Helpp im just now realising that you and @ baskinginvellichor = friends??? Why did this never cross my mind like this makes so much senseee 😭😭 i love being a coergene I'm such a big fan of both of you!!
my girl here @baskinginvellichor????? tahts my best friend of nearly 4 years 🥹🥹 i love her down
also giggling hssjjddj wdym it makes sense, our aura is js connected 💯💯 also mwah you’re so cute
I just finished reading the new fic, and it was amazing !!! I dont know why, but i got hung up the most on Jiaoqiu. Like, he sounds so mellow and like he's in genuine love, but I dont know if it's just the effects the incubi has on him. (When he says the smell of burnt caramel got stronger, it's because of the transformation the protag had, right?)
So funny to see the cryptologist and the kafka mention. I love how you portray Kafka in your fics. she's always stirring up jealousy in the love interests.
I truly do wonder if Sunday will be forgiven for laying with a demon. I mean, if he can say he was doing 'salvation' he could get away with it. In the game, his npc model has what appears to be dark indigo wings, which implies he is not as pure as he appears to be, so I imagined his wings that colour. Im guessing his mission was subduing the protag, which he literally did haha.
And moze was such a sweetheart!! When he said he wouldn't care about being sent to hell as long as his fate is forever intertwined with yours, it is so cute. Im thinking he was also lying to himself about how he was following the protag due to his suspicions but was actually just obsessed. Him staying up late to see the protag come back home, was it similar to the cryptologist au? Where he was jealous they wouldnt approach him, or was it part of his stalking?. Also, when he felt fear but it was overridden by lust that made him get closer without thinking it could end his life ❤️.
Also cant imagine how their life will be after this encounter (im glad for Mr. Hopkins that they were able to film a good mockumentary and didn't just submit that !!). Im a Moze fan, so him being the roommate makes me think his life just got better (and that his photo taking hobby just got started).
I loved it, amazing halloween fic.
-swan anon 🦢
first let me just say DAMN I appreciate your dedication to delivering thorough analyses and eating them up every darn time
second I am locked in with a very tall cup of coffee I am ready
no same I was secretly rooting for jiaoqiu too; like originally he wasn't going to be part of it because then I'd have to plan more with an established character. reader was just gonna be someone who sleeps around 😭he was supposed to have one scene too but ended up with four.. honestly I was also going to write him as like a yokai in my initial plans so he's somewhat immune to whatever reader has got going on (which honestly isn't much it's just enhanced allure or whatever)?? I thought it'd be pretty funny to have a character who officially knows about reader and just like... helps them out like an emergency snack or whatever. but yeah he's definitely infatuated - jiaoqiu for LIFEEE
(and yes you are correct the stronger scent did indeed indicate the successful transformation)
you know, I lowkey forgot about the cryptology-moze series and the reference was just my subconscious picking it out☠️also I don't know if I officially stated reader's major (I don't really know myself) but it's hilarious to me to picture some demon just figuring out maths and working in it
did not register the kafka mention until I got to the end whoops
she wasn't even meant to be in this 😭like it was just supposed to be some faceless avatar of lust but then i was like hmm... we've got someone who literally puppets others as part of her mechanics like ??
kafka>>
she's so fun to use as a plot device cuz she just catalyses everything
Sunday will NOT be forgiven 🗣️🗣️that particular line I wrote where angels can lie to themselves is alluding to him convincing himself he isn't doing anything wrong; I was actually going to originally expand on him 'falling' from Harmony or whatever because of his allegiance to the Order - so he was doomed either way to be corrupted. his mission did include subduing the protag but was more a general order to keep order within the human realm which did include finding out demons - so not necessarily reader but he did sus them out pretty much from the start. however he was not supposed to sleep with a demon at all 😭like that line about keeping reader by him to prevent him from getting with other humans is just his bs justification to convince himself that he's still on the right path - but alas, his tenets have been fundamentally crumbling anyway due to his subversion to the harmony. I thought it was funny as fuck having a doomed angel for halloween
there's just something about fallen angel sunday, fits in with his lore too
but yeah themes of denial are heavy in this man, like he's convinced himself that he's on the right path but he's really not he's just entranced by the protag 😭
hmm
yup i had so much fun writing moze he's so cute. he is the prime human Sunday should be worried about but instead he's just competing with him
oh yes 100% lying I love writing unreliable narrators
YES similar to the cryptologist au it was his way of gaining information on you but also sorta looking out for the protag (and jealousy); also lowkey the bit about fear getting overridden was so funny to write about because he's just walked in on a literal angel and demon and just keeps marching forward like 😭😭
that triangle formation remains 100%
like mr hopkins just thinks "oh wow my students are completely dedicated to warding off demon energy thus are in perfect formation for doing so" or whatever ☠️
but reader now essentially has three emergency snacks and sunday's path to salvation is not looking very good tbh
also yeah that mockumentary saved their asses because I physically could not write them only having one film on that camera
that camera will have to get SCOURED before they return it, but Moze's already got it safely transferred to his heavily fortified laptop and Sunday's just keeping the really old one 😭
there's just something about the moze roommate brainrot... he's definitely gloating over it and sunday's just feeling his blood pressure rise for the first time since gaining a corporeal body (and moze's DEFINITELY getting several high-quality cameras because wdym he's just been rewatching the tapes instead of sleeping..)
anyways I got home with around five hours left before midnight and I started finishing off the final scenes at like 10 I was so stressed bro trying to make it and upload it halloween ended
AND THANK YOU FOR YOUR LONG ANALYSIS SWAN ANON IT WAS VERILY APPRECIATED
what if harry is looking up facts to say on stage one late night in your hotel room on his phone and you crawl up the bed to kissing his cock through his boxers and harry would be like, "love, i'm trying to look up facts here." and you'd ignore him, reaching a hand inside his boxers, taking his cock out and start giving him a blowjob.
harry would be stubborn and act like he isn't enjoying it by trying to make a serious face as he searches for facts. then he'd get tired of trying and and throw his phone down, flip you over, and start face fucking you saying, "is this what you wanted. my cock down your tight throat. can't fucking listen to me when i say i was busy, huh?"
though harry was thrusting his dick in and out your throat aggressively, you know its just bedroom play. one, when harry is in dom mode, he'll always lightly tap some part of your skin three times so no matter if you're blindfolded or in a weird position, you'll know he's fully aware of what he's doing and to let you know that your real harry is inside this dominate one at the moment.
you'll gag and choke but you love every second of it. then harry will cum in your mouth and make you tea afterwards with the mini kitchen in the hotel room because your throat is sore and he's aware of that. and he may even give you a treat 👅😸after you drink the tea because you took his cock so well.
The tap thing is so nice!! I love that he makes sure that you know that he still cares 😔
And the tea? Omg 😔 he would give you the tea them feed you some fresh fruits, when you were done he would ask you to lay down and he would fill your neck with kisses, telling how much of a good girl you were for him.
do you have any HC about iggy and colin, like their relationships with mickey/mandy and stuff? or they’re full sibs, because i always assumed they had one mom and m/m had another 💙💜
I sure do!
- Colin is the oldest. Iggy is the second eldest. I assume like you do that they have one mom and Mickey and Mandy have another mom (Laura).
- Iggy is short for Igor. Because I feel like all of T*try’s baby momma are like Svetlana in the “illegal Eastern European immigrant SW” category.
- But Colin isn’t short for anything and is (like Amanda) just a very American name.
- Iggy was cool with Mickey being gay. As referenced in the show. He and Ian (when he was manic and couldn’t sleep) used to watch infomercials and smoke pot together. Iggy likes him okay.
- Colin had a little bit of a harder time. But after seeing Mickey go THROUGH it he figures out pretty quickly Mickey can’t just pick who he loves.
- Iggy and Colin didn’t come to the wedding because they where trying to divert Terry’s attention (unsuccessfully because he got to Jamie first). They still got them wedding gifts though! Iggy got a duffel bag full of pot and Colin got them some stacks of money that Ian REFUSED to let Mickey put into their shared checking account (it’s hidden in the lining of their couch).
- Mandy knew deep down that Colin, Iggy and Mickey would probably kill Terry if they knew he was sexually abusing her. She didn’t want them to go to jail (and her to be tossed in the system) if she told. So she didn’t.
- Mandy was never in the system unlike the other three. They always got her over to Aunt Rande’s and told them they didn’t know where she was when DCSF asked.
- Colin’s good with computers and mechanical stuff. Iggy’s good with kids and animals!
- If the Milkoviches had a group chat like the Gallagher’s? Iggy would be the Meme King. Mandy would respond with emojis. Colin with either a Y, an N, or a ?. Mickey leaves everyone on read.