@jadesabre301 replied to your post: “so I’ve been tagged a couple times in that “last sentence of your WIP,...”
SOLIDARITY
that is how all my sentences look like
although I do find it interesting to see yours looking like that because I associate you with a much more broken-up style. Like, your style gets stuck in my head.
ha
fun fact, all my sentences are either 80 works long with 15 commas or they are three words, and in both cases they are probably paragraphs all on their own. There is frequently no in-between.
It also depends a lot on POV character, like. Aveline is very abrupt, Theia is less so, obviously. Sebastian and Adelaide mostly only wax endlessly about each other but not anything else and Erana and Blackwall are both surprisingly poetic. I haven’t quite figured out Solas yet, it’s why in all the WIPs I’m mostly writing about him from Erana or Blackwall’s POV. (And while I figured out Maia Ryder, I cannot get a handle on ANYONE else in ME:A so.) Someday I may actually finish a fic again? But maybe not a BioWare fic? IDK.
I still want to write a Spirit Monk/Sagacious Zu fic for you, but it seems unlikely.
(I also occasionally stare at the Scarecrow and Mrs King epilogue notes I’ve written and am caught between intense 30yo shipping feels and a *handwave* of despair ‘cause who the fuck besides me wants to read that?)
anyways
#writing is the weirdest hobby?
@phdfan replied to your post: “so I’ve been tagged a couple times in that “last sentence of your WIP,...”
I kind of love that sentence as is!
thank you! I do enjoy my excessive paragraph sentences immensely, even if they are usually less atrocious on the final pass :D
@cmdrfenris replied to your post: “you knowI always feel like crap after I get a flu shot it’s never...”
I get ill for several weeks after taking the flu shot, with flu like symptoms. One of the draw-backs of autoimmune disease. Have the have the vaccination that makes me ill to stop me from getting even more ill.
ugh. so ugh. (Though that is obviously part of why I get mine, because I can. *hugs*)
@servantofclio replied to your post: “you knowI always feel like crap after I get a flu shot it’s never...”
Mine was okay at first but then ached a few days afterward. Sigh. I'm sorry you're feeling crappy! <3
Why thank you. <3 (IT was mostly shark-week this time, so I am feeling much better now.)
@teaandinanity replied to your post: “So I’m thinking of writing a Malec Persuasion AU for NaNo this year...”
I am not in this fandom but YES ALL THE PERSUASION AUS!!!
PERSUASION MAKES EVERY BETTER
:D
