Aperture Feedback
This was the photo I selected from the depth of field aperture task. I think the f/5.6 worked best as the small pumpkin in the front of the image is in good focus while the larger ones at the back are out of focus.
The feedback I received was that I could crop the image so it better fits into the rule of thirds composition.
This is the change I made to the photo. I think with the main pumpkin (front right) being on the bottom right crossection of the grid it helps for the viewers eyes to flow from the front to back of the photo more easily and it helps to cut out some of the fence and space in the background.














