....I just feel like people don't know how to WRITE with adaptations.
It's clunky with the dialogue and the setup. This isn't...fun right now. And it's the war-clouds gathering, and the Airbenders are worried, but I feel like this is...not showing bonding.
Have a different, more impactful start. Show Aang PLAYING with other Airbenders. If you're having the Nomads mixing, let them meet him, see how good he is. Then have him find out he's the Avatar...also, I'm sorry, James Hong's delivery for this scene was....
Give us the CLASH of EMOTIONS, not just Exposition.
Make me FEEL.














