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New chapter on Thursday

Even if I am still not happy with the chapter, I will be posting Chapter 11 on Thursday.

I'm splitting this stupid tourney onto 3 parts with chapter 12 almost done, minus editing the hell out of it.

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I can now see why GRMM is so slow writing tWoW

Write a wedding chapter! With a tourney, I said. It will be fun, I said. I'm not even at the tourney starting, and this chapter is already 7 pages long.

Writing for characters that are smart, charismatic, and manipulative is not easy when you're a socially awkward dumbass who spent their 20s partying and making poor decisions lol.

The other 3 pages are notes on who is completing, whose gunna unhorses who, along with the other stuff I want to happen during the wedding.

Update: We're at 20 pages. This is getting split into two chapters.

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Just in case people are following me for updates on Coming Face-to-Face with Your Sleep Paralysis Demons

I got a good portion of the chapter written, and when I went to re-read the dialogue, I hated it. It was written from Aella's POV and didn't really portray her having a high charisma stat/the dialogue felt flat and Mary Sue-esque.

So I scrapped the chapter, deciding Aemond's edgelord POV is easier to write for. Praise the edgelord!