Mar 4, 2021
The original lead missed the “why” of a lead. With the topic, other information, such as place, time, or date may not be necessary to be presented but the reason for why Galvez was unsure was not present in the lead. I still wrote the lead almost similar to the original, but I removed unnecessary words and sufficed the missing information that I mentioned earlier.
Read the original news article here: https://mb.com.ph/2021/03/03/galvez-unsure-about-march-4-arrival-of-astrazeneca-vaccines/