So I went back and redid a couple of Vil’s lines in Chapter 2: The Entrance Ceremony. It’s more fitting to his character now, I think, unlike before. Also fixed the typo for Leona’s name. XD
Updated version
“You’re clinging pretty tight. Are your wounds not bothering you?”
What? Oh frick! I hurriedly released him, taking several steps back and holding my hands close to my chest. “S-Sorry! I-I mean, yeah, but-” Frick, frackity, frick frack, crud! What do I say? What do I do? The headmaster is gone and now everyone was staring again. How should I even answer his question? “I-It’ll be fine, right? I’m… mostly… just dizzy, so…”
I flashed a weak smile.
“I’m just kinda ignoring it. So, uh… yeah. Um.” I glanced around nervously. Some of the important looking people from before were walking over. “Th-This is an… all boys school?”
“Yeah. Girls aren’t supposed to be here.” Leona folded his arms across his chest. It really bothered me seeing his sleeves torn up like that. A smooth voice spoke from behind me and I jumped, whirling around to see the lilac-eyed blond man from before.
“Truly an interesting turn of events.” Oh gods, I’m surrounded. All the important people had formed a circle around me and the mirror, leaving me trapped. One step after another I moved back to my previous position, stumbling to hide next to Leona as I grew overwhelmed. I did not like social gatherings; crowds freaked me out and being cornered only made my anxiety worse. “Your appearance could use quite a bit of work, however! Your hair is so messy; it's long overdue for a trim. And your skin- do you even take care of it?”
“Uh, what? I-I mean, I try? Kind of. You know, to... get rid of acne and stuff."
“Hmph. Such a lazy potato you are. You should be putting more effort into your appearance, or at the very least take better care of your health. To think the carriage could make such a mistake as great as this…”