So it’s one chapter away from the last one for “Cracked Reflections” and I caught up with what you have posted.
And being true to the way I comment, I’m sending you this.
In my last ask about this series I had mentioned that Jay’s life had crumbled in front of him and he had found himself being at the bottom of the fame stairs struggling to climb back up. I’m gonna kinda pick up from that point now.
I loved how through his pain and his misfortune he managed to find the true meaning of life, the life he hadn’t experienced since he shared that first bike ride with Jar, shared his possession without waiting for anything in return and looked over the fact that little Jared had no material things to offer apart from his pure friendship.
How through Y/N’s persistence and effort and ultimately love he came to realize that there are so much more than looks and money and just looking good and pretty and happy for people who won’t be there for you the minute you make the wrong choice. The whole scene at the hospital with Tony was really so moving and real and put into perspective exactly what y/n told him about having to choose if he wanted to be left on the floor to be kicked or stand up and fight.
Their first kiss, so sweet and gentle and romantic even if they were both afraid to really admit to each other what they felt ironically both for the same reasons. Because they both believed that the other person wouldn’t like them. Jay because of his scars and y/n because she was always made to believe that she was fat and ugly.
I quietly cheered when he ditched the interview and went to her house, I cheered a little louder when he invited her to choose happiness with him and I can’t wait for the final chapter that hopefully will give them both the reality check they need and their chance at happiness.
Once again, congrats of this wonderful story which is completely different. 😘
I'm so so so late replying to this, beautiful Zee. I'm sorry!
But thank you SOOOOO much, your long asks of feedback are just rocket fuel! I'm so happy you adored CR. Like, I always feel like I should reply with something equally as long, but I'm just always so lost for words when someone comes in and gives me some really raw, detailed feedback. Like it just feeds my heart and soul and I'm just reading it like YES YOU GET IT! THANK YOU THANK YOU!
But then I reply and I'm like... urm... thanks 🙃 I am the epitome of awkward. Like... please give me this validation I crave so much in order to continue providing content, but then I get it and I'm like "aw thanks" and just feel uncomfortable and embarrassed about said validation. Is that just me?
Either way, Zee, I love you and your long messages of feedback. Thank you, I appreciate the hell out of you ❤️