Cold Pain
Author: Aramandria
Summary: (summary for this fic is just an excerpt for the fic)
Luke took a deep breath, “How are you doing Alec?”
He nodded but kept his gaze out of the window, “I’m good. A few aches here and there but the doctor has given me the green light and Jace and I have been training together again. I’m pretty much there”. He turned back to Luke and saw his raised eyebrow.
“That’s great, I’m glad you’re healing physically. I have to admit that wasn’t something I was particularly concerned with, you’re too damn stubborn to let that beat you”. He breathed in loudly through is nose. “I was more concerned with your mental health…”.
My Rating: 2.5/3
Thoughts: i want to give this a 3/3 but there is just a few *tiny* things i don’t like so i can’t quite give it to this fic...
i really enjoyed this fic but if you watched Shadowhunters i promise you will spend the ENTIRE fic wondering is Sebastian is a good guy or a bad guy... (no spoilers so thats all i’ll say except that i honestly went back and forth the entire time until the exact moment the bad guy was revealed)
the only things i’d change is the fic starts out focusing more on Alec’s mental health and the angst related to it (which i love) but as the story goes on and especially as the story reaches the climax suddenly there isn’t much of that anymore (specifically i’m calling out the fact that Alec is injured pretty badly but he just kinda keeps going without much comment)
and just one more thing that bothers me is the epilogue. generally i like the epilogue to wrap things up for the story but this one just pushes that you have to read the sequel (which i will read when it finishes but it makes me a little mad because the story doesn’t wrap up it leaves it on a cliff hanger)
still a good fic and i’ll be reading it again






