Hypotheses for why any given fantasy kingdom is a monarchy
Brought to you by a conversation I was having with @elucubrare and also by me currently reading Ann Leckie’s Radiant Star, which is not fantasy, but AL has always got me when I need political complexity. Is the Radch a monarchy? That’s an etymologically loaded question. But the Republic of Two Systems certainly isn’t.
Theories I consider when there is kings:
The author is an actual monarchist. Are you literally Tolkien? If not, I have a weird sticker to sell you.
The author is not really that interested in their world’s political system and kingship just feels like the default, unmarked case for the genre. They are probably not wrong about that. But why is it the unmarked case? And why not make something of your world’s political system? Or if you truly just need a vaguely powerful figure to send your heroes on quests why not at least call them the Consul or the President of the Council or something? Well, possibly because…
The author thinks it feels more historical. Subtypes: The author thinks the only options for political systems are Stereotypical Medieval Europe or Contemporary American Democracy, in which case read more history, and The author is specifically modeling their world after a specific historical kingdom, in which case I hope you are portraying all its problems too. If you are doing medieval England for instance you do not have an absolute monarch, you have one afflicted with Barons. So many barons. If you do not have barons in rebellion every five seconds you are not doing medieval England. So in this case also read more history. It is full of fun plot material.
The author does not want to create like 50 different government characters instead of 1 all-powerful king. I do kinda sympathize with this if your main characters are not interacting with the government very much. But you could also just have them talk to one government spokesperson for narrative convenience. The Minister for Dragons or whatever. On the other hand, if your main characters are deeply involved in government, then possibly…
The author wants the problems of the realm to be caused by and/or solvable by one single person. Narratively attractive but unrealistic. I wish things worked like this. Related/possibly overlapping:
The author is not sure how to write government by collaboration, compromise, or consent; autocracy, or even palace intrigue, is easier. It’s complicated. What do politicians talk about? How do they get things done? Do they ever? In our world, they often don’t. But can’t fiction give us the opportunity to think through alternatives? I say this as someone who can’t really write committees or debates or palace intrigue. But I like all of them as a reader. Not just palace intrigue around an autocrat. I see the appeal of that: you are a writer, you are good at making characters matter, the king’s character matters. But I have faith in you, writer. I have faith that you can write characters who matter without any one of them having to be The Character Who Matters.
The author thinks kings are glamorous. I have basically no respect for this but also I am clearly not the target audience. Things are allowed to not interest me. Next.
The king is the bad guy and we are doing a Rebellion. Hurrah! What are we rebelling for? I know what we’re rebelling against. Yes it is very oppressive. What are we rebelling for? We have a goal right? Even if it’s just “bread.” What are we going to put in place when we win? The characters may not have thought that far (rebels often don’t - but sometimes they do - or gather around an existing alternative institution like Parliament in the English Civil War) but surely you the author have? Right?
I am not saying that all fantasy monarchies are bad or badly written and I am not saying that no fantasy novels have interesting alternative political systems. I’m just saying I think it should be an intentional choice what political systems you’re depicting, not a choice by default. And so as a reader I think about these choices, sometimes more than the author seemed to. And those are some of the things I think.















