting!! It was very thrilling!!! Perfection!!🔥

I was surprised that there was actually more voice acting in the second and third part- I don’t remember the second chapter having voice acting. But I may be a bit sssllloooowwww…

I really wanted to give poor Naomi a hug seeing her cry like that- everyone needs a big hug. Hopefully MC gets to have that choice in the next chapter? One of the BEST games I ever played- EVER! I’m awed. 🫪 I could say more but I really don’t know how! you really blew my head away creator- no pun attended. Give yourself a pat on the back for me dear creator! GO GET SOME ICE CREAM, NOW!! You earned it! Sending fat kisses your way!!🙂‍↕️

OMMGGH 🫠 Okay reading this with a stupid grin, thank you. "heads blowing off" reaction is exactly the one I was hoping for from chapter 3. That scene was the one I kept second-guessing, so knowing it landed is a huge relief..

Though can't promise anything about hugs without spoiling things, but your concern for Naomi has been officially logged.♡ She's getting a lot of love in the comments and, honestly, my girl deserves it.

Thank you for taking the time to write aaaall this out, it really means a lot! Going to get the ice cream now as instructed— orders are orders after all.🫡🫶 Fat kisses received and returned!^^

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i just finished chapter 3 , and it was incredible Miss💜💜, also could we please beat Deuce the douche to death with a harmer, pretty please?👉👈

LOOOL HELP, I’m noticing a pattern… it’s either you love Deuce or hate them with your guts in the MtG fandom

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I had to scroll down a bit on your profile to realize that there will be romance!! Oh my god, how sweet

Hey Deuce is so cute! Okay, before he jumps on us, he and Vir are definitely my favorites, But Vir is the cutest, so... tiny!

Well, I love you (⁠ㆁ⁠ω⁠ㆁ⁠) Lots of kisses for Vir

Yeah, you get it! Vir is just an innocent little cutie pie :33

Love you back! Vir happily accepts all the kisses hehe

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literally chapter 3

LMAAOOO—🤧🤧 sorry for the doomed yuri :( But I promise you’ll get some Saphira x Felicia content in the future. Mark my words.

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just finished chapter 3. amazing. gorgeous. stunning. the twist was wonderful and although I had my suspicions about a lot of things, especially about Verity, I kept second-guessing myself which is just to show how wonderful your writing is :))) holy peak!!

HOWEVER do not give us the opportunity to be alone with Vir in chapter 4; the stranger WILL have to turn off those cameras in the room for once because I'll show him some REAL entertainment. I don't trust Vir but HOT DAMN !!!

I’m really happy you liked the chapter!

And yeah… now I’m not even sure whether Vir should be looking forward to it or worrying about his ASS 😰😰

[sweepix]

DIOSSS AMÉ EL CAPÍTULO 3 DE VERDAD AMO TU NOVELA ESTUVE ESPERANDO Y DE VERDAD VALIÓ LA PENA ദ്ദി(˵•̀ ᴗ -˵).

Gracias por existir y darnos tremenda obra ˃͈◡˂͈

¡¡Muchas gracias!! 🥹 Me alegra muchísimo que te haya gustado el capítulo!! Prometo lo mejor para los siguientes 😈

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I JUST finished Chapter 3 and oh my god???

I already loved Mind The Gap, but this chapter had me completely hooked from start to finish. The visuals are gorgeous as always, but the storytelling and atmosphere were on another level. I was genuinely shocked by how captivating it was!!!! AHH

There were so many moments where I just sat there staring at my screen because I needed a second to process what had happened. You somehow made me even MORE invested in the characters (specifically Vir hehe) than I already was

Thank you for creating something so engaging. I’m already desperate for the next chapter 😭💗 PLEASE DON’T HURT POOKIE NAOMI 🙏

Thank you so much 😭💙💙 I’m really happy you’re enjoying it this much!!

....I promise I’ll take good care of Naomi… (probably)...😁

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Holaas solo quería decir que pronto le haré un fanart a Verity o Naomi

¡Tengo muchas ganas de verlo!🤩

[sweepix]

Portuguese (BR) translation is here! + Interface toggle button

Finally, my struggles are over, and I've done what you've been asking for!

First of all, the Portuguese translation is now available. Please note that it might not be perfect and there could be some errors... If you notice anything, I’d be very grateful if you could let me know!

Also, like I said earlier, added a "hide interface" button in the bottom right corner. Just click it to clear the screen and you'll be able to take a clean screenshot!

Phew! Now I’m off to get some rest. I really hope there are no bugs!

♡♡♡

Mind the Gap by SweePix

A psychological thriller visual novel set on a train that never stops.

[sweepix]

I finished chapter 3 and I'll just say, I don't regret my decisions at all. I really liked the conclusion Stefan and MC reached. Second, I have this urge to stroke Vir's hair! Put it in two ponytails! Or an updo!! AHHHH!! Third, I loved the illustrations! I wasn't expecting to see so many! It was a huge surprise! Even the gory ones were amazing! Have you thought about adding a gallery in a future performance? I think it would be great to have one in the menu.

Well... the problem is FINALLY solved! With today's update of the Portuguese translation (and while I'm at it, I'll also fix a few Spanish translation issues), this wonderful little button will be added!

Take a look!^^

Click "Hide" button and the menu will disappear, so there'll be no need for a gallery anymore! Just press it whenever you want and take screenshots, hehe. Let me know what you think!😊

(And by the way, thank you so much for your kind words really. It means a lot to me. I'm always trying to improve the quality of the images with each new update!)

[minicatknife]

-Americans

-blondes

-abducted

- slight amnesia (the gas in ch 2, start of phm)

-tall

- hard to draw (especially Stefan)

Detail: in the early chapters, Arms of Harrasment half shave Grace hence the weird beard

I spend a couple of hours trying to remember who Stefan reminds me of, Ryland Grace was the answer

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Hmmm...🤔🤔

[minicatknife]

Leonel reminds me of Sans so much XD. especially with his in game image

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TWINS!🤯