Below the cut because reasons (plus it’s long), This is the exact chapter of the exact story they reviewed. Note: PUBLISHED 2012. I was just out of high school at the time. It’s a rewrite of something I wrote freshman year. Jus some background for you. ;3c
How old are you, 12? This *shit* is nothing but slang. And there is nothing wrong with being bisexual; one of my best friends is bi and is very successful. You say that being different is great yet you make people who have a different orientation than you sound like they are unexceptable.
I don't what was the worst part: the overuse of profanity or how unreal it was.
I didn't even know that thestory was told from Hiccup's view until the call with Fishlegs, which was disgusting and repulsive. Even still, I doubted it because Hiccup is a softer-spoken character, not this brash, rude asshole you made him into.
It would also be nice if we knew more about these people. Who is Horrorcow? Who are the other students, who were never mentioned outside of the shower scene (which should have been elaborated on-you better go look that word up. I doubt you know what that means in elementary school). And chastity belts were a form of punishment. They can't be bought anymore, Twatzilla. Oh, I'm sorry, you fat cunt. You better go eat some ice cream and watch Mean Girls and cry about how much life fucking sucks.