what are the horns i don’t understand
[That’s some… interesting art. And fine whimsy i’ll take them.]
Pesterchum name: glitchyObscura
Typing Issue: Sh-she types just as sh-she speaks…a st-stammering of some words, usually S words… [Pretty simple quirk.]
Font Color: Mad Green [Mad green? What does that even mean? A really bright neon green? A very dark green?]
A combination of symbols which both sort of have similar meanings on earth, although it’s unknown how they got to earth. The Believe symbol is for unity despite religious belief and the Moon Child symbol is for Unity, Love, and Integrity. It seems very strange she was given this symbol… [After a quick google search apparently being a moon child has something to do with being a cancer: “The Sun is in this fourth sign of the zodiac from 22 June until 22 July each year. The symbol for Cancer is the Crab, with its protective shell. People with this Sun sign are sometimes also called “Moon Children,” because the Moon is the ruler of the sign. In Cancer the Sun is receptive and moody.” First result found here.]
Symbol: A combination of the Believe symbol and the Moon Child symbol. Her clothes actually look like a straight jacket [Wait, why?] and her symbol is on her necklace…It is possible she was locked up at one point but was able to get away. It’s also possible she wears it because it’s comfortable and slightly ironic. She wears a mask that covers her mouth when she leaves her hive for the simple fact that many of the chemicals as deep as she lives are toxic. [Then why live there? The ocean is probably huge, so just find another place to put your hive.]
Mythological Entity Named For: Lyssa and the Maniae
Blood Color: Plum (rare purple and probably another reason she wasn’t culled) [Just… make her a violet blood. Come on.]
God Tier: A Mage of some kind, which seems to be a combination of Doom and Mind. This is probably due to her mental issues and her isolation [Oh boy i think we’re starting to get into the edge.]
She was born with multiple personalities [Yep. Seriously, what is added to your character with this?] and she does a very good job of hiding it. I suppose living at the bottom of the sea helps, though. Also she was chosen before she started showing signs of anything. Not only was she born with multiple personalities, but she was also born blind. [Well that must suck.] Being a sea dweller, she learned echo location and created ear piercings which strengthened her electroreception abilities. [Electro-what? This is an interesting idea though, having her use echolocation.] This wasn’t all completely necessary, though it is in public. You see, her main personality is completely blind, but her eyes do work and they are usable…and not all of her personalities are blind. [How… how does having a personality shift make her eyes work again? I don’t think that’s how it works? Like, at all?] The only problem is, like most born with multiple personalities, she has no control over which comes out. The only thing she can control is that she stay blind in public. No one can know her secret, for it would get her culled. She freely swaps personalities with those she is fully comfortable with, which is actually only her her lusus. [The multiple personality thing doesn’t really seem to add that much to her character aside from being a way to have her be blind only some of the time. Honestly i’d just drop this all together.]
She also made the 3 dots both under her eyes and on her forehead so they glow, this is a major advantage while hunting. [Weird, but i’m actually ok with that.] She’s a very good singer as well, but almost no one gets to hear it. She only sings when she’s truly happy, and those moments are rare… She often wonders why she was given her symbol, as it doesn’t suit her at all…she forgets that, in a way, it does…she used to wish for unity among the trolls so she can be accepted and she used to wish only for love…She does still have her integrity at least… [Even if the trolls had unity you’d still get culled for being a mutant dummy.]
-extra info not needed- [Then why list it? So i have more stuff to review? Rude.]
Relations:
Obba Suro: Her lusus, whom died before she was fully mature. [Theory: the reason so many fantrolls don’t have lususes is because orphaner dualscar killed their lususes.] He was a strange type of lusus, as he was only able to move once. That one time was to choose her, and then they swam off. He chose a safe spot in the deepest part of the sea [Wait, i thought that spot was toxic? You said earlier she has to wear a mask when leaving her hive. How is that safe exactly? I guess safe from attackers, but not safe for your charge lusus.], and sat. After that he pretty much became a massive half plant, half animal. His limbs fuzed [*fused] to the ground and started growing, also forming a sort of anemone. He could still control each arm of the thing he became, and he was at the center. He was, in a way, both her lusus and her hive. [Ok, this is actually a really neat concept.]
Snanie Maniae: Dancestor, Oddly she was only blind and bipolar [This name cracks me up.]
The Disturbed: kept locked up, the only reason she was kept alive was for Professor[New phone who dis?] to use, for it seemed no matter what he did to her she never died. It was thought that, rather then her dying, each personality would die in her place. Eventually she got free, and she proceeded to go on a psychopathic killing spree which was completely uncontrollable[*Sigh*]. She then went into isolation, hiding in the very deepest part of the ocean until she was captured again, this time by Mindfang [*Deeper sigh*]. Mindfang made the mistake of trying to get into her head…she went into shock from the overwhelming insanity. She was able to escape insanity, but the rest of her crew wasn’t so lucky…while she was chained up to the wall slowly everyone on the boat started to flip, and Mindfang was no longer able to control them. Within a week her entire crew had been killed or killed themselves. [So was this before the neophyte went after mindfang?] This led Mindfang to take her to GHB, who insisted her use as a weapon. Professor made a helmet which would allow almost complete control of her physically while not inturupting her mental state. It wasn’t long before she was both killing and causing insanity wherever she was sent. [*Even deeper sigh*] Eventually the helmet grew to be a part of her head, and grew to affect her less and less. It caused them to have to use more and more power to control her until it killed her.
Others: generally is a loner and tries to avoid others. This is due to her mental instability. She refused to be close to anyone because she is afraid they will hurt her or she will hurt them.
Strife Portfolio: SawKind, SwordKind (her weapon switches between a chainsaw that looks like a saw fish and a sword that looks like a sword fish) [That’s kind of cool.]
Fetch Modus Setting: Insanidae -Similar to Miracle Modus except even less organized and less predictable- [Really?]
Age: 6 Alternian Solar Sweeps (14 years) [Wait, i though 6 sweeps = 13 years?]
Planet: A dwarf planet somewhere between LoRaF and LoCaS [I can’t seem to figure out what loraf is, but is locas land of caves and silence, which is equius’s land? Are you implying she played sgurb with the canon trolls? Really?]
Name Breakdown (Troll) : Lyssa was the spirit of rage and frenzy, she was closely related to the Maniae, whom were spirits of madness and insanity.
Name Breakdown (Pesterchum) : Her constant mental deterioration has caused her to randomly twitch and spaze, causing the “glitch” in her systems. Obscura means dark or black. Scura being the root and meaning vision or sight. This half of her name has 2 meanings, one of them being her generally dark outlook and the other being her blindness.
Personality Qualities: Despite her multiple personalities it wasn’t them which caused her true insanity…it was her isolation. It was everyone telling her that she wasn’t good enough, that she was slow despite her obvious abilities with technology, that she wasn’t normal. It was them telling her she was glitched, she was wrong, she would never be like them, she would never be alive if her lusus hadn’t taken pity on her. The only reason he’s still there is pity, they said. She holds him back, she’s the reason he can’t move. She’ll always have a disability and anyone seen with her is ONLY taking pity on her. She’ll never have any quadrents filled because no one could possibly deal with her. It wasnn’t….it wasn’t her voices that made her insane, it was those surrounding her…always telling her she will never be good enough…they drove her away, deeper into the ocean and deeper into insanity…deeper into a darkness from which she couldn’t recover… [*Deepest sigh of all*]
Rules broken: Mutant blood, the relations with the canon trolls that doesn’t even make much sense, just… no.
Fantroll rating: An abandoned sanatorium out of 10