trying to change my wip to suit my current values and preferences, which involves quite a few things:
reorganizing the character hierarchy such that the characters I actually care about the most (nathan, raven) become the most important characters in the wip, rather than important side characters
fixing the worldbuilding so that it's less "Philippines but with magic" and more distinctly itself as a setting
changing (most) character surnames to be more obviously filipino-flavored because I don't want people to think any of my characters are white even if they have blue eyes or whatever
there's probably more that I'm missing but those are the main ones on my agenda












