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“What a dear, you are Tenshi. Is this some kind of trick?”

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{I need criticism, so my URL?}

SEND A URL AND I WILL ANSWER THE FOLLOWING;

Do I Follow Them?: On your touhous, at least.

Why Did I Follow Them?: There weren’t many Tenshis, so I figured I’d take a look.

Do We Role Play?: A little.

Do I Want To Role Play With Them: Sure.

An AU Idea For Our Muses:

A Song For Our Muses:

Do I Ship Our Muses?: Not really at the moment, tbh. It’d need a lot more development.

What I Think About The Mun: I have mixed opinions, honestly. When you want to write seriously, you can do it well enough, but a lot of your blogs always seem to rely heavily on “I really like Dragon Ball and I will reference abridged a lot”. A lot of that was the big thing that turned me off to your Ruby (among a few other things), and frankly, you kinda come off as a bit abrasive OOC at times. You seem to have a pretty decent grasp on your characters, but a lot of them seem like they want to be ‘Trolls’, which doesn’t always make for interesting reading. Hell, Terumi/Hazama isn’t even really that interesting compared to the villains that rely less on trolling and more on being interesting. Now, I’m not saying I think your writing’s bad, I just think you have some stuff you need to think on and work over with a lot of your muses. I do like your Tenshi the most of your muses so far, and if you hone the blade a bit, I think you can really bring something fun to the table. Just try to think long and hard on a few other things you think could be unique of fun to try with her, and I’d be happy to help you playtest some things.

Overall Opinion: I think I kinda covered it all tbh.

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