#animated--dimensions

[angelsandemons]

Bees!

Send me “Bees!” for a brutally honest critique of your writing (the good, the bad, and the ugly). 

I really like your writing, especially your dialouge for Star. It feels really organic and I can hear her voice in it when I read. I feel like your narration gets a bit too ramble-y at times though. Now this could be a stylistic choice, since it’s functionally internal dialouge for Star, but otherwise I think you might be able to streamline it a bit to make it more concise, and less distracting. 

[loyalizard-blog]

@animated--dimensions [Star]

Rasticore stared at his phone blinking green in the dark. Leaning forward he snatched it off the dashboard to check the message he’d missed.

Princess Star wanted company... a while ago. She’d probably gone back to sleep by now, but he’d still text her back since he was awake anyway.

[txt: Princess Butterfly] Hey, you still awake and need me to come over?

[viridian-angel]

animated--dimensions replied to your video: UGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

not to mention it’s only $30

I KNOW... AND IT COMES WITH ALL THE DLC AND FUTURE DLC/UPDATES FOR FREE...

[angelsandemons]

Look into my eyes [star]

Send ‘Look into my eyes’ and my muse will bold what they see

| Hope | Love | Passion | Hate | Resentment | Envy | Indifference | Confidence | Insecurity | Greed| Desire | Optimism | Spite | Hostility | Kindness | Warmth | Intelligence | Experience | Trauma |Aggression | Gentleness |  Arrogance | Pride | Lust | Cruelty | You’re soft | You’re trusting | You seem honest | You’re humble | You’re cold | You’re closed off | You’re reserved and guarded |You’re unfeeling | You’re remorseless | You’re heartless | You’re inhuman | You’re frightening |You’re frightened | You’re devious | You’re unpredictable | You’re struggling | You’re lost | You’re broken | You’re disheartened | You seem headstrong | You seem difficult | You’re stubborn | I see hope | I see purpose | I see absolute conviction | I see compassion | I see a shining light | I see shattered remains | I see something familiar | I see a friend | I see an enemy | I see a lover | I see thirst for blood | I see malicious intent | I see pity | You’re pitiful | I see darkness | You’re unwavering | You’re pure | You’re noble |

[loyalizard-blog]

🌟 [a star from star]

Rasticore would definitely take blows for Star and defend her pretty ferociously if she were not in the condition to defend herself.

He occasionally hordes nifty things he finds in dimensions he visits to show Star when they hang.

He also likes to bring her samples of weird food he finds too.

[viridian-angel]

animated--dimensions replied to your post: au where sara looks you dead in the eyes and fucks...

isn’t that just canon for most people? why call it an AU?

I can’t believe Sara has fucked everyone’s mom

[loyalizard-blog]

Look into my eyes [star]

| Hope | Love | Passion | Hate | Resentment | Envy | Indifference | Confidence | Insecurity |Greed | Desire | Optimism | Spite | Hostility | Kindness | Warmth | Intelligence | Experience |Trauma | Aggression | Gentleness |  Arrogance | Pride | Lust | Cruelty | You’re soft | You’re trusting | You seem honest | You’re humble | You’re cold | You’re closed off | You’re reserved and guarded | You’re unfeeling | You’re remorseless | You’re heartless | You’re inhuman |You’re frightening | You’re frightened | You’re devious | You’re unpredictable | You’re struggling | You’re lost | You’re broken | You’re disheartened | You seem headstrong | You seem difficult | You’re stubborn | I see hope | I see purpose | I see absolute conviction | I see compassion | I see a shining light | I see shattered remains | I see something familiar | I see a friend | I see an enemy | I see a lover | I see thirst for blood | I see malicious intent | I see pity| You’re pitiful | I see darkness | You’re unwavering | You’re pure | You’re noble |

[usedvessel-blog]

💚

honestly star and ludo as friends is like my favorite thing ever and has been for a while, i mean...just...ghahg especially in like a “recovery” aspect