#absolutelynotflorence

[mei-rin-blossoms]

absolutelynotflorencepowiedział(a): oh, you should talk to thomas-et-Bartholomew ooc, she’s a total nut for PotO

{Thank you :D}

thomas-et-bartholomewpowiedział(a): Our favorite films are pretty much identical :’)

{:D I don't watch movies very often, and when I do, it's practically always one of those xD}

[scarletfoxdorm]

 absolutelynotflorence answered: make them into perfect squares in a simple programme like ms paint or whatever then picresize.com

OutOfRoses: that would be fine an all, but I do not have anything like MS paint ;-; that is what I am wanting, a photo editing program

[mei-rin-blossoms]

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Send me § and my muse will react to yours pushing them agaisn't a wall and kissing them.

It all was happening too quickly. In one moment she was calmly walking across the corridor, in the next she felt the firm surface of the wall behind her back and a warm pressure of someone's lips against hers. She couldn't even see who it was. Trying to push the other away, she turned her face to the side, breaking the kiss. "Please, stop that!" she panted. "What was that supposed to mean?!"

[inperator-aviditas]

absolutelynotflorence said: Florian looked silently thoughtful for a minute or two before firmly stating, “You can’t touch me for the entire two days. In any way." 

"...Fine. That's completely fine. It's not like I want to touch you in the first place." Nate scoffed, suddenly becoming incredibly fascinated with the details of his shirt cuff, avoiding eye contact with the younger boy at all times. 

[inperator-aviditas]

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Walking through the Delaroche conservatory, Nate politely nodded over to Florian's mother, despite her usual arrogant behavior around his family, she usually treated him decently... More decently than she used to treat his brother anyway. It probably had something to do with the fact that he'd once brought Florian home after Sam dragged him over to the docks... A place that wasn't entirely safe for the younger boy... Especially considering how delicate Florian was. Where was Florian anyway? He'd missed his little friend...

The sudden tug on the crook of his elbow broke his train of thought, of course, he had to accompany Christine currently. She was his fiancée after all... A fact neither were overly fussed about... There was little romantic interest held between them both- unlike his little brother and her younger sister... But, they both mutually agreed that their parents could have chosen someone far worse and consequently, both were willing to tolerate the idea of marriage between them...

A smirk crept across his lips as he spied Florian trying to shoo away his aunt's dreaded bichon frise on the lower lawn, lowering Christine into the seat beside her mother, he gave a short bow and slipped out the door to the garden. As he drew closer, he bobbed down and held out his palm to the awful creature, cooing in a sickly tone "Precious Diamond the Third~ Come here~"

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Review: absolutelynotflorence

Sorry that this review is coming to you so late! 

-Admin G

Moving onto the bio; as I said, since I am not certain whether your OC is meant for the Victorian era or Modern era, it would be a good idea to include the year in which he was born. The personality, I will definitely emphasise, needs some work. Two words can barely even begin to scratch the surface of a character's personality. Extending on this would be excellent, because simply saying he is "extroverted" and "high-class" gives me absolutely nothing. There are many people who are extroverted and high-class, but that doesn't mean they're all the same when you get right down to it. Dig into your character and find out who he really is. Ask yourself why he acts the way he does and try to find the reasons behind his behaviour. I would suggest, rather than putting his flaws in separate section, combine them with the personality. A good place to start is to give your character three positive traits and three negative traits and build on them from that.

As with the history, it needs some length. Where was he born? Did he have a normal childhood or did he experience any sort of family crisis? At the moment, his life seems very picturesque-perfect. Perhaps a little too perfect, considering his mother contracted a demon. Why did his mother contract a demon? Was it for revenge on her daughter being murdered? And why keep her murder a secret from Florian? It seems a little  odd that she would tell him his sister simply lives in France, and Florian accepts that. Does he try to contact his sister to no avail? Is he suspicious at all of her real fate? You put in his history that "He acts like he’s king of the world, speaking and acting on whim, not caring how it will affect others." What sort of effects does this have on him and his social relationships? Because it's very likely he would not get away with this sort of behaviour with anyone without some sort of repercussions, regardless of social status. Is he not liked by many because of his attitude? Does he have few friends?

Touching upon his relationship with his parents, friends, and Rose would be a really good idea, to let people know what's going on. Because right now, as I read it, I have very very little to go on in understanding your character. 

I think you have a decent start here, but at the moment it's really just a skeleton rather than a full character. I'd love to see you delve deeper into his personality and history and work out why he is the way he is. 

Good luck and I hope this was helpful!

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