Here we go again. Shorter this time. (shorter chapter too).
These kids are very well behaved for... well, kids. And there isn't any authority! Unless you count Ralph, Jack, and Simon.
They have some very interesting slang...
Were the kids being shipped off somewhere?
Snake beastie? I read that as bestie at first
Ralph really doesn't want there to be a beast
Can't decide whether I ship Ralph with Simon or Jack
Why they all gotta bully Piggy?
They started a fire that quickly? I've tried that before and only got smoke.
Poor Piggy!!
Also poor little boy who's missing. I liked that kid.
I’m trying a new thing. These are things I said to my friends while reading.
Let me know if this is something I should continue. (I mean I’m gonna do it for this entire book anyways, but I mean in the future.)
did the bird just talk?
oh wait it was a kid
poor boy, why ya gotta call him fat?
oh no hes getting happy about the no adults
i think hes gonna do something stupid
also whats this boy's name anyway
RALPH
the main character guy dude
what makes him so “fair”?
is he like... totally untanned or something or really pale?
i dont get it!!
i dont know whats happeninggggggggggggggg
“Then he leapt back on the terrace, pulled off his shirt, and stood there among the skull-like coconuts with green shadows from the palms and the forest sliding over his skin. He undid the snake-clasp of his belt, lugged off his shorts and pants, and stood there naked, looking at the dazzling beach and the water”
im drawing this
oh thats mean hes calling him Piggy
wait are they stranded and in desperate need of saving or are they swimming happily on the stranded island expecting help?
wait how did they get to the island...
ok so let me get this straight
the adults were blown up like KABOOM and then the children suddenly are on an island... i dont get it
i have a bad feeling about these 'men with the megaphones' that make kids obedient
My friend:
oohhh OH I GET IT FINALLY AFTER READING IT 4 TIMES THE SCAR IS THE MARK MADE BY THE PLANE WHEN IT CRASHED IN THE JUNGLE
The rest of us: OHHHHHHHHH
whats this... Merridew character
Friend: uhhhh, you'll see. hes like a baby politican
ooh Simon I like characters named Simon
I LIKE THIS SIMON GUY ALREADY
“When they had done laughing, Simon stroked Ralph’s arm shyly; and they had to laugh again.” wait what.
... i ship it.
these kids are just fooling around, not really exploring
“Heave!” HO! HUP TWO THREE FOUR ONWARD!
why'd they push the rock over
wow man you can't just declare an island to be yours
you go on a hike and suddenly youre friends
they didnt kill the pig
why didnt they kill the pig
is this evidence of innocence?
they were scared of killing the pig
so they didn't kill the pig
gosh now my commentary is going to have a whole paragraph about the pig
the pig!
the pig caught in something or other
