This is such a ridiculous little nitpick but you take such great care with continuity and I’m always so impressed by it I thought you might want to know? In chapter 31 of TPTMB, second to last section, Sylvanas mentions that she wouldn’t dare introduce the concept of unionization to Steamwheedle because Gallywix would put Beverley in a shredder. It’s actually the Bilgewater Cartel that’s aligned with the Horde under him, though. In any case, I’m rereading this story for the third time and 1) only just registered this, 2) love all the foreshadowing and callbacks. Hope you’re still enjoying writing it - your readers are still enjoying it for sure!
Gosh dang it. Fixed!
Thank you <3 I am very much enjoying writing it.













