After refining the feedback we received before we wanted a last opinion from CHS to show them we appreciated working with them and for the fun opportunity of working on a live brief.
The feedback we received:
• I love the change in your strapline. It’s allowed you to keep the more unique pink palette – and I think the new line works better with your brand name. Great work.
• I can also see that you’ve really pulled through the benefits in your launch comms – so again, great work!
My one comment would be on slide 4 – your messaging looks teeny tiny, especially if it was on a phone screen. Make sure you’re saying as little as possible, and that your messaging always has an impact.

















