#constructive criticism welcomed

[zhou-bot-a]

Morning Wine: MalSlash Saga comic

[fairytalesteff]

Sir, you weren't standing here - a translation

Poem by Stanisław Barańczak

Sir, you weren't standing here, I'm just saying, that you have never stood behind our walls, and you have not stood in our position, not to mention that you have never stood at our head, sir, you weren't standing here, we can't stand for you to stand here both feet on our earth, it stands open before you, and for what, sir, you stand on the side of our common grave, sir, there's the edge, you can't stay here, don't fight, sir, just stand blushing at the end of the line, at the end there'll be a place for you.

[wholesome-edits]

🌈😳 A little something for boys, girls, and everything in between 😳🌈

💗 Reblogs and Reposts encouraged!! 💗

😊😌 I tried my best to come up with something for all you lovely folk who are in between, whether it be agender, bigender, genderqueer, etc. You're all valid no matter what people tell you and if you would like an edit with a more specific term or pickup line please don't forget that my requests are open!! 😌😊

[aceduchessdragoness]

The stars stare at us

What wonders lie on the Earth?

We stare back at them

[secretpanromantic1945]

Would you be interested in reading these books?

Just some ideas I’ve had for a while. Some are fully described but others have much more descriptive notes elsewhere which I will share in the comments if anyone actually wants to know

Secrets of the Rosehearts- Murder Mystery focused on a family with some serious issues  ( See other note)

Savior of the Light + Queen of the Light- Intense sibling rivalry that ends with one killing another :[ ( see other note)

Marcy Rowanwood (no official title yet)- outsiders but with witches!! (See other note)

President’s Daughter Normal girl is told that she’s adopted!!! Her mom’s the newly inaugurated president.

Elliot ( no official title yet)- staring a gender-fluid icon who ran away from home at a young age due to incredibly controlling parents -Identity gets leaked after a student at her school notices how alike they look to a famous teen actor/model       - Identical Twin sister Sophie -Parents drag Elliot back into their lives and they’re forced alongside his twin sister into going to a prep school and modeling blah blah blah         -Elliot is a true crime nut and adores mysteries so when her sister, that she’s reluctantly starting to love again, goes missing , and her control freak parents won’t tell anybody for fear of bad publicity it’s up to her and her new found ‘friends’ to find her.                                          - Maybe a series with more hijinks in the future 

Ghost Girls -Girl who can see ghosts while holding one of their possessions (A).                                                       - Girl who was murdered but was passed off as a suicide (B), work together to find the killer. (LESBIANS???).                                      -A can see B without holding a belonging for some reason.          - Turns out in the very end or smth that B isn’t actually dead just in a comatose state or smt

ALSO THESE WERE JUST IN MY NOTES APP SO THEY ARENT ALL THOUGHT OUT

[wheremyfitnessis]

Stats:

30 yr old Male

Current weight :370

Height: 6’1 or 6’2

Shirt size: 3xlt

Waist size: 46-48

Low: Vitamin D, WBC

High: Glucose,ALT (SGPT),LDL chol calc, A1C

Goals

Lose fat and gain muscle

Target weight :250-280

Learn to have a better relationship with food

Flexibility

Repair previous back injury ?!???

Pant size: 40-42

Shirt size : 2xlt (loosely fitting)

Learn portion control

Raise Vitamin D via supplements and food intake

Raise WBC via intake of folate rich foods

Lower blood sugar, cholesterol, and improve ALT via diet changes

Actions:

Gain and maintain a gym/workout/activity routine (starting with at least 3 active days a week)

Meal prep to assist with knowing what is going into my body

Develop a more mental positive body image

Learn to give myself constructive critiques

Develop a better sleep schedule!!!!

Drink more water

[icedmatchatae]

love your work but it is not poc friendly at alll😭

I’m crying that you say this because I too am POC 😩😩 I wasn’t aware…maybe my perspective is different. I do know that I try to make OC’s physical appearance as vague as possible so it is up to the reader but maybe I didn’t execute that well.

Please let me know how I can improve on my writing to make it more inclusive and what makes it not POC friendly. I’m open to getting ideas and help! I don’t have anyone else to run this by, other than my friends lol Thank you for letting me know! I’ll be more conscious.