Congratulations to all four finalists! Great submissions all around--although I have to admit surprise at the results. I preferred runner-up Jason Carlin's
She hoped the stain would come out of the dress. A small part of her hoped it never would. #canadawrites
to winner Navin Vaswani's
He poured himself another scotch. He'd promised to stop drinking on weeknights, but the Leafs were playing. She'd understand. #canadawrites
which, I felt, was judged to be superior for its Canadianness rather than its literary merit or "storyness" (to borrow judge Todd Babiak's term). To his credit, however, Vaswani did write a great underlying conflict: He's alcoholism, She's broken trust, and the implicit dissolution of Their relationship as a result. It's all there, it just wasn't my favourite. I liked better the simplicity of Carlin's story, beautifully understated and achingly honest. Carlin's She is a character in flux, in contrast with Vaswani's He, up to his old tricks. I suppose it's a matter of accessibility: given my current slice of post-grad life, I relate more to the crossroads of Carlin's She, the push and pull of her past and non-past, the subtle yet nagging regret she battles; perhaps Vaswani's hockey-referencing He is more relatable to others. Folks, that's subjectivity for you!
Kudos to Babiak, anyhow, for he did select a deserving winner. I simply felt that there were many deserving winners. (Ah, the indecision. I will probably, wisely, never judge a literary competition.) And kudos to him especially for parsing through so many entries--1,340 separate stories! An absurdly high number, indeed. I do hope the CBC continues to organize literary contests of a similar nature; this Twitter Challenge has evinced the talent and enthusiasm of Canada's writers. The ones that use Twitter, anyway...
Incidentally, I submitted entries of my own. Merely on a whim, I wrote two stories as a fun exercise in concision, an experiment with negative space, and a deeper exploration of Basu's Twisters. I had no intention of competing seriously.
Intrigued? View them here and here.