Dude, keep track of your cats (Warriors)
Okay....I just want to get something off my chest for a moment.
I love the Warriors series as much as the next guy/girl/gentleperson/edgy adolescent, but hot damn when it comes to the inconsistencies.
I get it, Erin Hunter is a team of people. I get it, not everyone is going to be on the same page when it comes to how things should be. While one member of the team might claim that someone has a certain pelt color, eye color, you name it, another member might disagree or throw out a contradictory opinion. Which, in a general sense, I don’t feel the urge to spit on. It’s their series and they can do whatever they want with it.
However, I feel that this raises some problems. When you call into question even the most basic details, (or in some cases flat out forget), it can cause problems later down the line. Coat color or eye color is an identifier, it helps us tell who a cat is without flat out saying the cat’s name. It’s been used as a plot point before, even if just a minor one. Familial ties (yes, these have been confused, there was a whole issue with a page of one of the novels FORGETTING who Graystripe’s kits were), are important for more obvious reasons.
I would almost be able to excuse some of these things away if it weren’t for the fact that Warriors is HEAVILY character focused. You read the books for the cats involved, you have to be invested in the characters to really latch on to the story. So why do these same errors keep happening, if so much thought and care are clearly being put into these characters otherwise?
In all likelihood, the main reason could be the increase in number of characters. There’s an astronomical difference between the number of characters now vs Into the Wild. But then even that raises the question- why not (and yes, this is going to sound mean) get rid of more of the characters that don’t matter? (You don’t have to worry about Podlight if he’s dead!)
Literally killing that many characters off in a literal sense would probably be a bad idea. But figuratively? You could have some cats leave their respective clans due to extenuating circumstances and not return, shift characters around into, let’s face it, Thunderclan, that need more attention in terms of story and vice versa to the other Clans, OR EVEN (please forgive me if this is outdated, I’m only halfway into the second-newest arc) have the 5-Clan setup challenged altogether in favor of a new setup. It might not be a welcome change to start, but there are endless possibilities when breaking the previously thought “set in stone” rules of the Warriors universe.
All that to say, keep track of your characters. Just thinking off the cuff, a Google Doc might help. Share it with everyone on the team. Anyone on the team can edit, everyone can see it.
Smoothing out the details helps keep the story flowing without hitting snares. Readers need a clear, concise picture. Most people aren’t going to want to play the game of “are Crowfeather’s eyes blue or brown” because it’s frustrating and it doesn’t need to be a debatable topic.
This is all just constructive criticism. I wish Warriors could kick the bad habit of character details getting all mixed around. That’s all.