#chrysdha

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well you still have to do that, it's just easier to mash the pinky into place

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gotcha. i’m doing grammatical checks as requested

sweet!

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chrysdha replied to your post: aaaand… forgoing the childhood scene so i am done

kelcey…… is your story a homestuck story?

technically no, i just used homestuck names

the characters generally don't act like mine do

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focus on finishing the story, THEN the awesome badass cover. and you should show me the badass cover too.

if i make a badass cover, i'll definitely show you

i'll probs show everyone, tbh

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jeth. sendme.

i will as soon as i'm done. i've still got a scene or two left to write

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turninggears replied to your post: and this is the scene in which i demonstrate that...

but these posts are so enjoyable and make people more interested in reading :P

haha, i'm glad you think so

turninggears replied to your post: phrase that is in this story: “newsflash, plants...

I assume someone was being a sassmaster.

yes, of course. no story is complete without someone being a sassmaster.

turninggears replied to your post: so if i acknowledge that there is a stealth pun...

don’t explain it!

but then i would feel like i was acting all superior to me readers, like "there's definitely a joke here, and you're missing it" since not many people are familiar enough with weapons to recognize that the knife she has is actually a dirk?

turninggears replied to your post: okay really why is it “better” to describe...

idek. writing rules are dumb.

tru dat

turninggears replied to your post: phrases that are sadly not going into the final...

you could have the character say “wait, that’s not it.” and then say something else that better conveys. I’m not sorry for replying to almost every post.

well, no, 'cause it still makes perfect sense, it's just a super weird thing to say. plus what i have written now means exactly the same thing, minus the metaphor. i think i'll just put it in and have jade give him a weird look.

also i am rather happy about you replying to basically all of these. i assumed no one would even read them

chrysdha replied to your post: and this is the scene in which i demonstrate that...

is this the one about jade? i read that last night when i was coming unhinged about finals

yes indeedy. you want to read this draft when i'm done? it makes a lot more sense, i'm pretty sure

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NO SEND IT TO ME

incoming

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i should be trying to finish a novel so i can claim my nano reward and print 5 paperback copies… short story sounds fantastic as well.

yes, that is a good plan

wait, did you read the first draft of my story or not? i forget who all i sent it to