Apr 21
What do you all think of my writing style? I think I started out very sensory-focused in some ways and then became more introspective. I feel like chapters 8 and 7 might lean too heavily on flowery descriptions that can be overly repetitive, which is why I tried to refine my style in the little Papyrus/Paulo interlude by maintaining good (or good enough) prose while cutting out a few descriptive details and redundancies. I still struggle with overloading my writing with metaphors instead of properly "developing" them ufidkfk. I’d love to hear your thoughts; I feel like my writing has come a long way since I posted the first chapter back in November/December :').
shout-out to my homie @kolorace who has been my beta reader 😔